kakashiuchiha

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while on the subject of sex and the protagonist(Sophia) the change has been minimal.

In a very forced and desperate way to change Dylan from an irritable, perverted and ugly dwarf to a supposed heartthrob in 1 week haha

That Elie couldn't even see it in painting, she didn't care that she was almost naked next to her hahaha.

The author has narrative chaos in the story.
 

Lust & nipple

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while on the subject of sex the change has been minimal.

In a very forced and desperate way to change Dylan from an irritable, perverted and ugly dwarf to a supposed heartthrob in 1 week haha

That Elie couldn't even see it in painting, she didn't care that she was almost naked next to her hahaha.

The author has narrative chaos in the story.
Because he's writing history on the fly, that's all.
 

kakashiuchiha

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it might be good and fun, but just when it might get hot (partial or full nudity) it will be cut short in true L&P style
Exactly, it reminds me of Burker's wife(angry because they can show off their sexy bodies haha) that the author puts her in a single scene completely out of nowhere just to ruin the moment and to make matters worse the character never comes out again.
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The worst thing is that he does it here all the fucking time.

He has drugged Sophia, drunk, blackmailed, deceived and dozens of other things and magically she always gets rid of everything.

Tyler literally had her in the palm of his hand and his completely no-nonsense sister (acting the opposite of her personality) interrupts them.
 
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DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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Exactly, it reminds me of Burker's wife(angry because they can show off their sexy bodies haha) that the author puts her in a single scene completely out of nowhere just to ruin the moment and to make matters worse the character never comes out again.
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The worst thing is that he does it here all the fucking time.

He has drugged Sophia, drunk, blackmailed, deceived and dozens of other things and magically she always gets rid of everything.

Tyler literally had her in the palm of his hand and his completely no-nonsense sister (acting the opposite of her personality) interrupts them.
What game are those screen shots from?
 

armion82

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Dylan/Emma storyline has been excluded for now. So next update with Ellie/Christine will be last one of this day.
What bothers me is the sentence "for now".
We all know how weird is the dev definitinion of time.
 
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