- Jul 2, 2017
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Someones says game really bad so I want asking why we are talking about that game around 270 pages
First @Lust&Passion is not a lazy creator he or she is very hardworking, he can make too many money with a cheap porn game you know sophia can easily cheat her husband or foursome with sam dylan and dau and he can make very big money with this but he is a stargazer he do what he think, i respect him i hate blue color at my balls but we must wait for his decision. sorry for my english
First @Lust&Passion is not a lazy creator he or she is very hardworking, he can make too many money with a cheap porn game you know sophia can easily cheat her husband or foursome with sam dylan and dau and he can make very big money with this but he is a stargazer he do what he think, i respect him i hate blue color at my balls but we must wait for his decision. sorry for my english
- Jun 13, 2018
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A far as I can remember developer stated somewhere that first explicit sex scene between Sophia and other man than her husband appears around 16 game day. If thats true and I am not wrong, its far ahead of now, at least ten updates ahead. Lie ahead for many moaning about lack of sex scenes. But on the other hand, it is strong point for developer, that he honestly presents plan for the game. If we know it, here and on Patreon site, than what is the point for complaining? Im satisfied with that pacing of development if I know there will be planty of sex scenes. Except that in the second half of the game, nothing wrong.
- Jul 2, 2017
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I'm agree with you. People come here like the dev is cheating on they. But
Isn't really like that. The game has 30 days planned, but doesn't mean that there will be 30 updates. Some days will be skipped.
That scares me to be honest, well not in like bohoo-scares me, but with 30 Days, i see all this wonderful characters that she is bonding with that potentially could be great sexscenes and soon we are halfway and she hasnt had sex once , not even her husband, excebt a bj. So there is not many Days left (17?) for her to have sex on. She keeps on squibling away and nothing happens, so will Everything happen the last 5 Days, will she fuck everybody in thoose Days. Moving guys, postman, old guys, 10 different women, muggers, son and daughter, sister and sisters man, teacher and maybe even her husband. can you say rushed?
To create that and call it realistic, i dont know...
- Jul 2, 2017
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Take it or leave it, no one obliges.
- Aug 6, 2017
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That game makes realy fun and have a awsome looking mom 
that you are steering. It´s famous that gives you a game where are the hot mom and take you chances, not that it always do the son/sister/both (im not complaining :angel. Can´t wait to see more of that beauties. Thx penedeyewink:
that you are steering. It´s famous that gives you a game where are the hot mom and take you chances, not that it always do the son/sister/both (im not complaining :angel. Can´t wait to see more of that beauties. Thx penedeyewink:
- May 28, 2017
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Definitely. Not necessarily have to be a bad person, but can simply be a bad husband in a way that he didn't do what a husband is supposed to. Think about what's a good wife is like, then that should be what a good husband is like. Same with bad wife and bad husband. Bad wife can be about ignoring the husband, ignoring the kids, etc.
But what we have here is the husband being pretty much ignorant to the wife, which means there's no actual benefit of being a good wife to such husband. And worse, even if you be a bad wife, the husband stayed the same one dimensional husband that is not affected by how you reacted as a the wife.
It's unfortunately the trend in the game. The one person (husband) that is supposed to be nice to her is being no good. The other people (non-husband male characters) that are supposed to be good to her are all jerks. The one path that seemed to be rewarding is lesbianism where the female characters are actually nice to her.
I don't know if that kind of thing is just the fantasy of the dev, but the characters seem to fall into stereotypes that it doesn't feel too realistic.
Exactly. For a game that is this large so far, it's very disappointing that there is no plot existing.
But what exactly is the plot? You said it's a masterpiece before, now you said it develops perfectly. But you haven't actually been able to explain what the plot actually is. Please explain what the plot is and why it develops perfectly and is such a masterpiece.
If someone asked what the plot of Harry Potter is, the answer is not simply "well it's about Harry" though a boy named Harry is indeed the main character. There are things happening around him, there is a plot going on, and that Harry is simply the character within the plot that the main story revolves around.
On the other hand, there is no actual plot going on in this game other than just being Sophia. Yes, there are things happening to other characters, yes there are things happening to Sophia herself, but there is nothing that ties them around together to be called a plot. It's simply individual mini stories that don't really go anywhere, and not really connected to one another either. They exist simply so the game has content. That's why plot-wise, it's pretty much like a Kardashian reality show where it's simply about things happening to Kardashians without necessarily having a plot/narrative to the story. To me, that is not a masterpiece.
- May 28, 2017
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This thread is like
And we're the guy in the middle
And we're the guy in the middle
- Feb 17, 2018
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I'll usually wait three or four pages worth and just skim the first couple of lines. If it reads like deja vu - on either side - I just keep skipping.
Really, I think anything original from the peanut gallery (of which I am an original member) has just about been used up by now.
Really, I think anything original from the peanut gallery (of which I am an original member) has just about been used up by now.
for what ever reason, I don't have the scene on the train. She just gets on the bus and goes home what do I need to do to get that scene
I actually find the teacher character and path to be more exciting and believable than either of the suggestions above.
in update 0.4 you have to chose other choise , when sophia go to by some mexican food out from school
- Jun 18, 2017
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Yeah, and the guy in the middle not moving is me, the one that don't give a shitThis thread is like
And we're the guy in the middle
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Let me explain what I meant: they've not gone much beyond their stock personality types, only the daughter got some insight in the scene with her friend this go around. That was the only good scene in the update, because I learned a little something about her. The rest was just filler, you don't learn anything from someone's shirt tearing open AGAIN. That's great that you have plans to go deeper, I wish you the best on that. I really do. But good storytelling is about using your time efficiently.
Putting in so many filler scenes really buries the good moments. Remember your readers are probably playing a lot of games and can't remember the details as well as the person making it. So you want to make sure the scenes you put in there are worthwhile and memorable so they stick with people. Another dumb scene with accidental dick touching doesn't do that, blurs with a million other games. And it seems to be your aim to do something different, right?
The game is very large in file size too, might be a good reason to keep all that hard work on renders on scenes that are important and not the accidental touching scenes. You do excellent work on your renders, I'd hate to see the quality downgraded for space reasons.
- May 28, 2017
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I never said that even once at all in any of my post.
You're completely missing the point, and what you said here actually supported what @Yggalf mentioned as a problem of the writing. You're writing A LOT of side-stories that are pretty much individual and disconnected from one another because there is no main plot.
What I meant with "nothing happened at all" is in relation to the main plot. All of those 7 things you listed did not bring any advancement to the main plot because even after all these updates, there was still no main plot happening.
Thank you, and this is why your game is more like a Kardashian reality show where the camera simply follows the person and see what happens in their life without necessarily having any narrative. Reality shows have a bunch of episodes but no singular overarching storyline from beginning to the end. That's why I disagree with someone who said your plot is a masterpiece. The game is simply "be Sophia", and that is not a plot. It's just content.
Think about it this way, you're making a soup. So far, what you've done is you've cut 25 different vegetables. What you haven't done is making sure that all those 25 vegetables are actually needed to make a delicious soup. And what you're doing next is most likely cutting up 7 more different vegetables. You just keep on adding more and more ingredients. It doesn't mean you'd make a delicious soup.
EDIT: Note that this doesn't mean your game is shit. It just means that there is no plot, and things could've been presented in a much better way if the writing is improved.
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You have even the author of the game explained everything. Enough of subjective and unreasonable criticism. The game is gorgeous. It is beautiful all the models, conversations, dialogues, plot. Smooth, unhurried development of the plot - this is the strength of the game, not a flaw. The absence of stupid porn scenes at the beginning of the game is good, not bad. If you do not like it, this game is not for you. Play in stereotyped, stupid porn.
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And once again you praised the plot without ever able to explain what the plot is. It's amazing how one can enjoy something that one doesn't even know what it is.
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