This is a gentle reminder to let me know your thoughts when you're less sleep deprived
That makes sense for that story. It's annoyingly unrealistic in that regard and I should really fix it. But I can't think of how the same reasoning applies to the Olivia/Mia scenes. The sexual ones happen when they're by themselves in the dorm. It doesn't seem more realistic for others to be affected by it. Corruption doesn't belong there because Olivia has always had a crush on Mia. She's always wanted to domme her.
Yeah, I agree... That was the part I couldn't figure out what s/he meant exactly. I need to play the new update but as far as I can recall from memory, the only thing that really comes to mind would likely be the cafeteria bit but I don't think that's what s/he was talking about. I'm (currently) at a loss for that.
On reading it again (twice), I think I figured out what their issue was. It's that there's very little to no interactions with anyone else whatsoever. There are multiple scenes with those 2, yet it always seems to be JUST those 2, and they never interact with anyone else. Like it might be rather difficult to believe that Olivia would abandon her clique that quickly and suddenly have 0 interactions with them anymore what so ever, nor would they completely ignore the cafeteria scene (unless all of them also had the deprivation masks). It feels like it's a different story being forced into the larger story rather than feeling like they are of the same story. In the private areas, it makes perfect sense, but in the more public areas, it feels disconnected from the rest of what's happening... That MIGHT be what they meant by the "Olivia/Mia" issue. Though I'm not positive and I can't speak for them, but that is what I'm taking from what they say.
I'm a he for the record, and no less sleep deprived than last time unfortunately. You've got the general idea of what I was (sloppily) trying to convey. not sure I can personally phrase it any better than this.
Gotcha, that makes sense. I can work with this to add some more color to those scenes.
It's great to hear a differing opinion. Since you didn't mention it explicitly, just wanted to check that you've played the scenes in question.
I have played it, yes.
Yeah that's easy to understand and address. The game is a WIP and the foot fetish scene is a dead end, currently. But somehow I got the sense that the comment was about how there was no ambient action during the scene itself. I'm not hearing, "I wish this made a difference later". I'm hearing, "I wish this had an effect during."
I would actually love to see both, however I don't want to influence (push) you one way or another as I'd rather see you put your ideas and thoughts (so to speak) then once you get the bulk of it down and made, to go back and improve on the others as this way you have a foundation that you could connect to... The drawback is if it creates a large enough influence that may cause you to have to rewrite a few scenes.
The npc's did that cause Skyrim is a shitty game that has the depth of a puddle, and the worst storyline and characters ever.
I enjoyed Skyrim until everything got easy. But when things got easy, I thought the game was shallow. I feel like the previous games had better quests. "I feel like the previous games had better quests," is what I say for every new Bethesda game
