rAmSiMaL

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Although I don't play for the incest, I think your sequence of events reads & flows better than the extant version. There has been a lack of awareness shown throughout AWAM, IMO, of what leads to sexual situations & causes them to progress. Atmosphere & overall moods of the participants are of vital importance & it usually takes more than alcohol to create the necessary conditions. Even one-night stands require more than a sickly-sweet stream of compliments & that would be true even for someone as shallow as Sophia has proven to be.

If everything that was going to happen had occurred in the original 'relaxing' bath, (with husband & guest downstairs notwithstanding), it would have made sense, in AWAM terms at least. As it is Sophia, after the day she's had, would be knackered after returning from the club, not in the mood for another dip into water, even with her cleanliness OCD. As for Dylan, it's past his bedtime. I'm in danger of talking realism again but instead let's call it logic & good story-telling.
As per Sophia’s description Mr Walker (Stella’s father) had an eye on her a few years before the defloration event and she was in love with him for those few years as well. At the party there had been six months since he divorced his ex wife (Stella’s mother) which indicates that they are free to “release tension”… screenshot0004.png
 
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hzjujk

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Yes, you are right it's a bit counterintuitive.
Since I saw the booze, I was implicitly counting on the fact that they (or Sophia) could be already a bit tipsy from previous drinking at the nightclub/rooftop lounge and there is a clear complicity in their expressions as they are still walking arm to arm in the house. So they (Sophia) could again underestimate the risk even if someone is clearly in the house awake.

Whoever is there, he/she might not actually interrupt them at that precise moment, he/she could just be in the room. Maybe after a while the light goes off again and the coast is clear again. And that could be a decision Sophia has to make, abort as soon as they notice the light or wait a few minutes for the coast to be clear again. Obviously alcohol + the fun and excitement of the evening will be excuse for the poor judgement (like when she was naked in front of her house in the afternoon at Sam's).

Another variant could be that the person actually shows e.g. at the window and talk with them or one of them as the other hides, reassure him/her and then they continue once the person goes back inside. Again with a possible choice for Sophia to continue or not.
A few thoughts on the last teaser:
1: If I leave the light on in my pool at night, every night, some weeks I don't have water in the pool the next day but protein soup.
2: The "but" may simply indicate a non-functioning spa, no water or a dead rat floating in the water.
3. if the light in the window is the reason for the "but" then there is nothing to worry about at this point. The two are still clothed and are not caught in a compromising situation. It only means an interruption. "But" it also means that Sophia, if they then look for another location, does not want to end the evening - thus intent!
4. if Liam is the reason for the "but", L&P could even use this to give Dylan his chance. - Sophia and Dylan come home and meet Liam who has to go to the toilet (too much beer during the game). Sophia explains to her husband where they were and Liam reacts again by mocking Dylan who obviously prefers to go out with his mother than with a girl. Sophia gets annoyed at this arrogance and thinks to herself - "Your son took his chance that night and I'm starting to rethink my guilty conscience!" or something like that. This could lead to Sophia eventually allowing more.
 

Dan5k74

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After the great fun in the club, Dylan offered to finish the beautiful evening in the hot tub. But...

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My guess is that in the bag is simply something to eat that the two bought on the way home (in theory Dylan and Sophia should have gone to the restaurant so they should be hungry at this time of the evening), and in the hot tub in the backyard is Ellie with Christine and some of her other friends.
Perhaps the highlight of the event this time will take place in the kitchen (where it is easier to control what happens in the backyard)?:unsure:
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I'm leaning toward the shower anyway (if only to see something different from the first part).
 
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Alley_Cat

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A few thoughts on the last teaser:
1: If I leave the light on in my pool at night, every night, some weeks I don't have water in the pool the next day but protein soup.
2: The "but" may simply indicate a non-functioning spa, no water or a dead rat floating in the water.
3. if the light in the window is the reason for the "but" then there is nothing to worry about at this point. The two are still clothed and are not caught in a compromising situation. It only means an interruption. "But" it also means that Sophia, if they then look for another location, does not want to end the evening - thus intent!
4. if Liam is the reason for the "but", L&P could even use this to give Dylan his chance. - Sophia and Dylan come home and meet Liam who has to go to the toilet (too much beer during the game). Sophia explains to her husband where they were and Liam reacts again by mocking Dylan who obviously prefers to go out with his mother than with a girl. Sophia gets annoyed at this arrogance and thinks to herself - "Your son took his chance that night and I'm starting to rethink my guilty conscience!" or something like that. This could lead to Sophia eventually allowing more.
Or a dead pigeon
 

tofhdns

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In the game, it must have been past midnight since it was the night after the football game had ended and they went to the night club, but in this forum it still seems to be evening.

by the way if Liam was going to take a shower, shouldn't he have taken a shower with Sophia?
are they divorced?

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wh8780799

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I guess inside the bag is Sophia's panties, and when she is at the bar, maybe she will play a big adventure and ask Sophia to take off her panties
 
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