moovigym

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I don't think lesbians sniff each others panties. They know the fishy smell firsthand. Her actions do not make sence.

I wrote it before and I'll write it again. Opening to the idea of incest should pass through her interractions with Dylan.
Once the Dylan story is complete with them having sex, at that point she will obvuiously be in a state of opening up to other erotic stuff like lesbianism, interracial etc.

Take the picture below and imagine this:
The next day, after pleasuring Dylan, Sophia's mind is in turmoil. Her feelings are mixed. She goes into the bathroom and looks into the hamper and sees her OWN panties discarded. Suddenly, images of Dylan jerking off to her panties come to her mind. In conjunction with the smell of his sperm all over her body and hand, she craves to smell him again. Now, THAT is HOT as heck. THAT would make total sense as a continuation of the novel.

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The lesbian scene is just a milking process ;)
 
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naughtynafz

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Sam wasn't really expecting this kind of greeting.

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look what they did to my Sophia :):)

I thought in VN at least its easier to keep same person from beginning to end, as they will never be dead, never increase their remuneration, never have change in mind.

but still, here we go.
 

awamman

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look what they did to my Sophia :):)

I thought in VN at least its easier to keep same person from beginning to end, as they will never be dead, never increase their remuneration, never have change in mind.

but still, here we go.
Coming from a developer that creates work that looks like the house of horror? Sorry it had to be said, L&P ain't perfect, but before you criticize his work first get up to his level.

"I'm not a porn star but if I was my name would be: Every Ones Acritic"
 
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naughtynafz

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Coming from a developer that creates work that looks like the house of horror? Sorry it had to be said, L&P ain't perfect, but before you criticize his work first get up to his level.

"I'm not a porn star but if I was my name would be: Every Ones Acritic"
I know, bro.. I am not that good, that's why I am still a fan artist, not a full fledged vn maker. But L&P is a great artist, his works inspired many people to try VN making... and his Sophia was a top notch female protagonist for a adult vn. But she doesn't look like her anymore, or the Sophia I loved.

there is a saying, don't fix something, that ain't broken. there should be a reason to change Sophia.
 

Nick198

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I know, bro.. I am not that good, that's why I am still a fan artist, not a full fledged vn maker. But L&P is a great artist, his works inspired many people to try VN making... and his Sophia was a top notch female protagonist for a adult vn. But she doesn't look like her anymore, or the Sophia I loved.

there is a saying, don't fix something, that ain't broken. there should be a reason to change Sophia.
Agree, in the second part, Sophia has changed since Sam's plot, not the old Sophia
 
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Nick198

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I know, bro.. I am not that good, that's why I am still a fan artist, not a full fledged vn maker. But L&P is a great artist, his works inspired many people to try VN making... and his Sophia was a top notch female protagonist for a adult vn. But she doesn't look like her anymore, or the Sophia I loved.

there is a saying, don't fix something, that ain't broken. there should be a reason to change Sophia.
To be honest, you made Sophia in that game. The nose is very strange 1709531616074.jpeg
 

Hotcoupleeasy

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After 5 years of logical progress, suddenly Dylan sexually engaged with his married neighbour! And suddenly played strip poker with 4 girls and ends up receiving bj. And now Sophia sniffing her daughter panties as if she has been lesbian for the entire of her life.
While Sophia -Sam , Sophia - Dylan progress were logical and step by step, some recent updates were stupid.
 

Awamboy

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I know, bro.. I am not that good, that's why I am still a fan artist, not a full fledged vn maker. But L&P is a great artist, his works inspired many people to try VN making... and his Sophia was a top notch female protagonist for a adult vn. But she doesn't look like her anymore, or the Sophia I loved.

there is a saying, don't fix something, that ain't broken. there should be a reason to change Sophia.
I appreciate your comment and humility, and I encourage you to keep going and get better.
As far as the idea that he has ruined Sophia, I'm not so sure that to be case. I would give it some time and see how it works in the context of the game.

"I'm not a porn star but if I was, my name would be: Baberham Lincoln"
 
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