WOW Very very impressive art in this game.
So much locations, so much characters, vehicules, outdoor scenes... High quality renders.
I understand that the developper do not want to rush on sex scenes, want to build characters stories etc. but in an erotic VN, you have to keep the interest of the player/viewer. So, you have to give something in the process of the story development, like dreams for examples. The main caracter is married, so at least give something with the husband or maybe a masturbation scene to show the sexual frustration of the main character that will lead her to cheating.
Because now, and it's a pity, as the rendres are trully exceptionals, there is no true erotism.
For the story itself, the way of telling it is quite strange. I must admit there IS a lot of content in the story, but the way to develop it is not very attractive. It seems like a "catalogue", not a story telling. There is too much to integrate that the immersion is not good.
There is too much background in the story. I think that the best way, is to gradually introduce this in the process of the story.
it seems that this VN tells "look at me, look at how much i can do". It will gain a lot by limiting the number of characters, at least at the beginning, or developp only a few number of them, to increase immerssion because now it is too complex. You cannot integrate so much informations. I understand that in this "demo" the dev want to show all the "paths/arcs" that he has in mind, but if he continue this VN the way of telling and developping the story have to be re-thought.
Finally, it is very promising. It is really a new step in the art quality and story depth of this kind of game/vn. Congratulations sincerely
(and if the dev sees this post, he can contact me, as it seems that is he is french, like me)