Alley_Cat

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It was easier, IMO, to introduce rank upon rank of new characters, 2 side jobs & duplicate storylines, than to write a consistent & timely erotic narrative, which I know from experience is not as easy as it looks. There's always the received wisdom that the Dev wanted to include as many kinks as possible & that has been used to justify the ironic situation of fans with POVs like mine having to watch the actual corruption in real time, (a very, very long, slow real time), of a fictional corruption game.

Re-reading my previous post it's apparent that these days even I'm losing sight of the fact that this wasn't meant to be straightforward porn but genuine eroticism. Hence the now infamous "slow-burn." Ordinary porn holds no charms for me because I've been there, done that & damn near worn out the T-shirt. It's usually badly written & boring & in the case of the UK downright comedic but not actually funny. Erotic stories, on the other hand, can be inventive, are often very well written & take the reader on a journey where all kinds of things are possible & can be made to seem plausible. Some folks might think it's the best kind of escapism.

IMO, AWAM was definitely a well-crafted erotic tale when it started out & I can only speculate as to why this standard & yes, 'realism', wasn't maintained. There was a time when it looked, IMO, as though AWAM could become the great erotic 3D rendered story of the first quarter of the century. At last the resources available to the creators in 3D were being put to the best kind of use. This gradually ceased to be the case & though I can only speculate about the reasons, I believe I can make some pretty accurate educated guesses, all of which would go down like a lead balloon with many fans, whether true or not.

As for the specifics, I've commented several times on my belief that the 2 side jobs need to go, that duplicate storylines could be shut down, some characters written out, etc. Any & all suggestions from a pirate are "guaranteed", as in guaranteed to be totally ignored. When it comes to Aiden, I have defended this route until I'm blue in the balls & won't repeat myself. Suffice to say, however, that I was a proponent of Bennett as being the right pantomime villain people could love to hate. Frankly, I prefer Sophia dealing with & interacting with, other adults. It turned out that Mr. Bennett was so grossly unpopular, especially with those who didn't want their 'goddess' sullied by any 'nasty' man, (& this in an incest-ridden corruption story FFS), that his being written out was telegraphed by the Dev years before it was due to happen. Now to the present, Aiden & blackmail haters can be free of what they don't like, (unlike incest ignorers) but I don't really expect him back at all. Five years is a very long time in the gaming world & AFAIC, he's gone.

So, AWAM has become yet another porn game & is aiming for 2 records, i.e. longest lasting & slowest in continuous development but what about the realism?
I was musing on the Bennett blackmail with "realism" coming up again, and it occured to me that perhaps he was just introduced too early. I'm beginning to think it could have been far more impactful if Dylan only failed the test on say PD23, and for the deadline still to be PD24. That way many of my objections about accepting his "proposal" wouldn't be at all relevant. For example, Dylan would have had the time to adjust to the new content that Bennett was teaching. And Sophia wouldn't have had the time to approach Mrs Torres and go to the school board.

Bennett would also have the time to properly seduce Sophia, instead of just coming off as a creep and a sleaze. He could have "innocently" raised concerns that Dylan wasn't doing as well as he could have, so that when Bennett springs the trap and fails Dylan, it doesn't just look like a ploy to get into Sophia's panties.
 

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I was musing on the Bennett blackmail with "realism" coming up again, and it occured to me that perhaps he was just introduced too early. I'm beginning to think it could have been far more impactful if Dylan only failed the test on say PD23, and for the deadline still to be PD24. That way many of my objections about accepting his "proposal" wouldn't be at all relevant. For example, Dylan would have had the time to adjust to the new content that Bennett was teaching. And Sophia wouldn't have had the time to approach Mrs Torres and go to the school board.

Bennett would also have the time to properly seduce Sophia, instead of just coming off as a creep and a sleaze. He could have "innocently" raised concerns that Dylan wasn't doing as well as he could have, so that when Bennett springs the trap and fails Dylan, it doesn't just look like a ploy to get into Sophia's panties.
I agree with the "too early" statement. Many fans at the time, were not ready for blackmail of any kind. (Despite this element being present in most corruption games). Sophia was (& by some still is), considered an inviolable figure on a pedestal. Bennett could have provided a more sophisticated approach to the whole blackmail route, if he'd been given a chance. Elaborate scenarios, like task 3, most excellent as it was, would not necessarily have been required. Fans disgusted by the groping at gang HQ would never have needed to see it. There are still fans who play a corruption game but don't want too much corruption, or only want it to correlate precisely with their own kinks. I understand this POV but I don't empathise. I've assumed that they must have influenced L&P.

So, Bennett is a sleaze-ball & that's the point but had the episode been written as you suggest, he would have been a clever, devious, thinking, plotting sleaze-ball, instead of just an obvious, big-headed, entitled prick.

So much of AWAM could do with an overhaul but it's just been allowed to spiral into something resembling a plate of spaghetti & we all know it's true potential will never be realised. We need something similar to AWAM but with less complexity & timely, regular updates. I'll try to remember this next time I'm at a wishing well.
 

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Are you seriously that desperate to prove your point you're using fan art instead of actual in-game content? That render is from Pixil's fan art game, not this one.

Don't need to imagine, I and other Ellie and Patricia fans are waiting 10-20 months for a single update right now
It was more than two years ago.While was the last scene with Ellie. And probably it will be 3 years when we get the Ellie update.

Seriously I love this game and I respect the creator but honestly.. Adding Dylan as a second MC so he will have much content is a joke to Ellie's fans. I know that he won but just because he was 50 points more than Ellie so she deserves to be separated on minimum or added to him and his story like a toy who can fuck?
 

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It was more than two years ago.While was the last scene with Ellie. And probably it will be 3 years when we get the Ellie update.

Seriously I love this game and I respect the creator but honestly.. Adding Dylan as a second MC so he will have much content is a joke to Ellie's fans. I know that he won but just because he was 50 points more than Ellie so she deserves to be separated on minimum or added to him and his story like a toy who can fuck?
is Dylan going to be a second main character now?? i mean, is it official???
 
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is Dylan going to be a second main character now?? i mean, is it official???
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I Ask him because after two years I lived in hope that after "Dylan" day will be Ellie day as the second the most favourite character and He said yes we get one and half scene and Dylan get most scene in the day because he's like second MC.. :cry:
 
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I Ask him because after two years I lived in hope that after "Dylan" day will be Ellie day as the second the most favourite character and He said yes we get one and half scene and Dylan get most scene in the day because he's like second MC.. :cry:
PD16 is known as Ellie day, since it's the day with the most Ellie events - "several", going by the roadmap L&P gave us 3-odd years ago. Also happens to be the day the Ellie route branches into three, and the day of the "wild" event. I had thought the "wild" event was going to be Sophia/Ellie until Old Dog asked L&P if it was a hetero event or not, which it appears to be.

How many is "several", we'll probably only know when the event list for PD16 comes out. But from memory the most amount of events Ellie has on any other day is 2, so "several" could be as little as 3, which is a bit of a disgrace since it's less than half of the Dylan events for PD13, and we don't even know of there is a day he doesn't have more. On his roadmap we're only told if he has events on a particular day or not, so in the future it's entirely possible to have a day with more Dylan events than Sophia
 
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PD16 is known as Ellie day, since it's the day with the most Ellie events - "several", going by the roadmap L&P gave us 3-odd years ago. Also happens to be the day the Ellie route branches into three, and the day of the "wild" event. I had thought the "wild" event was going to be Sophia/Ellie until Old Dog asked L&P if it was a hetero event or not, which it appears to be.

How many is "several", we'll probably only know when the event list for PD16 comes out. But from memory the most amount of events Ellie has on any other day is 2, so "several" could be as little as 3, which is a bit of a disgrace since it's less than half of the Dylan events for PD13, and we don't even know of there is a day he doesn't have more. On his roadmap we're only told if he has events on a particular day or not, so in the future it's entirely possible to have a day with more Dylan events than Sophia

PD16? Why I was thinking that is PD14? :oops: Eh nevermind So my game will be like... "Sophia teaching and rest in home in calm" and game over because I don't have route with Dylan and get him out of the house soon as possible and don't give him any chance to touch Sophia. Good to know.

And the most scene with Ellie and probably only 3? If it will happen or will be added into Dylan story I end with this game. This game is amazing because of many ways and that you can choose. So my choice is Ellie, girls and Sam with Morello.
 

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Dylan is a creep honestly. I'm usually up for some mother/son incest in these games but I don't like his character design or personality.

Ellie is by far superior with a more interesting personality and better chemistry with Sophia. We need more content for her again, her scenes have been the best so far.
 

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PD16? Why I was thinking that is PD14? :oops: Eh nevermind So my game will be like... "Sophia teaching and rest in home in calm" and game over because I don't have route with Dylan and get him out of the house soon as possible and don't give him any chance to touch Sophia. Good to know.

And the most scene with Ellie and probably only 3? If it will happen or will be added into Dylan story I end with this game. This game is amazing because of many ways and that you can choose. So my choice is Ellie, girls and Sam with Morello.
Probably 3? I can't say, only possibly. I'm hoping for at least 4 - an Ellie shower in the morning and an event for each of the three branches.

But yeah, for those not on the Dylan route, Part II currently has just over a minute of content. Not expecting any renders at all for the next two updates. For everything that's happened to Sophia so far, it's kinda weird for this PD just to be: Sophia goes to school, teaches literature, goes home, takes Dylan to the hairdresser, comes home, goes to sleep.
 
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