- Thread starter Supreme_Evil
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Id like a Gallery Option that can always be accessed, a folder for each character and a borderline or icon to show if its a movie or not. That would be just perfect.
I wouldn't call the game bad, but it's story really does just depend on the MC being the biggest fucking idiot to exist. I mean, how hard is it to say "Hey Mom, this guy that I was warning you about is sending me the nudes you sent him and has tried to blackmail my wife into having sex with him." and just show her the conversation where he sent them? I know writing is difficult, but come on.
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One of the worst, and most annoying tropes I run into from novels I'm reading are conflicts that could have been avoided if 1 person was mature enough to simply communicate like a another with another person. This MC does it every single update lmfao. At this point I just hate the MC and want everyone he loves to get what's coming to them. If MC can't be bothered to care, why should the reader...
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Yes, i'm currently just shortly past that point in the story where the MC recieves the pics of the sleeping mother from Samuil.
The scene after the mother came back from the bathroom was the most letdown in the story i've expierenced so far. He even talks to himself that he has to act and warn his mother and all he gets out is "Hey mom, how is work? Everything fine?"
A simple rewrite of the situation without making changes to the story but making it more convincing would be:
- MC gets mother's pic
- MC has now the time, opportunity and evidence to finally get through to his mother
- MC tells the mother to stop sending pictures to Samuil because he will most likely just use them to blackmail her later on, MC is pretty sure about that all of the mother's pictures have already been spread throughout the entire camp and everybody saw them
- mother plays dumb and refuses to be aware of what MC is talking about
- MC shows evidence on his phone and what Samuil is up to
- MC brings up more examples of what his wife went through
- situation solved in a way that makes sense
- next day at evening when MC gets sleeping mother pics from Samuil
- Samuil is mildly annoyed by the MC that he now interferes with his plans for his mother after MC already did so with his wife
- Samuil complains about that the mother no longer wanted to smoke with them so they had to secretly drug her shortly before her shift ended
- they couldn't keep the mother from going home before the drugs kicked in, so they had to follow her home to break into the appartment after she went to bed to take the pictures (better explanation for why the mother is being half naked in a sleeping robe in the pictures, that's not how someone would dress at work when suddenly gettin tired from smoking weed during their shift)
That's where i'm currently at in the story.
I guess it wouldn't change much when the MC contacts the mother the next day and tells her about what happened during the night -> mother moves into a hotel for a while because she no longer feels safe at home (doesn't prevent future events at work since it could always be explained with "mother got drugged secretly") -> possible content: Rick learns about the MC's mother staying in a hotel and books a room there too later on
Now for Rick...how ffs is the MC giving him the house keys just like that after he learned about him wanting to blackmail his wife into sex...i mean, the MC doesn't even wanted him to come afterwards in the first place.
He could told him during a call "yeah, sorry, you can't come visiting us. me and my wife are at work all day long and don't have time to meet up"
Rick could have responded with "sry, i've already booked a last-minute ticked and i can't return it, so i will come over anyway"
When the MC picks him up from the airport he could reveal his room reservation got cancled while he was on the plane and Chris isn't picking up his phone, therefore has Rick no other option than staying at the MC's house.
For the house key scene: make it less obvious that Rick just wants the keys to get them duplicated for free access when the MC isn't home.
MC is aware that Rick is up to no good, so don't give him the keys. drop him off at home and go to work afterwards.
MC gets a call from Rick afterwards while at work, he tells the MC he accidentally locked himself out when he wanted to go into the garden. MC tells him he has to wait until the wife or the MC get off work and recommends to Rick to go to a café or bar for that time, he will give him a call when he is about to head home.
Rick explains that this isn't really an option since his wallet is still inside, he asks the MC if there is a way to get in without having the wife or MC to bother of getting off work.
MC tells Rick about the hidden spare key in the garden.
When MC gets back from the bar (or the morning after) the first thing he does is changing the hidingspot for the spare key, unbeknownst to him that Rick already went off to get the key duplicated while both were still at work
That's my essay for now, there is still a lot more i'd like to add, but i leave that for another time.
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I had to facepalm pretty hard when the MC was monologing:One of the worst, and most annoying tropes I run into from novels I'm reading are conflicts that could have been avoided if 1 person was mature enough to simply communicate like a another with another person. This MC does it every single update lmfao. At this point I just hate the MC and want everyone he loves to get what's coming to them. If MC can't be bothered to care, why should the reader...
I don't want my wife getting blackmailed by Rick into having sex with him, but she has already cheated on me anyway, so it's her problem to deal with.
W T F ?!?
Every NTR game main-character when he needs to act. xD
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The word you a looking for is "feedback" to help improving the game, even with not being able to change what's currently is in the game it helps to prevent future updates making the same mistakes.
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Hello everyone,
I have some great news for you. In just ten days, you will be able to play the new part of our game. We really hope you will enjoy it.
What's in store for you?
Well, first of all, the continuation of the story. Since our game is quite linear at the moment, it’s hard to say exactly what you will see. Overall, it will be the continuation of the main character’s wife’s and mother’s stories, continuing their corruption. However, some player choices from previous parts will be utilized in the next part. For example, have you ever wondered how the main character’s wife would react to his affair with Katherine? She surely won’t be happy about it. Or, for instance, how will Henry and Jenaveve’s relationship develop if the main character decides to encourage his friend in courting his secretary? Interesting, right?
Moreover, in the next part, you will see more than just the continuation of the storyline. We’ve also decided to add a new element to the story: a website where someone has decided to upload photos of someone. You get what we mean, hehe?
Overall, we hope you enjoy the new part. We are working very hard to create something that will bring you pleasure.
" We’ve also decided to add a new element to the story: a website where someone has decided to upload photos of someone. "
can't wait to see that hopefully it will be with both woman later
can't wait to see that
hopefully it will be with both woman later So when is the 3.5 update releasing to non Patreons thought it said today
An easy and quick improvement for the next update that not takes much effort to shove in at the last second for the next update would be:
The MC's laptop gallery app at the Main Menu screen that keeps track of all unlocked content for all the playthroughs. Just placing and linking the ingame app icon at the Main Menu's laptop would do the job.
The second one would be an actress list. I didn't put in much effort so i could only figure out:
Wife - Vanna Bardot
Mother - Kendra Lust
Wife's Bestie - Emily Willis
Rick's MILF GF - Emily Addison
Secretary - Jenaveve Jolie
- Jul 11, 2018
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you really waiting for it to be released by the dev instead of just dowloading it here? really nice of you
Don't judge have more pressing things to spend money onyou really waiting for it to be released by the dev instead of just dowloading it here? really nice of you
- Jul 11, 2018
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i didnt want to judge you i just wanted to make you aware that 3.5 is already leaked here and you could just download it.
0.3.5 has been leaked here for a while. The thread even has the currently linked version number in the title.
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It is a little too late now, but I'll chime in as well:
adding the wife POV was a bad idea, part of the fun of this game is wondering what happened, are you a crazy idiot? are you subconsciously wishing these things happened? are you just in denial? now, we will know whats happening as they're happening, which is well and good for the porn, but not so great for the game and the tension. and, tbh, the game is getting too big and too long, which I did mention in an earlier post. I think the game should've wrapped up on the last update, with several things happening differently, and the MC getting destroyed.
I think the format of this game is phenomenal for this style of fetish porn, and it would have been much better to do a collection of short stories, rather than just trying to make the game as big as possible and extort that patreon money. What they got going on now is certainly good for them, but would be a lot better if they were regularly dropping complete games with harsh, good stories.
adding the wife POV was a bad idea, part of the fun of this game is wondering what happened, are you a crazy idiot? are you subconsciously wishing these things happened? are you just in denial? now, we will know whats happening as they're happening, which is well and good for the porn, but not so great for the game and the tension. and, tbh, the game is getting too big and too long, which I did mention in an earlier post. I think the game should've wrapped up on the last update, with several things happening differently, and the MC getting destroyed.
I think the format of this game is phenomenal for this style of fetish porn, and it would have been much better to do a collection of short stories, rather than just trying to make the game as big as possible and extort that patreon money. What they got going on now is certainly good for them, but would be a lot better if they were regularly dropping complete games with harsh, good stories.