- Apr 23, 2017
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I agree with you about the story written with a soul for Sophia/Ellie, but Sophia/Dylan written for the fans? Which fans because I would like to meet them... I'm a fan, and I can tell you that most of the plot with Sophia/Dylan angers me as some make no sense whatsoever, even from the fictional point. Like most people, I try to guess the upcoming plot based on what I know, but I'm not 100% correct.Because the Ellie/Sophia storyline (like any other lesbian story) comes from the heart of the dev and is written with a soul. LP really has a talent for such stories.
But Dylan's story seems to be being written for the fans, since it was originally planned with completely different content.
I miss Ellie
And that's a little unfair to the other storylines. But cash always wins.
So I would definitely like to hear from L&P and find out what examples the fans are sending him. I know the perverted, spying, begging, etc... is something I didn't want to see in the novel for the first 11 P.D.s only have him flip the switch on the 12th P.D. He was having a mature conversation with Sophia as Ellie has in the shower with Sophia. Plus, I thought he might use the "sneak eyes" training on Aiden since that was the catalyst that started the training but nope, that training was used on the drunk hobo to help facilitate the "cracking of the ice" for Sophia/Dylan through their "Sex-Ed" theme. As I said, that was a terrible scene using a cliché overused and trying to break the "Sex-Ed" barrier with that theme, which again was really bad to start with "Sex-Ed," IMO. It's as bad a starting Sophia of as a "Nun" like character from the start.
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