You're absolutely right. English isn't my native language, and it shows!
Even I feel embarrassed when I reread my work!
I was looking for a proofreader, and I think I've found the perfect person!
I spent three days correcting not only all the typos and incorrect phrasing, but also inconsistencies.
This proofreader sees everything, and I'm having a really hard time!
In principle, quite a few errors have already been eliminated.
As for the synopsis here, we should ask Bob to revise the one that has been corrected on the website:
"This is the story of Laura. A beautiful 26-year-old Italian woman in a relationship with Mario. She knows what she wants and acts accordingly. Her next step in life is to buy a house in her hometown and open her own shop. But money doesn't grow on trees. Especially in this rather poor part of the country. It's her partner, Mario, who will push her into an adventure that will take her to a world she doesn't know. A world unlike her own, where money seems easier to come by, especially if you're young and beautiful..."
