- Jul 3, 2024
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Emerald_Deceivers I really appreciate the changes you've made; they give players more freedom to make Steph more of our own. But at some point it pretty much like the older version? My best guess is that you are not done modifying your story? There is still some change in the future?
After you assist Brandon, you can ask Sadie to distract the boys at the entrance, which really helps Steph feel relieved in her embarrassment (I like the change you did here). However, later that same day Steph go outside in her underwear, leading to her cumming in the middle of the street. The shift from feeling "embarrassed" to "this is so thrilling I can't help myself" happens in just a few hours, and it feels inconsistent and weird.
Steph is still force to flirt with various guys and tease them with very little (or completely inexistent) input from the player.
On top of that, in my opinion, she is too easily swayed by the people around her, especially considering that she is used to be very strong-willed due to the bullying she had faced for four years. IE She had just met Siobhan, and within five minutes, she is pressured to cut her hair.
Your writing continues to get better. I really appreciate your work.
After you assist Brandon, you can ask Sadie to distract the boys at the entrance, which really helps Steph feel relieved in her embarrassment (I like the change you did here). However, later that same day Steph go outside in her underwear, leading to her cumming in the middle of the street. The shift from feeling "embarrassed" to "this is so thrilling I can't help myself" happens in just a few hours, and it feels inconsistent and weird.
Steph is still force to flirt with various guys and tease them with very little (or completely inexistent) input from the player.
On top of that, in my opinion, she is too easily swayed by the people around her, especially considering that she is used to be very strong-willed due to the bullying she had faced for four years. IE She had just met Siobhan, and within five minutes, she is pressured to cut her hair.
Your writing continues to get better. I really appreciate your work.
