- Aug 1, 2019
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He's using ai now for the writing and it's getting worse.In addition to the usual comments about glacial progress and such, did anyone else notice the text description of multiple scenes, especially during touching/feeling parts of the gym scenes, didnt match the image?
For example, saying his hand was on her ass when it was clearly on her hip above her pants.
What about this incredible line.
"She felt a wetness between her legs, and she longed to satisfy the aching desire between her legs."