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Please upload the images ..a less blurry...so that maybe we can understand the images ..and also. I would not count as uploading the 15$ teaser
Please upload the images ..a less blurry...so that maybe we can understand the images ..and also. I would not count as uploading the 15$ teaser
Or maybe you just explain what image is all about...the contents in the image.....and we will imagine ....
It just shows Sam giving Sophia a lift home from the barPlease upload the images ..a less blurry...so that maybe we can understand the images ..and also. I would not count as uploading the 15$ teaser
good night kiss and everyone at home; this is the most we will get from this update.It just shows Sam giving Sophia a lift home from the bar
Hope someting happen and will be the unforgettable day for himIt just shows Sam giving Sophia a lift home from the bar
I wouldn't agree with you on that. There aren't 79+ characters because he planned 79+ characters. They are there because while writing the story he might have seen that a particular characters presence in a scene is necessary. Like you questioned the need for the principal, to me it would make sense for him to be at the school, especially with Aiden's problem, Bennett's problem etc, even if he doesn't help, logically he should be there.That's just it. The CS is based on the text/outline of the novel, and the story is based on 79+ characters that have interactions with Sophia. So you have to create a scene for about every interaction with the support character. Especially characters that have no influence whatsoever. A prime example is this scene.
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Why do I care if her teeth were polished? She is a fictional character. How long did it take him to work on these 12 CS and render them? How does this influence her corruption points, good wife points, lesbian points, or LI points? I don't see her getting hit on by the dental assistant. So to me, this was a wasted scene or one-and-done. This could have been told through mostly narrations about her talking to her sister about bringing the kids over to her house. And there are other examples, too, throughout the novel.
I'm trying to point out here that he could have omitted most of the one-and-done and put more focus on Sophia and the primary supporting cast members.
Can you really see Sophia climbing into the treehouse because I can'tIt would be icing on the cake for Sophia to sneak under the neighbors' windows at night and meet Sam in the treehouse for a little nocturnal cuddling.
Categotically, day19 would be a point of reference
Don't destroy they imaginationCan you really see Sophia climbing into the treehouse because I can't
Not really, but this way GingerSweetGirl will lose the betCan you really see Sophia climbing into the treehouse because I can't
Sophia climbs up into the treehouse to meet Sam in the early hours.Don't destroy they imagination![]()
You can look at it the same way L&P handled Sophia packing the dishwasher one night. It was just described over a black screen.Man this thread moves so fast some days,
I agree with Dr.Fapalot about the dentist visit, the scene serves an expositional purpose but not a visual one.
There are three pieces of information to convey; Patricia inviting the kids for a sleepover, Dylan has soccer tomorrow, Ellie has a friend coming over tomorrow.
Those three pieces of information could have been told in fewer lines of dialogue, potentially could have been cut down by half - but english isn't L&P's first language so he kind of gets a pass on inefficient writing.
The problem with the two renders, is that it's not just two renders - it's 2 renders here, 3 more over there, an even 6 for the next scene after that, 4 for the scene before. It adds up over time.
I'm still firmly in the belief that if L&P took the time at the start of every update to sit down and write & storyboard out the whole script, then re-write & trim... then re-write & trim again - it would still result in a shorter development time. 'Measure twice, cut once'
Like there is a lot to chose fromwho would be her first black dick?![]()
hehe only 2 as of now right?Like there is a lot to chose from![]()
Nail meet Hammer! The math becomes inescapable. Of the 9K+ scenes how many were superfluous? How many will be? It goes back to the "Is it written discussion. " /"If he had the team he said he would?" / "Is he burning out?"Man this thread moves so fast some days,
I agree with Dr.Fapalot about the dentist visit, the scene serves an expositional purpose but not a visual one.
There are three pieces of information to convey; Patricia inviting the kids for a sleepover, Dylan has soccer tomorrow, Ellie has a friend coming over tomorrow.
Those three pieces of information could have been told in fewer lines of dialogue, potentially could have been cut down by half - but english isn't L&P's first language so he kind of gets a pass on inefficient writing.
The problem with the two renders, is that it's not just two renders - it's 2 renders here, 3 more over there, an even 6 for the next scene after that, 4 for the scene before. It adds up over time.
I'm still firmly in the belief that if L&P took the time at the start of every update to sit down and write & storyboard out the whole script, then re-write & trim... then re-write & trim again - it would still result in a shorter development time. 'Measure twice, cut once'