VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Above the Clouds [v0.75] [Mundo Games]

The character models look great, but they have no depth.
Some parts of the story would be good/ok, but the jokes completely ruin it and make it very cringe.
You have jokes in EVERY damn scene and after a while they get old and boring.
You don't have many choices in the game and especially with Helen there is only ONE right way to go.
The girls fall in love with MC no matter what, so you don't have to seduce or corrupt them, which is especially sad because it ruins the forbidden fruit called incest.

Like I said, the story would be good/ok if the developer took the story seriously, included more choices, and didn't put jokes everywhere.

So overall I can only give this game 2/5 stars.

TDLR: Review for v0.51. What saves this game from a one star review are the renders and animations. The rest is garbage.

Pros

• Great graphics and renders
  
  
• Good animations
  
  
• Male MC (slightly) taller than some female LI:s. A really low bar, which still deserves mention because most daz 3d game do not clear it.
  
  
• No engrish.

Cons

• Over the top silly and totaly unrealistic situations and interactions. Removes the erotic tension.
  
  
• Superficial characters without depth or anything resembling being real humans. How to be turned on by a character that is a joke made flesh?
  
  
• Comedy takes precedent over everything else. Every scene is made to be funny rather than compelling, realistic, erotic or part of building a good story and/or character. Whole story arcs seem to be constructed for no other reason than comedy.
  
  
• Unfunny comedy. For the entire play through, I chuckled a couple of times. And that was it, despite comedy being crammed in every scene and situation. Most of the time, not funny at all. Only unrealistic and ridiculous.
  
  
• Women fly to the MCs cock. No need for seduction and/or corruption. Don't have time for that, all space most be reserved for comedy.
  
  
• Constant mindreading, meaning we get to read what other characters are thinking. Ruins first person immersion.
  
  
• Immediate incestous attraction, without explanation. Ruins incest taboo, though they are at least somewhat hesitant about acting on their incestous attraction.
  
  
• Scrawny midget MC. That he's actually made slightly taller than a few of the female LIs only make it more infuriating that many of the LIs are as tall and big as he is. That means the dev didn't do them equally big due to lazyness, no, the dev purposefully made the MC so small. Yet, no one ever mentions this and it doesn't seem to affect the instant attraction all females seem to feel towards the MC. In reality, a man that small would *NOT* have women flying to his cock. Not that realism is anything this games concerns itself with in any other form.
  
  
• Cock varies in size, somtimes quite average, despite LIs going on about how big the MC is. Could be because what looks big compared to the rest of his body won't look that big compared to the women, as he's very small for a man.

I never take time to review games on here but this game is so good. The animations and renders are awesome. The story is the perfect mix of serious/ funny. Just outlandish enough to really enjoy. Looking forward to more

Interesting background story, excellent renders, funny characters. This truly became one of my favorite games. Many thanks to the developer for creating such a great thing!

Negative thing: Lily, the sister of Millie, died. Not good!

The graphics are great that's all the good I found, at the story level, it's embarrassing, in the same way what irritated me the most was the supposed comedy that the author wants to put on, a comedy that is not funny with 100000sound. effects and some jokes and scenes that give chills As they say the supposed comedy is not funny and more if you repeat it a million times you don't even know how comedy works.

I don´t know about the storyline but i cant give this game anything short of a five star review. The storyline is a bit weird and doesnt make a lot of sense to me. But the games makes this up with the funny dialogue, good sound effects/animations and the beautiful characters. Let me tell you, the girls in this game are really hot. Thought are implemented which can create extra tension and funny moments. All in all great game.

The game looks great, but the writing is painfully unfunny to the point where its unplayable for me. Like others have said, its tolerable at first, but the humor is so repetitive and obnoxious that it gets old quick.

I don't know how much of the game I've played- But I got at least an hour and a half and I'm not at the end.
The characters are cute, the models are great, the story is entertaining. I actually laughed several times. Even the animations are good- maybe even perfect.
Overall 10/10 fun time.

High quality animations, very funny and goofy humor, in short; a very entertaining game overall. I've played some adult games but I believe this is the only one I'd be willing to pay if it'll ever see the finish line. Characters grew on me fast and cliches were not that annoying or frustrating. A good title which deserves 5 stars from me! Things are going great as of 0.5 version.

Perhaps one of the very few games where I wish to keep volume up rather than keep it on mute. The comic timing is perfect and my god I laughed my ass off whilst I played this game from the start.

Thank you developer, love your game.

I am a firm believer of 'if it's not good enough, it's not good enough', that being said, this game is good enough. Thank you dev, for your hard work.

I have played a lot of games here on this site to beat my meat to, this one I am sorry to say I have failed. The story is funny and engaging. The humor is funny ( only cuz the little sister is cute) and the renders do it justice.

This is my only complaint of this 'game'. It is a humorous and engaging story that happens to have porn in it. Not the other way around.

Replaybility takes a nosedive when you realize that you have to go through the story all over again -- every update. Maybe a pre-made save starting from the new content would be nice.

I really like this. I will hope that the author keeps the project alive.

I you like a good story and not looking for something hardcore --- this is it. Try it.

Version: v0.5 Final

Review:
This is one of those games that could be "The GAME" of the moment, if it weren't for all this childish humor. Sometimes it gave me a tremendous urge to close the game as everything turns into repeated jokes in which everything becomes boring to watch. It's disappointing to see how a job well done has led to this, but I won't blame him either, as it was the dev's wish.

History:
It's all a fantasy of someone who created a story for teenagers who watch Japanese hentai. No adult person who is tired of watching amateur porn and who seeks adult games for other pleasures will find this game satisfying. The beginning of the game is going well, it has a few little humors that aren't too bothersome, so you see that it is an incest game and that it could have an interesting story or even a story with a lot of lust and you deceive yourself.
I feel like I've found gold, but it's actually topaz. What could have been did not happen.

Graphics & Sexual Content:
The graphics are great, the renders of the female models have nothing to say, excellent. I really liked the look of Hanna and Lucy, as well as Evelyn and other girls, but Hanna's was perfect, of course, not everything is perfect as it should be but it turned out great. Now, talking about the sexual content.... disappointing! It's hard to get horny with a story that is childish and silly, when you have a scene, it's kind of fast and you're not in the mood due to "childish exaggerated humor" and when there is an incest scene, in the case with Lucy, you are already discouraged. There aren't many sex scenes, I mean there's and also many voyeurism but something about that gives you pleasure or satisfies, you don't have much.

Why I did gave 2 stars?
I expected more from this game, at least I'd like to see a constructive story even if it wasn't that spectacular. The game tries to do a DPool imitation but with its own originality, but you know, without much lewd content. This game had everything to have an elaborate plot, a fantastic narrative, but ended up diving into this repetitive childish humor that you can no longer feel like following the dialogues. So everything in the game ends up becoming meaningless, without a narrative focus, nothing you see a story build, characters, etc. I'll give it a two star rating, the graphics are great, but the overall content isn't for me. I'm not being unfair to myself, I wish you success and good luck. I wouldn't play this again, even if tried to add more scenes to make the game more erotic or pornographic.

Yesterday i finished playing the version 0.5 Beta, ( now downloading 0.5 final) and i just had to come here to share what i think about the game (which i rarely do)

-The renders and animations (which its not the best feature of the game for me, but i know its very important for many people) are very good, it can compete with some of the most popular games in this site and theres a decent amount of sexy scenes with all of the girls
-What makes the game stand out the most its that the characters make it a literal joke, its very comical (for my sense of humor at least) from all the games that i played (dont know how many but theres been a lot since i started at 2017-18) every game tryies for you the player to take seriously what happening in the story and the characters, but most of the times the characters and the story are somewhat doll and quite repetitive, altho Mundo does falls into some of the most classic (and overused) Mechanics like moving into a new city, elder pretentious Elder sister, naive younger sister, and mom who doesnt has sex, Mundo brings some really funny and comical twist and turns into the table, it seems to me that the game its inspired, by cartoons, and ecchi/comedy anime
-The Characters are something else, i trully really like the characters My favorite character its Hannah bc its the most the most cartoonish of them all, Lucy its very comecial at times too, i had a blast when they were summoing the demon, and when they were playing striptape, also the girls are beautiful, very tasteful and peculiar, Really love Evelyn its realy hot, and it does look mature enough to be a Milf. Another character that its ALWAYS overlooked in every game that i played, its the dad, the dad never get any attention at all, The dad character of this game its by far my favorite dad character of all the games that i have played he its also very funny in the first part of the game.
-The Story its interesting by the way its being told, its narrated by the MC from a point in the future during a interrogation

The only details that i would critize about the game it's that (for my taste) there isnt enough build up, the things advace a little too fast with the girls, i like it more when theres more seduction in between the characters, and that the taboo breaks little by little, also that Evelyn hasnt taken a lot of time in the screen, we as players doesnt really know her. and last but not least is that the sex scenes can be a little short, BUT it is still a really great game

Just wanted recognize and to thanks @Mundo Games for his amazing work!! Truly cant wait for more, its a shame that the game doesnt gets the attentions it deserves.
Total 4.5 out of 5 stars

One of the best games out there.
I tho to give 4 stars , but I changed mind last sec - also hoping dev will continue to do even better updates and not delay too much.

I dunno what is more beautiful, models look or concept and art overall.
Story is OK tho, could be realistic or little better but fuck who cares if its not boring or grind or prolonged to nowhere , with out the action like many empty content games, Im fine with that too.

Give me gameplay little teasing and good action but not too much rush - and Im happy to give 5 S'

Hilarious visual novel honestly. It reminds me a bit of another favourite of mine, which I can't name because rules. A lot of absurdist humor at great comedic delivery, it's a must play.

[edited because I missed that I couldn't name other games to compare even if I want to because it was a perfect comparison]

Hot girls, hot situations, and some decently funny jokes. Really needs the music and sound effects to sell some of the gags tho, so be sure to play with headphones, and IMO stop playing when you get to Beta releases, because they have no sound or music and lose a lot of their charm. (For the current 0.5 beta, stop when the MC wakes up in Lucy's bed)

I'm reluctant to give this 5 stars because it's really more of a 4 star situation for me, especially when they release betas that are so unfinished, but the final product is really top notch, and games that can make me laugh and be sexy are too rare to not praise. Evelyn stepping on the twig outside the hallway is one of the best gags I've ever seen in a VN. And I really love the Bad Ending choices that 1. don't actually end the game, and 2. typically have a funny joke attached. It encourages leaning into the humor and choosing fun options rather than the "best" options.

Wish it spelled out earlier on that its kind of an absurdist game. Wish there were more situations with the RP teacher, and really wish more characters walked the edge of being reluctantly into the situations before instantly being 100% horny for and subservient to the MC.

I found it funny at first, but after seeing the same juvenile joke over and over and over again, it just got unbearable for me.

A lot of the sex scenes sort of come out of nowhere with no context. Why did I suddenly take a shower with Lucy? Where was the build up to that? Not to mention that I keep questioning the motivations of each character

I went without expectations and when I realized it, I was already laughing and mentally saying “This game is good”
Good mood ✓
Good graphic quality ✓
Animation is good ✓ (It's even fluid, it's not that robotic thing like a lot of games out there)
For the first chapter it has a good length, which is hard to see in newly released games.
Promising, if you enjoy a humor I'm sure you will love this game I highly recommend it not to mention that this is one of the hottest incest games at the moment.

Game is an absolute joy. Gorgeous models, good pacing and humor that will actually make you laugh out loud. Mundo Games know how to use the medium to convey the story as told by the protagonist. This game is top shelf.

I'll just keep it quick: it's not worth playing yet, just like every other Patreon-fueled early access AVN.

The main selling point of this one is the humor, which was pretty funny at first but since it's all the same thing repeating over and over it got less funny. I still enjoyed it to the end of this 2-ish hour experience, unlike others, but it wears out its welcome quite a bit.

There's no sex yet with anyone but the "angel" woman, and what playing around there is with everyone else kind of sucks, like it was put in to appease people before they stopped subbing. Things are going along normally, then BAM the older sister is rubbing herself over your boner in the shower, with virtually zero buildup.

There hasn't been an update since January, so...yeah, just keep this one watched and check back in a few years once the subs dried up and the dev just shits out a 1.0 update and starts making something new citing burnout or whatever the newest excuse is.