OK, I have to say, while short, the game is excellent based on the story given so far. Quite a bit of mystery, good graphics, and it appeals in a way that it could be mainstream. There are a couple of issues I have, but not horrendous.
1. Redneck hillbilly fuckers like myself do have to work hard on the farm, but that does not mean we had it boring like you have this fellow portraying. Hell, except for a few extremely hillbilly folks I know, we have running water, electricity, and know how to party. While I can actually admit to the fact that the attire is correct to how a redneck would dress trying to be all city, most would wear jeans and a decent shirt more than the sweater over the shirt. Just saying. This is not game breaking or anything, just made me laugh. Us rednecks like when city folks try to portray us in some way, as we get good laughs.
2. Organized crime killer, as I learned as a specific type of security and as law enforcement, are really really good at blending into a scene. The way you have this organization portrayed is that these folks do not walk among people. Organized crime folks not only blend in perfectly, they do it daily, and the folks who do not make the news are walking around with people thinking they are the best folks to invite over for the game and chill at a gathering. I have seen this with a Russian gentleman who did not have tattoos, which allowed people to not think about him until it was too late. I saw the same with some South American men and women, who had me fooled until they were explained to my slow redneck self.
I am not criticizing in the least. Most people never deal with real organized crime types. For this game, I am sure it is fine what you are portraying, but Widow is far better at being what is real life than the MC. Also, the majority of crime bosses do not mind their folks getting laid. An Italian fellow I know quoted Oscar Wilde when I was at a small gathering and I was fascinated. A friend in the Marine Corps was the grandson of someone mentioned multiple times as a friend in the Gotti Autobiography and he introduced me to a couple of folks when we went to NYC. For a redneck from the hills of Tennessee, that was an experience, lol.
So, not sure if this will even be paid attention to, but thought, as a fan, I would offer my 2 pennies.