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Netori falls under NTR. NTR is the umbrella term for Netorare, Netorase, and Netori
FireKitten
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Futa protag! Dom and sub paths! I can't wait to see more, good luck dev.
Wilwock
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Hey MessiahXx, nice game but I think some things need to be improve :
- 2.8 GB for 1389 images.... please.... compress them... you can reduce x3 or 4 without visibly deteriorating the quality.
- little font are good for big screen, but for little screen it's less good (if you don't know how to make a variable font size, or just lazy, I advice to just increase a little bit the font to be nearly good for everybody)
This is personal opinions of the thing I think in bad :
- Overall I think you're images are too narrow/zoomed. Don't know if it because of some technical difficulty, but some more wide pic would be less oppressive and center only when need it. => go look some great games and look a the framing.
- In the blowjob scene, I think the mounth need to be improve. Don't like the deformation. Look like monkey. Or fish in some frame. That look like hard to do, but the way it is, no deformation is better than deformation like this.
- The combat can be way more epic if you can make just some more frame of movement.
The rest is good. Original scenario*, correct dialog, good color, good humor, huge potential.
If the quality greetly improve, this game would be a good succes even with its uncommon tags.
Good luck
*can't fully judge for the moment but seem like a long and complex script. And in this 0.1, it seems like we are at the start of the disruptive element and it look like the initial situation is not finished. So it feel like the story is rushed. It's not a problematic in little game but here seems like a long ride so please : take your time.
- 2.8 GB for 1389 images.... please.... compress them... you can reduce x3 or 4 without visibly deteriorating the quality.
- little font are good for big screen, but for little screen it's less good (if you don't know how to make a variable font size, or just lazy, I advice to just increase a little bit the font to be nearly good for everybody)
This is personal opinions of the thing I think in bad :
- Overall I think you're images are too narrow/zoomed. Don't know if it because of some technical difficulty, but some more wide pic would be less oppressive and center only when need it. => go look some great games and look a the framing.
- In the blowjob scene, I think the mounth need to be improve. Don't like the deformation. Look like monkey. Or fish in some frame. That look like hard to do, but the way it is, no deformation is better than deformation like this.
- The combat can be way more epic if you can make just some more frame of movement.
The rest is good. Original scenario*, correct dialog, good color, good humor, huge potential.
If the quality greetly improve, this game would be a good succes even with its uncommon tags.
Good luck
*can't fully judge for the moment but seem like a long and complex script. And in this 0.1, it seems like we are at the start of the disruptive element and it look like the initial situation is not finished. So it feel like the story is rushed. It's not a problematic in little game but here seems like a long ride so please : take your time.
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BunnyBehaviour
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This does feel like a edgier version of Futa's World of NTR. It has the same concept of pills becoming obsolete and multiple paths including both domination and submission. The similarities so close I think it's by the same creator tbh or they just took heavy inspiration from the game. Don't get me wrong, it was fun and interesting. I like the extreme elements to it and hope to see more.
Mentioned this just because i just finished playing one game to the other.
Mentioned this just because i just finished playing one game to the other.
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Thanks so much for the feedback!
I totally get that some people are a bit uneasy about certain fetishes, so I’m doing my best to be open without giving too much away. The main kinks are already laid out, and the niche ones will be optional.
It's coming, not sure how the review might take tho...
The font will be bigger, and I’ll look into compressing the files without losing quality.
I think having those zoomed shots adds cinematic feeling to it, but yeah I think there should be more variety.
Honestly I kinda like the deformation, it might look bit goofy, but idk, I dig it. I might tune it down a bit.
The combat had way more frames at the beggining, it didn't work that well imo.
I guess you gotta wait and see
Thanks for the feedback!
There is definitely some inspiration there!
As always, use the Joiplay emulator. If some game doesn't work, just need to update the emulator and it works every single time.
As long as it is Renpy/Rpgm and some others. Works with non porn games too.
Asked the same, didn't get a reply, not quite sure why, seems like a rather important question given how much non-NTR enjoyers usually hate NTR with a passion and being subby is not even remotely the same as being into NTR.
Cajun Fox
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I've updated Dev Notes.Asked the same, didn't get a reply, not quite sure why, seems like a rather important question given how much non-NTR enjoyers usually hate NTR with a passion and being subby is not even remotely the same as being into NTR.
Ah, thanks, good to know, even if it is a bit sad from an entirely personal perspective cuz neither NTR nor Domination is my cup of tea. Good luck with the game anyway, though!
Arkade
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The way the note is worded is not good. But it sounds like Dom = no NTR of any sort- you just take control and fuck who you want to fuck.
Then the sub path splits depending how submissive you go- as in.. probably starts as netorase and if you continue to push your friend to do things they eventually fall further down that path.
Personally I just wish there was a mean/sadistic- futa in the mix.. Maybe there is because I haven't played the game yet.. want to wait until more updates. but I think in a game with many futas- dicksize variety goes a long way. Something like that is a trope that separates the power and influence of characters- especially in NTR works in manga/hgames. A meaner control freak type futa with a bigger than average dick for purposes of intimidating and able to make good on threats. Because who is going to be afraid of the netori side character if the MC can fill everyone up better. Even if the story is wholesome overall I think different sizes adds a ton of variety.- cockshock can work multiple times a scene if each character reveals are more shocking than the last. Clothed sex too is good for variety. Hopefully it turns out well.
Then the sub path splits depending how submissive you go- as in.. probably starts as netorase and if you continue to push your friend to do things they eventually fall further down that path.
Personally I just wish there was a mean/sadistic- futa in the mix.. Maybe there is because I haven't played the game yet.. want to wait until more updates. but I think in a game with many futas- dicksize variety goes a long way. Something like that is a trope that separates the power and influence of characters- especially in NTR works in manga/hgames. A meaner control freak type futa with a bigger than average dick for purposes of intimidating and able to make good on threats. Because who is going to be afraid of the netori side character if the MC can fill everyone up better. Even if the story is wholesome overall I think different sizes adds a ton of variety.- cockshock can work multiple times a scene if each character reveals are more shocking than the last. Clothed sex too is good for variety. Hopefully it turns out well.