I-Love-Adventure
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yes they doDo choices in the reworked prologue have any impact on the story yet, or they will later?
She has zero interest in the boss and is not at all involved with him or the guy at the gym. Go read every line and you can figure it outi agree 150%
She wasnt mad about luna she was mad because she was thinking he didnt call her intentionally to make her feel like he does when she doesnt call. And that made her feel upset and perhaps a bit guilty so she could not face himCouldn't get into this one. Too many inconsistencies and just overall, not that good.
If you're going to use real porn, keep it consistent. Don't use different actress for the same person. As well, don't use some AI images for the girlfriend if they don't match the real porn version of the girlfriend. It makes it all so confusing. It's like, you see the videos, and you're wondering if that is supposed to represent the girlfriend or someone else. It doesn't make sense. Stick to one actress for each character and use those same actresses for the regular images as well so it actually makes sense and doesn't confuse people.
I see all these videos that keeps showing up, and I'm like, okay is that supposed to be the wife? Or wait, is that the wife? Or get another and be like, okay who is this supposed to represent? It is way too confusing.
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So yeah, couldn't do it. From the inconsistencies in the videos/images, to the inconsistencies in the writing and choices, this is just kind of a mess. It needs another rework. Or at least some fixing. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
My guess is the next update will be out soon - less than a few weeksI'm disappointed after waiting 4 months. The old version was already pretty good. It might make sense to make the passion between the husband and wife stronger in the story. But only the text was changed and 1 additional video on the last day. It's a big disappointment to release it after 4 months without adding even 1-2 days.
This is just a criticism from someone who has high expectations of you. Because obviously the developers are talented. in my opinion it was the best NTR phone game start.
In conclusion, it is a game with high potential and deserves support. (If 4 months are not wasted again and fast updates follow each other)
The dialogueis very different on the confident or anxious path. I did a side by side pt of the original and updated prologue and its very differnt. As for the wifes reaction - she thinks the husband didnt contact her intentionally and got really upset with him thinking he was being an asshole.I normally avoid "real porn" VNs but this one has unusually good production values.
A little constructive criticism if I may:
The early focus on the MC's relationship is welcome and well-paced. Most similar efforts have either the wife or husband misbehaving egregiously after one scene together. I think I counted five or six before either really had an opportunity to go off the reservation.
That said, to my eye, being "confident" or "anxious" doesn't seem to have any real effect on the dialogue. While the MC can consistently make confident choices, in his headspace, he's still deeply suspicious and anxious.
Secondly, the wife's reaction to thefeels over the top considering the wife's similar behavior earlier in the story. Particularly if the MC is well-behaved in that situation. I've been married for over a decade, and my wife reacting like that to a misunderstanding would be a major crisis, causing me to re-evaluate the entire relationship.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
While I can't account for confirmation bias, that was the only time I felt really yanked out of suspension of disbelief.
Appreciate the commitment to quality and pacing.
(Oh, also, I noticed the phone said "Wessages" instead of "Messages" at one point.)
He is insecure but if you look at the dinner with running into his wife's boss his confidence is shown well. Also in an insecure pt the couple have fewer sex events since he is so unsure of himselfI'll try an anxious playthrough on the assumption that you're correct.
I just personally felt (that confirmation bias again) that "confident" MC was still privately very insecure.