VN Ren'Py Abnormal [v0.8.5] [Emerald Deceivers]

[HollowDux]

Emerald_Deceivers I really appreciate the changes you've made; they give players more freedom to make Steph more of our own. But at some point it pretty much like the older version? My best guess is that you are not done modifying your story? There is still some change in the future?
After you assist Brandon, you can ask Sadie to distract the boys at the entrance, which really helps Steph feel relieved in her embarrassment (I like the change you did here). However, later that same day Steph go outside in her underwear, leading to her cumming in the middle of the street. The shift from feeling "embarrassed" to "this is so thrilling I can't help myself" happens in just a few hours, and it feels inconsistent and weird.

Steph is still force to flirt with various guys and tease them with very little (or completely inexistent) input from the player.

On top of that, in my opinion, she is too easily swayed by the people around her, especially considering that she is used to be very strong-willed due to the bullying she had faced for four years. IE She had just met Siobhan, and within five minutes, she is pressured to cut her hair.

Your writing continues to get better. I really appreciate your work.

 

[Birdnman993]

Very clever Emerald_Deceivers, just when I lost interest in Sadie, you make me interested in her again, you are diabolical.

 

[Emerald_Deceivers]

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[okokok]

Pretty early into this one but so far I'm enjoying it. Only real gripe is that you should have chosen another martial art cause that scene in no way resembles aikido

 

[stahalle]

i liked sadie but after that scene in the school she can go to hell. "i want to have sex with you in the school its special for me thats why i want to do it with you." 2 seconds later "oh a random penis. i have to go, bye." I thought the option to say no would go for both girls. i regreted it afterwards and reloaded and said no to her, and never give her another chance.

 

[GreenDark]

i liked sadie but after that scene in the school she can go to hell. "i want to have sex with you in the school its special for me thats why i want to do it with you." 2 seconds later "oh a random penis. i have to go, bye." I thought the option to say no would go for both girls. i regreted it afterwards and reloaded and said no to her, and never give her another chance.

You're thinking of Reina there, not Sadie. But I agree. Reina is a shitty friend in that moment.
I kept a save for that option anyway because, in future updates, this could be some juicy drama. But only if the story recognizes what Reina did. If it doesn't and proceeds as if nothing is wrong... what a shame.

 

[stahalle]

You're thinking of Reina there, not Sadie. But I agree. Reina is a shitty friend in that moment.
I kept a save for that option anyway because, in future updates, this could be some juicy drama. But only if the story recognizes what Reina did. If it doesn't and proceeds as if nothing is wrong... what a shame.

oh yeah right i mean Reina. But i probably wrote sadie because i have thought about what sadie said to reina that she is just selfish how she treats Steph and here she showed it.

 

[Kheram]

What if Reina is much more of a friend than you think?
What if Reina felt Steph is not yet ready and went deeper with the corruption and gently pushing Steph in a web of lust.
What if Reina tries to ripe Steph so when she will pick this fruit it will be so full of juices she will drown in'em?
What if she is a slut? oh wait we all know that is true.

 

[BenHatira]

Have to say great rework of the game, started it back in the day looking for a fmc that really paints her own path not only in her kinks but also in her sexuality.
Which wasn't really the case but i actually liked the writing and characters (especially Sadie <3 ) and played it anyway, just because most if not all male characters in the game didn't have those dumb typical fmc style inner thought's how they want to fuck or corrupt the mc !

But now it's even better and i have to say thank you Emerald_Deceivers for giving me the option to play the way i want to with a fmc who can go the lesbian route without her thinking about how great some dude looks and all that forced affections towards male characters (Of course i play also the Reina path just for the sake of it and it seems like a good bisexual sex positive option !).

Anyway this game deserves more cloud, cause nothing is forced and as i already said the corruption is shaped to your own preferences now !

btw. thank god for f95zone saving comments while writing them great feature !
My dumbass just poured water into my pc that hit my gpu i had to dry it all out but thankfully my ti survived ..
also left a sub (small one tho) on pat for this good work

 

[HollowDux]

for giving me the option to play the way i want to with a fmc who can go the lesbian route without her thinking about how great some dude looks and all that forced affections towards male characters

Are we playing the same game?

 

[BenHatira]

Are we playing the same game?

Well yeah depending on your choices. Even at the beginning with Daniel you have the chance to just see him as someone who could be your new friend because of having similiar interests, instead of being interested in him.
Same goes with all the exhibition events if you choose the right option - the Mc says she finds it arousing to show herself even though she is not interested in the guys but excited about showing herself.

Or which parts of the game after the rework you are refering to ?

Even the masturbation scenes for the mom on TV are lesbian centered when you do it right.. ( okey beside the one situation where she is using a dildo )

 

[HollowDux]

Or which parts of the game after the rework you are refering to ?

From the top of my head I would say any of the many bathroom incidents (specifically any with the brother friend)

What you point out is true, the dev did make some good change. I cannot say you can play as a lesbian thought, there is some change still needed. Like, when the FMC will learn to lock the goddamn bathroom door!?

 

[BenHatira]

From the top of my head I would say any of the many bathroom incidents (specifically any with the brother friend)

What you point out is true, the dev did make some good change. I cannot say you can play as a lesbian thought, there is some change still needed. Like, when the FMC will learn to lock the goddamn bathroom door!?

I mean you actually can go rage mode on him, and Steph is pissed about it.

Even Henry (the guy who thought it was a good idea to be a perv) thinks "damn she is scary if she is angry, i'am a idiot " in that scene.
In the aftermath scene when he is chilling in his bed and thinking about her ( close to the end of the newest update) he realizes that he was a creep and that she will rip his balls off in the future if he acts this way.

So the male chars are still trying to get with her, but there isn't even a chance of that in Steph's mind... atleast that's how i understood those situations (lesbian path).

But yeah not locking the bathroom door is dumb, but as i follow the Sadie path and thinking about the MC being a exo i just glanced over that fact ( i would have liked the option to avoid that situation from the beggining - but why should she have to lock the bathroom door in her own home - eff Henry though ).

 

[HollowDux]

I mean you actually can go rage mode on him, and Steph is pissed about it.

Can you really?

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Get them all worked up is not going rage mode in my opinion.

being a exo i just glanced over that fact ( i would have liked the option to avoid that situation from the beggining ).

I would personally like if we can choose to be exhibitionist or not, I guess it's inevitable.

 

[BenHatira]

Can you really?

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Get them all worked up is not going rage mode in my opinion.


I would personally like if we can choose to be exhibitionist or not, I guess it's inevitable.

Are those screenshots of the bikini scenes ?
Because ya know just say fuck you Huey i'am going to my room, which gives you some Sadie focused scenes instead.
But yeah if you are into Exo this whole scene plays out like the MC is into guys (in some way) .. that's why i actually avoided it on my Sadie path.

But honestly this is such a little aspect of the whole game if you compare it to other FMC erotic titles out there that claim they have a lesbian path...

 

[HollowDux]

Are those screenshots of the bikini scenes ?

Nop right out the bathroom after Henry Jackoff and cum on the floor (right after the mother of the year award moment)

But honestly this is such a little aspect of the whole game if you compare it to other FMC erotic titles out there that claim they have a lesbian path...

I guess? but the vibe it give, it doesn't feel great.

 

[BenHatira]

Nop right out the bathroom after Henry Jackoff and cum on the floor (right after the mother of the year award moment)

Eww yeah i'am with you on that scene.

Yeah the Mom is just acting like a horny slut in that situation and Steph goes along with it, cause "hey Mom said i should be more open about showing off my body to tha bois and i understand they are just teenagers who jerk off because of me !".

This pretty much survived regarding the rework.

I can understand it kills the Immersion of playing a lesbian path even as a exo.

 

[HollowDux]

This pretty much survived regarding the rework.

That and talking to the old neighbor (the retired photograph) and other things I probably can't remember at this point contribute to an uneasy vibe in the game. It feels like I might be forced at any moment to walk around naked or engage in inappropriate acts with men for "plot purposes" or something along those lines.

That being said, I still like what the dev change with the last update.

 

[The Celtic fan]

I just tried to give it another chance because of the changes that could improve the lesbian routes a little bit, but honestly I felt the game was the same, simply with some dialogues that to me felt very forced for the most part.

you have to avoid too many men that in the end is worth almost nothing because one way or another you end up exposing yourself to them, with the protagonist still loving it, like the scenes in the park, with the neighbor, at the waitress job, the house (damn how many accidents will be enough for her to finally lock the bathroom door)

not to mention the Reina scene, a guy with no name who comes out of fucking nowhere just to ruin a lesbian moment in the most stupid way.

sincerely for me even with the changes it is not worth trying to play as a lesbian, good luck dev.

 

[lemaro]

I just tried to give it another chance because of the changes that could improve the lesbian routes a little bit, but honestly I felt the game was the same, simply with some dialogues that to me felt very forced for the most part.

you have to avoid too many men that in the end is worth almost nothing because one way or another you end up exposing yourself to them, with the protagonist still loving it, like the scenes in the park, with the neighbor, at the waitress job, the house (damn how many accidents will be enough for her to finally lock the bathroom door)

not to mention the Reina scene, a guy with no name who comes out of fucking nowhere just to ruin a lesbian moment in the most stupid way.

sincerely for me even with the changes it is not worth trying to play as a lesbian, good luck dev.