VN Ren'Py According To Sofia [v0.02.10] [GrimaGrima]

[grima_grima]

You are aware that you just opened a door into a dark void of ntr enthustiastic comments that will suck you in into deep depravity?
Have fun dealing with that......I will

My point is that, the story as I have in my mind is still going to be (mostly) the same, but if I can do some small changes in the way the story is told to please more people, I think it might be worth a try

 

[Sieglinnde]

I love Sofia having a big, big ass

 

[Gonzolino]

My point is that, the story as I have in my mind is still going to be (mostly) the same, but if I can do some small changes in the way the story is told to please more people, I think it might be worth a try

Definitely......your game - your story, never try to please a special audience.
Even if I'm just hammering out ideas and/or preferences, please don't think I want to trie to make you change your game into my likings......I hate it if people trie to do this.
Stick to yourself and what you feel is right, the feedback to your game seems to proof you right so far.

Just consider those head tits.......ah fuck it, Im doing it again

 

[Gonzolino]

I love Sofia having a big, big ass

Ariana's ass is fiiine......the wole model tbh

 

[Yakis0ba]

I'm no expert, but if she's using all this "it's not cheating, it's just X" logic, is it NTR? Sounds like a variety of free use to me.

But I'm biased. One of my favorite things ever is an audio porn of "roommate deepthroats you while talking about the date she was just on with her boyfriend, and not understanding why he thinks the two of you are too close".

 

[Harted]

My point is that, the story as I have in my mind is still going to be (mostly) the same, but if I can do some small changes in the way the story is told to please more people, I think it might be worth a try

Yeah stick to what you wanted to do first, dont listen too much request, that's how some game fall off. I trust you enough with this first chapter, stick to your things mate.

 

[potatoHead42]

Come on, folks! Keep bringing your ideas!
I'm not promissing I'll add them to the game, but at least I can expand my view on the subject, since I mentioned this is my first try on NTR/NTS/Cheating area.

Accidents aren't cheating.

 

[grima_grima]

Accidents aren't cheating.

Yes, but that's rule #3

 

[potatoHead42]

Yes, but that's rule #3
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Oh yes, but I meant... accidental touching... accidental "blowies"... accidental penetration... anything that is an accident.

Also things that are a bet or part of games should not count either.

 

[grima_grima]

Oh yes, but I meant... accidental touching... accidental "blowies"... accidental penetration... anything that is an accident.

Also things that are a bet or part of games should not count either.

Well... Let's just say that chapter 2 may or may not have something accidental or dare/bet related

 

[grima_grima]

According to Sofia is Going Multilingual!

Big news - According to Sofia is getting a language upgrade!
Work is underway to make Demo 2.0 (Chapter 1) available in English, Portuguese, and Spanish (thanks to Xytor for the Spanish translations!!! - you can visit his Patreon

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Sofia’s "official" reaction:

• "Finally! Now when someone grabs my butt by accident, I'll understand their apology in three languages! …I mean, it's still an accident, right?"

It's still work in progress, but this is the first step toward letting Sofia's silly logic travel worldwide!

Cheers!

 

[Nobody1408]

Hey, your suggestion got me intrigued, so I want to make sure I understand it right.

The way the game works now would be what you're calling the "willing cuck" route, correct?

And you're suggesting I add an option where Sofia doesn't tell Bob about the "things" that happen when he's not around, and she just keeps those memories to herself instead of sharing them with him? (she could "re-live" the memories instead of telling Bob when they are talking)

Basically yeah, like the whole thing with her telling Bob its fine. What I meant was like keeping Bob being clueless the whole time instead of like eventually accepting that she's actually cheating and he's "fine with it" A.K.A. Cucked.

Sofia so far is perfect the way she is describing the situations. Which obviously sounds ridiculous but in a good kind a way for us. I might just be speaking for me but hey just throwing an idea out there. Great job so far.

 

[Nobody1408]

I'm no expert, but if she's using all this "it's not cheating, it's just X" logic, is it NTR? Sounds like a variety of free use to me.

But I'm biased. One of my favorite things ever is an audio porn of "roommate deepthroats you while talking about the date she was just on with her boyfriend, and not understanding why he thinks the two of you are too close".

See but that's the thing, I'm confused myself. Freeuse is just straight to sex, no engagement about it with whenever or whatever.

So I think it's more like Airhead NTR (if that's even a thing), where Sofia makes dumb excuses and Bob eats it up easily.

I am kind of curious if it goes that route

 

[grima_grima]

Hot But Not Smart

This was the name I was considering using for the game when I first started working on it...

I like According To Sofia better... And you, which one would you choose? Any other ideas for the name? (Just out of curiousity, 'cause I'm not changing the game name )

Cheers.

 

[TonyMurray]

Hot But Not Smart

This was the name I was considering using for the game when I first started working on it...

I like According To Sofia better... And you, which one would you choose? Any other ideas for the name? (Just out of curiousity, 'cause I'm not changing the game name )

Cheers.

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I quite like the name According to Sofia - it feels like a TV show title with the lead character narrating their story. In line with that, I did like the way the rules were introduced in-game, it had a good feel to it. Plus the current title is a good description of the game without giving it away completely.

 

[no_name_742]

Hot But Not Smart

This was the name I was considering using for the game when I first started working on it...

I like According To Sofia better... And you, which one would you choose? Any other ideas for the name? (Just out of curiousity, 'cause I'm not changing the game name )

Cheers.

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i perfer "according to sofia" its more clever "hot but not smart" just sounds like an backhanded compliment, kinda just being mean. it also doesnt exactly roll off the tongue and isnt much of very descriptive of the game, it would be like calling the game "dumb blond"

 

[grima_grima]

Player Choices

Besides working on translations, I'm also adding player choices to the game! (Yes, I heard you...)

From now on, players will be able to pick between three different paths:

1. Loyal Path - Sofia stays loyal to Bob
   1. No Rulebook
   2. A shorter, more wholesome version of the story
2. Cuckold Path - Sofia openly shares everything with Bob
   1. She creates her Rulebook
   2. Bob gets aroused listening to her stories
   3. He even encourages her to go further with his friends
3. Oblivious Path - Sofia keeps it all to herself
   1. She re-lives the scenes only in her mind
   2. She still creates her Rulebook, but never shows it
   3. Bob remains unaware of what really happens with his friends.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on these paths!

Cheers!

 

[Gonzolino]

Player Choices

Besides working on translations, I'm also adding player choices to the game! (Yes, I heard you...)

From now on, players will be able to pick between three different paths:

1. Loyal Path- Sofia stays loyal to Bob
   1. No Rulebook
   2. A shorter, more wholesome version of the story
2. Cuckold Path- Sofia openly shares everything with Bob
   1. She creates her Rulebook
   2. Bob gets aroused listening to her stories
   3. He even encourages her to go further with his friends
3. Oblivious Path- Sofia keeps it all to herself
   1. She re-lives the scenes only in her mind
   2. She still creates her Rulebook, but never shows it
   3. Bob remains unaware of what really happens with his friends.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on these paths!

Cheers!

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Wow, you show great effort and dedication to your game, I hope you don't overdo it by trying to please everyone, but you change into different routes is impressive.
Since you asked about opinions to those paths I'll give you my two cents....please don't understand it as critique.
1. I don't really get why a NTR game needs a love route at all, if you are not into this genre there are enough vanilla or harem games for you out there to play.
2. for me personally it would be a mix of route 2+3, I already described it in an earlier comment.
I don't want to encourage her to cheat, I'd like to see her do it and tease me with it.......officially I don't like it, my mind tells me not to, but my cock gets hard by her teasing. kind of like Sofia corrupting me into "her" kink, and I'm so helplessly hot for her that I can't do anything about it.
Encouraging the girl into cucking me always feels kind of pathetic for me, like "hey babe, you could go suck the cock of that guy, wouldn't it be hot"....doesn't really do it for me, rather the opposite.
3. I don't really know what to think of the third route as it seems kind of passive for the MC, what is he even there for in this route if everything just goes on in Sofia's head?
Maybe I just get the description wrong, but it seems like mystery NTR without mystery, that's new for me and maybe I'm just to sceptical. (I really like mystery NTR btw)
I hope my replie got you some insight or encouragement and not the opposite, I think your dedication to this game is impressive.

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Player Choices

Besides working on translations, I'm also adding player choices to the game! (Yes, I heard you...)

From now on, players will be able to pick between three different paths:

1. Loyal Path- Sofia stays loyal to Bob
   1. No Rulebook
   2. A shorter, more wholesome version of the story
2. Cuckold Path- Sofia openly shares everything with Bob
   1. She creates her Rulebook
   2. Bob gets aroused listening to her stories
   3. He even encourages her to go further with his friends
3. Oblivious Path- Sofia keeps it all to herself
   1. She re-lives the scenes only in her mind
   2. She still creates her Rulebook, but never shows it
   3. Bob remains unaware of what really happens with his friends.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on these paths!

Cheers!

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I love the creativity behind these paths! Really! This means that you care about your Game and your Players. The Loyal Path sounds like a heartwarming choice, perfect for those who want a sweet, devoted storyline between Sofia and Bob (like me)—definitely a cozy and sexy vibe! Choosing the Loyal Path is like wrapping yourself in a warm blanket of big naked tiddies, love and trust! Sofia staying true to Bob makes for such a wholesome, feel-good journey—perfect for anyone craving a story that s more heart and less drama! Also..this Path is funny for those of us who can get "him up" without seeing his gf gettin`fucked by another man (men)...! According to some threads...it s rare these days! ...jk...or am i?!?

The Cuckold and Oblivious Paths are interesting, but they ve got that extra layer of complexity that might not hit the same cozy notes for me. They re bold, though, for players who want a spicier or more secretive twist! I am good with that.

Thank you for your hard work.

 

[TonyMurray]

Player Choices

Besides working on translations, I'm also adding player choices to the game! (Yes, I heard you...)

From now on, players will be able to pick between three different paths:

1. Loyal Path- Sofia stays loyal to Bob
   1. No Rulebook
   2. A shorter, more wholesome version of the story
2. Cuckold Path- Sofia openly shares everything with Bob
   1. She creates her Rulebook
   2. Bob gets aroused listening to her stories
   3. He even encourages her to go further with his friends
3. Oblivious Path- Sofia keeps it all to herself
   1. She re-lives the scenes only in her mind
   2. She still creates her Rulebook, but never shows it
   3. Bob remains unaware of what really happens with his friends.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on these paths!

Cheers!

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Like Gonzolino, I do wonder if trying to please everyone is a necessary step. It's good to listen, but it's best to stick to your vision unless you come to an issue with it, or a suggestion genuinely takes you and changes your vision (some ideas are genuinely good), and hopefully that's why you've come to this decision.

For me, I also feel that a loyal path is not always necessary in these games. StrawberryCheese83 and I have clashed good-naturedly on this one in the past on another thread, so you can see there are valid opinions on both sides. I have nothing against a loyal path, and will play it if it exists and I like the game, but here, would it be taking you too far from the original premise of the game? The whole point is "According to Sofia, it's not cheating if..." - if she's being 100% loyal, and there will be no rulebook for this path, what will the premise of the game be?

For the other two paths, I would be fine with you keeping the original "kinetic" gameplay, but if you are comfortable with the extra work that multiple paths will bring, I admit that I prefer choices and to be able to play twice (or more) with different outcomes. Paths 2 and 3 would essentially be Sharing and Cheating (some might label them NTS and NTR). With the third path - "Oblivious" - would it be the case that Bob catches bits and pieces, but doesn't see the whole picture? So he can become suspicious, but won't see anything that is strong enough to allow him to act, or even to question Sofia? Or will it essentially be like watching the "loyal" path, from his point of view, where nothing untoward is happening at all?