ok, whats wrong with truck drivers ?bar of bikers and truck drivers, worse than I thought
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You know too much...Could Killjoys be a bot account created by you to fool people into thinking you're really Killjoys while GingerSweetGirl is really a separate spy account for L&P's second in command Nexer who really is a Bane71 dupe account?
Yep. Like Father Like Son. I think hes a little Douche. I bet Dylan gets to Amber before Sam gets to Sophia. NVM. He already has.
- Aug 23, 2020
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And this is why it's challenging to have LIs who are still teenagers- this scenario strains believability. A biker bar is not going to hire a high school garage band. There's just so much about this that doesn't work. It's like a silly 80s movie without the charm.
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Yup, ergo my previous post on this. If this is not disinformation, than it looks like the writing aspect, the story telling aspect is about to take another huge hit. Believability is heading for the crapper. If this is the actual bar the stress over the dress will seem like a light mist vice a Cat 5 hurricane rolling in if this is the bar. I can see it being the straw for many.
I hope this is just the bar in the background and the actual bar is not yet revealed. Most beach entertainment districts have a series of bars, comedy shops, cafes etc. And many share the parking spaces. Here is hoping. It is a small hope but,....
man you aren't whistling dixie, if thats the bar, it WOULD be a mess for her
- Feb 14, 2018
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There's an alternative possibility here: Sam's band is actually quite good and has already played shows around town. Bars will book bands that bring a crowd, regardless of age. When he invited Sophia he may have been being modest or even using false modesty. It's not likely but it is a possibility.
- Sep 23, 2020
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How I feel it might happen is if one of the boys from the band has a connection to or is a relative of someone who runs the bar or works there. A recommendation could have been made and they were asked to play Infront of the owner, he liked it and they were allowed to perform. It also depends on how big and reputed the bar is or if it's a new bar that's opened. A new bar or one with low reputation won't get really good performers ( unless ofcourse they can pay good money ) so an amateur band is what they settled for.
We'll have to wait till the scene, maybe he does give that explanation. Which I believe he should.
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L&P will absolutely give a painstakingly detailed explanation of how the band got the gig so we know that the scenario is totally realistic and we shouldn't question its plausibility at all.
- Aug 23, 2020
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Sure, it's possible. But again, having teenage LIs just makes things needlessly complicated. I know that it's a popular kink, but when the age difference is as great as it is here, it gets really hard to maintain realism. If Sam had been 24, still much younger than Sophia, I think it would have made for a much more believable scenario.
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Sometimes I feel bad for him
He always is left with no choice but to explain. People always raise questions on how is it a believable scene, so the poor guy has to give a proper explanation.In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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It's the nature of the beast. He wanted to create a game that was smarter, more realistic, than the average porn game. In doing so though he cultivated a fanbase that has higher expectations. There are many games that are sloppy and poorly written, but because they make no effort to be something they aren't I can brush it aside. But when games try to be more sophisticated than a typical porn game, expectations rise accordingly. This is where L&P gets into trouble, I think he has a good sense of the broad strokes of the story but he sometimes struggles with details and creating the story's connective tissue.Sometimes I feel bad for him
In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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When you read the synopsis for his Novel, It's hard not to ask questions about realism and realistic. He puts these words in almost every part of his description. So it's natural that readers are going to have questions.Sometimes I feel bad for him
In this scenario an explanation is due. Since Sam's band isn't a big band how did they manage to get in a performance, there has to be some explanation. We always have lots of dialogue, he can easily fit it in. I would say it's a better use of dialogue than 20 lines of Sam thinking how hot Sophia and Patricia are.
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So yes, there are going to be some things he will need to explain. It could be a simple post on his patreon page or a narrtive line in the novel.
- Apr 21, 2020
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It looks like the evening will be far from romantic.
A rock bar by the beach and a biker bar in urban areas near the beach, you will agree, this is not the same thing.
The appearance of this truck and the general situation at the bike bar, for reasons I don't understand, I don't like at all.
Perhaps the contrast caused unpleasant feelings?! A bright, rosy, positive picture of how two ladies are ready to go to a concert:
and quite a sad, I would even say a gloomy picture next to a biker bar:
L&P as always presents surprises!
I'm just wondering if anyone besides me has any unpleasant feelings about the biker bar?
Probably unpleasant feelings appeared due to the fact that the relationship between Sam and Sofia developed in a romantic, soft, some kind of light, gentle erotic way. Holding an event in a biker bar leads to other associations, completely opposite!
I don't even know what to say?
A very wide range of events is possible, from everything went great, to how Sam and the guys from his group will witness how bikers and truck drivers will pinch Sofia and Patricia and grope them in full view of young guys who will not be able to help the ladies.
L&P claimed that there will be no violence in the game, so I still hope for a better outcome of the event in the biker bar.
But there is another reason that makes you worry! After all, we have already seen Aiden on the bike today! To somehow mix Sam and Aiden's route, L&P can bring Aiden to the same bar.
Will Aiden be in this bar or not?
If we saw an institution on the beach at sunset, there would be no excitement, but just a desire to get an update as soon as possible. But in this case, you start to worry and worry about your favorite characters, think about what will happen to them, will everything be all right?
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Let's not hit the panic button. To be fair, I've spent many evenings in dingy loud bars and rarely had a problem. Sophia and Patricia aren't delicate little flowers, so I hope they aren't intimidated just because they're going to a dive bar. Sophia will definitely stand out, and that would make me uncomfortable too, but let's not act as though it's weird for women to go to dive bars.It looks like the evening will be far from romantic.
A rock bar by the beach and a biker bar in urban areas near the beach, you will agree, this is not the same thing.
The appearance of this truck and the general situation at the bike bar, for reasons I don't understand, I don't like at all.
Perhaps the contrast caused unpleasant feelings?! A bright, rosy, positive picture of how two ladies are ready to go to a concert:
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and quite a sad, I would even say a gloomy picture next to a biker bar:
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L&P as always presents surprises!
I'm just wondering if anyone besides me has any unpleasant feelings about the biker bar?
Probably unpleasant feelings appeared due to the fact that the relationship between Sam and Sofia developed in a romantic, soft, some kind of light, gentle erotic way. Holding an event in a biker bar leads to other associations, completely opposite!
I don't even know what to say?
A very wide range of events is possible, from everything went great, to how Sam and the guys from his group will witness how bikers and truck drivers will pinch Sofia and Patricia and grope them in full view of young guys who will not be able to help the ladies.
L&P claimed that there will be no violence in the game, so I still hope for a better outcome of the event in the biker bar.
But there is another reason that makes you worry! After all, we have already seen Aiden on the bike today! To somehow mix Sam and Aiden's route, L&P can bring Aiden to the same bar.
Will Aiden be in this bar or not?
If we saw an institution on the beach at sunset, there would be no excitement, but just a desire to get an update as soon as possible. But in this case, you start to worry and worry about your favorite characters, think about what will happen to them, will everything be all right?
Ivan and movers are in the bar. jajaja
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First Dylan needs to get a girl. And if it's Marie, Aiden would still need to meet her. And since she's a college girl, she's not going to care as much about how much influence he has at school.When will Aiden steal Dylan's girl?
So Aiden's chances are slim at best. Besides, Aiden has Jennifer anyway.
- Apr 23, 2017
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But you also said there could be a second part to this, which will most likely occur outside of this Biker Bar and will most likely be set up in another location. So this could be a ride home, a walk somewhere, parking on a hill looking at the moon and stars (a little corny for me.)It looks like the evening will be far from romantic.
A rock bar by the beach and a biker bar in urban areas near the beach, you will agree, this is not the same thing.
The appearance of this truck and the general situation at the bike bar, for reasons I don't understand, I don't like at all.
Perhaps the contrast caused unpleasant feelings?! A bright, rosy, positive picture of how two ladies are ready to go to a concert:
View attachment 1378591
and quite a sad, I would even say a gloomy picture next to a biker bar:
View attachment 1378595
L&P as always presents surprises!
I'm just wondering if anyone besides me has any unpleasant feelings about the biker bar?
Probably unpleasant feelings appeared due to the fact that the relationship between Sam and Sofia developed in a romantic, soft, some kind of light, gentle erotic way. Holding an event in a biker bar leads to other associations, completely opposite!
I don't even know what to say?
A very wide range of events is possible, from everything went great, to how Sam and the guys from his group will witness how bikers and truck drivers will pinch Sofia and Patricia and grope them in full view of young guys who will not be able to help the ladies.
L&P claimed that there will be no violence in the game, so I still hope for a better outcome of the event in the biker bar.
But there is another reason that makes you worry! After all, we have already seen Aiden on the bike today! To somehow mix Sam and Aiden's route, L&P can bring Aiden to the same bar.
Will Aiden be in this bar or not?
If we saw an institution on the beach at sunset, there would be no excitement, but just a desire to get an update as soon as possible. But in this case, you start to worry and worry about your favorite characters, think about what will happen to them, will everything be all right?
Also, this scene may advance Sophia's Filthy Points like the one in the club with Patricia and Ellie. So there are some possibilities here.
- Apr 21, 2020
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You are absolutely right, my friend! My excitement turned off my mind, so I didn't realize, thank you, I think you pointed the right way.