VN Ren'Py A Wife's Loyalty [v0.1] [d3sire Studio]

[Ded Baraded]

This is pretty much the fail of all of these. The root path should be a faithful path.
The branching should question what would cause different events to happen.

Hello! This is important, but not very important) In my humble opinion, the most important thing in games is not being obvious when choosing. If everything is predictable, then it's not interesting to play. Something like "Until Dawn"..

 

[FP69]

This is pretty much the fail of all of these. The root path should be a faithful path.
The branching should question what would cause different events to happen. Most
of the time it's head in ass syndrome copying other badly, and in some cases well
written stories. It's like if you made a Tomb Raider game and the only content was
Lara dying every other scene just becoming murder porn. Cos in reality that's all Tomb
Raider is. You do things to avoid killing Lara. Some people just like killing her over and over
and the rest of the content is meaningless.

Few years back I tried a few NTR games. And I liked this genre. But all this wife - phone games just ends up with MC sharing his wf, and tons of side characters MC's moms, sisters, aunts, cousens, etc. All the same.
I wished first of all that such game would be around MC and his wife, not all family members and their stories. And if there appears some sister than she has some impact on MC or Wife. Different paths like loyal WF unloyal WF.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Few years back I tried a few NTR games. And I liked this genre. But all this wife - phone games just ends up with MC sharing his wf, and tons of side characters MC's moms, sisters, aunts, cousens, etc. All the same.
I wished first of all that such game would be around MC and his wife, not all family members and their stories. And if there appears some sister than she has some impact on MC or Wife. Different paths like loyal WF unloyal WF.

Try A Wife's Phone. Netorase Phone, Lucky Phone, Turning the Page, The Edge Of, Blurring the Walls and
NTR by Clumsiness (if you want dark humor).

 

[planepad]

any updates on this one?

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

any updates on this one?

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[ScoutV345]

Can you all please allow the MC to show his wife the LUNA text that she talked to her so that we can have this issue resolved - it would be really nice to see a game where they really do talk and the MC is not just a Coward and IDIOT. So far in eps 1 there is no real cheating going on it seems and there should be a way to ensure it does not happen if the MC does the right things. Do something different than all other games and allow a real marriage to be successful if you do the right things. The ending of eps 1 sure seems the WIFE is pissed and going to fuck her boss. I hope that is not what happens

Sometimes the games are actually more challenging trying to keep your relationships intact, just like real life, you gotta work at it.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

Sometimes the games are actually more challenging trying to keep your relationships intact, just like real life, you gotta work at it.

Yes it is but build in a path to allow it. Dont shoe horn it to always have a cheating wife. Give the husband the chance to not be a joke

 

[taway415]

Sometimes the games are actually more challenging trying to keep your relationships intact, just like real life, you gotta work at it.

Ah! Yes. A > 1GB game portraying a relationship with arbitrarily coded choices = IRL. Sorry to burst your bubble, tech isn't there yet, lil timmy.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Ah! Yes. A > 1GB game portraying a relationship with arbitrarily coded choices = IRL. Sorry to burst your bubble, tech isn't there yet, lil timmy.

Hate to burst yours but it's close. Just ask my Ai BBC boyfriend hahaha

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Hello! This is important, but not very important) In my humble opinion, the most important thing in games is not being obvious when choosing. If everything is predictable, then it's not interesting to play. Something like "Until Dawn"..

True true. Only in stories like this the predictability is that your wife cheats on you for no real
reason than to give the reader porn to fap to making the MC a bumbling idiot and/or weak noodle
who for reasons unknown is absolutely incapable of having a real thought on whether he should
do something about it or just sit there and let it happen because hahaha cuck. Which in reality is
either the developer/writer's inability to understand actual human interactions and just parrots
other bad stories/situations or is straight up taking a piss on you mostly white male audience
and your assumed lack of penis size and sexual capability. BNWO amirite! haha
Take that all you white male readers! Your woman wants a midnight melanin rich horse cock
that your little white self just can't compete with. But what if the white male reader has a dick
the Gods admire? You might not be able to relate at all? What if you're a legit alpha male IRL and
can't even come close to tolerating the mess of an MC you usually get in these?
These MCs are so bad even if you are a caged cuck in real life you're like daaaaym this guy is bad hahaha

So yeah. Keeping things non predictable is good. Having believable MCs/FMCs/NPCs is good.
Having some decent people thrown in is good. Having cause and effect reasons for things happening
is good. Even if it's linear storytelling. If you're a writer and reading this and you have to have a male
lead that's a waste of skin, focus on the partner that's actually interesting and doing things.
Like Permission. Good story but do you really care about following a guy to work and scratching his nuts
waiting for his wife to tell him how her day was without him? Instead of, I dunno. Following her... actually
doing things... and making the real life choices.... instead of MENU: 1. Text my Wife 2. Go To Bed.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

True true. Only in stories like this the predictability is that your wife cheats on you for no real
reason than to give the reader porn to fap to making the MC a bumbling idiot and/or weak noodle
who for reasons unknown is absolutely incapable of having a real thought on whether he should
do something about it or just sit there and let it happen because hahaha cuck. Which in reality is
either the developer/writer's inability to understand actual human interactions and just parrots
other bad stories/situations or is straight up taking a piss on you mostly white male audience
and your assumed lack of penis size and sexual capability. BNWO amirite! haha
Take that all you white male readers! Your woman wants a midnight melanin rich horse cock
that your little white self just can't compete with. But what if the white male reader has a dick
the Gods admire? You might not be able to relate at all? What if you're a legit alpha male IRL and
can't even come close to tolerating the mess of an MC you usually get in these?
These MCs are so bad even if you are a caged cuck in real life you're like daaaaym this guy is bad hahaha

So yeah. Keeping things non predictable is good. Having believable MCs/FMCs/NPCs is good.
Having some decent people thrown in is good. Having cause and effect reasons for things happening
is good. Even if it's linear storytelling. If you're a writer and reading this and you have to have a male
lead that's a waste of skin, focus on the partner that's actually interesting and doing things.
Like Permission. Good story but do you really care about following a guy to work and scratching his nuts
waiting for his wife to tell him how her day was without him? Instead of, I dunno. Following her... actually
doing things... and making the real life choices.... instead of MENU: 1. Text my Wife 2. Go To Bed.

I was really happy with Permission had a really good short story to it - and you as the MC could control the ending

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

I was really happy with Permission had a really good short story to it - and you as the MC could control the ending

Yeah in the end I liked it too. I definitely want more of that story.

 

[huddlestonkeith33]

Yeah in the end I liked it too. I definitely want more of that story.

Agreed

 

[%%3*tJ*X@j2dST8pG3f*4JyAU]

I think it has some parallels with "A wife's phone". Really hope this one doesn't go as unhinged with branching storylines and a ton of other characters.

The only thing I really don't like are the unskippable "After a while..." interludes.

 

[huddlestonkeith33]

Any updates on this game's next update

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Any updates on this game's next update

Cooking a perfect meal takes time hahaha

 

[azsxdcdcsxaz]

i hope this game achieve the route that the similar games are bad at
and that is cheating wife who doesn't confront mc and says this is me now and mc be ok with it
i hope wife cheats behind mc back and think the mc is clueless and try to keep it that way while mc spying on her
although this is my taste and everyone have their preferences

 

[MightbeSomeone]

i hope this game achieve the route that the similar games are bad at
and that is cheating wife who doesn't confront mc and says this is me now and mc be ok with it
i hope wife cheats behind mc back and think the mc is clueless and try to keep it that way while mc spying on her
although this is my taste and everyone have their preferences

I want to see multiple paths were the mc is not dumb and they talk work on things and his reactions actually mean things good reactions make her stay loyal and bad choices make potential cheating possible but not just cheating for no reason

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

i hope this game achieve the route that the similar games are bad at
and that is cheating wife who doesn't confront mc and says this is me now and mc be ok with it
i hope wife cheats behind mc back and think the mc is clueless and try to keep it that way while mc spying on her
although this is my taste and everyone have their preferences

Well if the MC is okay with it and doesn't care and she just does it for no real reason other than to do it,
and no one ever says anything, it's gonna be a real short story about some tech guy sucking at his job while
his wife is having all the fun you never get to see because for some reason these always have to be from a male MC
with zero life and no self esteem's perspective. Like every other one of these.

 

[Douchebag M]

This game abandoned or what?