- Aug 26, 2021
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while on the subject of sex and the protagonist(Sophia) the change has been minimal.
In a very forced and desperate way to change Dylan from an irritable, perverted and ugly dwarf to a supposed heartthrob in 1 week haha
That Elie couldn't even see it in painting, she didn't care that she was almost naked next to her hahaha.
The author has narrative chaos in the story.