VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Acting Lessons [v1.0.2] [DrPinkCake]

A rough diamond, but shines nonetheless. LI's are hit or miss but when they hit for you (character itself or just optics) they are to die for. Animations for H scenes are very rough, underdeveloped, jarring and generally took away from the game more than they added. Romance scenes were - due to writing - top notch, even though I felt the pacing quite a bit too fast. I wished the game took more time between each major story step to further the relationships between characters.

As I read there are multiple vastly different branches the story can take but my experience stems from only one playthrough with the paths I organically took. What I got was a heart punching story that was as funny as it was beautiful.

10/10 for the best wingman in VNs ever

Don't play this for wanking, kids! Otherwise if masturbating while crying is your kink, or you just like good emotional stories, absolutely recommend.

This is one of all time favorites on the site. The models were absolutely gorgeous, the story was excellent and I played it straight through! I wasn't completely in love with the ending (no spoilers) but that's really the only negative thing I can say about this one. One of the sites masterpieces!

It's a fabulous game with a lot of emotions and well a lot of girls.

Overall Rating 5/5:
Animations 4/5
Story 6/5
Sex scenes 5/5
Girls 5/5
Characters 6/5

In short, this is an excellent game. One of the endings is very sad so good luck with the heart break.

-SPOILERS ALERT-

What an emotional Rollercoaster. Imma be honest, the girls were decent to say the least, Megan and Melissa were the aspiring actress and the girl from a shitty household looking for comfort, which were my main points, Rena and co. were just kinda...there. Ana was just a dumb girl who didn't realize just how good she had it before she destroyed something good. But the main star? Liam. What a fucking brother. Holy shit. He's one of those guys I would go through every thick and thin with. I'm fucking glad that he managed to get through the shittiest points in his life. And he's someone I would undoubtedly go bros before hoes in every single capacity. One of the best buds in fiction imo.

Writing was well done, the game is somewhat short but doesn't overstay its welcome, but I'm going to be honest, Liam was the selling point. My man is a brother through and through, and I'll do anything amd everything to ensure he lives in every playthrough.

If you want to read a VN with a good bromance? This is it. The sex scenes were kinda mid and mechanical, but I don't hold it against the creator in the least bit. Liam was the greatest damn treasure of this shit. I would go through thick and thin with a brother like that.

Absolutely fantastic game.
Great story and superb design.
I was not expecting to be so emotionally attached to characters in a game of this genre.
One of, if not, the best games I've played from this site.

One of the saddest, yet funniest and most heart-warming games I have ever played. This is a prime example of how Visual novels as a medium can be used for amazing storytelling and artistry, providing a much more emotional experience than reading a book or watching a movie.

Game Version: V1.0.2 (Completed)

The H-scenes are below average, the animations are just bad. But I highly recommend it not for the H-scenes but for the story. I came for a quick wank, stayed for a roller coaster of a ride.

Go in blind first and you can use the walkthrough it does not spoil much; this game will give you a ride I highly recommend.

5/5 did cry.
The other time I cried for an H-game was with the one where disabled persons jap school if you know you know.

(Version Reviewed: Completed Game)

Excellent game. Has one of the most tragic choices to make among any AVN that I've played. Great story. Great best friend of the MC. Good renders and animation. The game has served as an inspiration for better story telling in AVNs and rightfully so. I liked Melissa, but I found it difficult to like any of the other LIs. It's probably one of few complaints about the game.

Overall - 9/10.

A story that will not leave anyone indifferent, but not many people will want to try it again. This game is a real emotional swing.
And now I'll move on to my rating system.
Graphics 6\10
Animation 4\10
Scenario 9\10
Text 9\10
Sound 8\10
Gameplay 7\10

The result is a 7.2\10 game, however, for my emotional side, I round the value to 8, which by the standards of the site is 4 stars.

Story neat, much wow
Emotionally not nice
Normal dick protagonist, so damn Oo
Such girls ... such sweet ^^
Fuck the ending... much sad, much depression... why you do this? (

Overall goog story game, right amount of porn (rather few scenes, more focus on character arcs), 9/10, am recomending

Review of Version 1.02 Complete Game

This is an example of the top tier of VN gaming. Fantastic story, phenomenal writing, characters with heart and soul, beautiful art.

The story is gripping with joyous situations and equally sad situations and the player actually feels both. There are unexpected twists and multiple endings, some good, some heart wrenching.

The characters have depth and grow as the game advances.

The art is excellent, the characters look like individuals.

Everyone that enjoys VNs should play through games of this quality to really learn what the genre can be.

Really enjoyed the first parts of the game but the ending took a real turn. I respect that they had a story to tell but it's a real weird choice for a porn game and really ruins the mood. Otherwise, the renders are good and the writing up until the ending is good.

at their core, there are two types of plot-based adult visual novels: there are those where almost everything is predetermined and the choices you make around love interests do not matter. and there are those where the love interest choices and the main storyline are somewhat separated

Acting Lesson's biggest flaw is that it spends a lot of time trying to convince you it is the latter when it's really the former. it has a reason for doing this: it wants to lead you to what is meant to be a big, heavy, emotional choice and climax. the problem with something like this is that it only works if you play along with it. once you stop doing that, once you make the choices it doesn't expect you to make, it falls apart.


graphics are fully "mid": animations are just a step or two removed from stop motion and the renders, while slightly above average, are brought down by some of them featuring faces that range from "hilarious" to "outright terrifying"

Although having some problems this gamme is one of the best completed games in the site the story was more static than dynamic like all endings are just obligation there were many chances to do something that really made more sense but you couldn't my main problem was that you can't refuse megan whatever you do and however you treat her charecters were really good and they have the best side kick liam graphics ais good for an old game i really recomend giving it a try

Beatiful game, you can jerk off and then cry at the same time while playing. I'll rated it with five stars because DrPinkCake was just starting when he did this game, and then he created the GOAT. So I'll give the five stars because I think this game was the reason for him to improve, and for god sake, this was already an awesome game, on the top list of his genre. Way too funny, entertaining and emotional stuff. Characters, art, storyline, MC, gameplay. Great, great, great.

This game has some really good writing, for a porn game. The plot is a little cliched but still keeps you hooked and the characters are great flaws and all. There is a bit of railroading the MC but that is to be expected.

Graphics are a bit dated and the animations stilted but its serviceable.

Music is fine if not a bit generic.

Overall a really great experience. Plus it has a beginning, middle and an ending! Imagine that an ending!

Was not expecting such a deep game, this isn't just a porn game but a artistic masterpiece, I have yet to play Being a DIK but I feel I must now, kudos to the author of this wonderful game.

When I play these games I usually go down the lust route rather than love - fuck as many girls as possible, which in this game I accomplished, and while I didn't really like Megan, the game is an emotional rollercoaster where for once your actions really do have consequences which makes you crazy.

At the time of my writing this, AL has a rating of 4.5 or so, and nearly 600 pages of discussion. I cannot for the life of me understand just why. If I had to hazard a guess, I'd chalk it up to BaDIK's influence, which admittedly had an impact on my own expectations from the outset, too.

See, I think one major problem with this VN is that it's just inconsistent/unfinished. You get these quintessential Telltale notifications to indicate major choices and consequences, and the dev even makes an admirable attempt at implementing some of your (minor) decisions. Up until a certain point where it's arbitrarily decided you do this but not that.

Just to illustrate what I mean:
Why does MC fall for Megan, despite my choosing every option to show otherwise? You get plenty of choices to shut the others down, but when it comes to MC's feelings for Megan, your options are either wishy-washy or do fuck-all. If MC's ex was a cheater, wouldn't it be logical for him to have an early option to put his foot down and say, frankly, he wants Melissa or Rena instead, no more lies. No, instead we are a complete pushover who waits until he really does become a cheater (you have to if you want the others and not the wallflower) because, ostensibly, he is mentally retarded.

Perfect example of this behaviour:
Midway through the story, you can get Melissa to confront you about the two of you (after your just having fucked Megan). You get a fucking flashback sequence of Melissa giving you unambiguous signs that she is fond of you. Your reaction: Wow, I held her hand, kissed her, had sex with her, saved her from an abusive stepfather, selflessly gave her best friend and herself food and shelter -- you mean to tell me all of those things meant something to her? :surprisedpikachu: Not even a hint of fucking irony in sight.

I've read somewhere on this site the dev is from Sweden, and I can well believe that, but I mean, fuck me running, why does he have to be so aggressively Swedish? I feel as if his idea of a romantically involved, albeit emotionally abused, man is a wee bit skewed. Perhaps I am unfair in equating the protagonist with the author -- after all, to his credit he didn't go for the low-hanging interracial cuckold fruit with Liam -- but I swear, if he intended that scene where you're cucked by your fiancée and a gay-looking Indian man to be a genuinely heart-wrenching moment, I don't think he succeeded. The real kicker was a reference to this scene in the last chapter. Your ex found your life as a crypto-rich homebody too dull, so she cheated on you to make you care and liven things up again. Your reaction at the time was to flee and feel betrayed. Your reaction in retrospect? Well, she was wrong but for the right reasons! There's just no winning in this fucking game, no suspension of disbelief, unless you're spiritually Swedish.

(The game gets an extra star for including Melissa because she's cute. I'd pull her out of a house fire any day.)

Even 4 years after completion, this game game still haunts me. Amazing game and was my first entry into the VN world. Wonderfully crafted story with a dash of romance, humor, and a choice so traumatizing it had me laying in bed for two days trying to process emotions I never though a "porn game" could make me feel.

Strange times we live in...

It's a fantastic game, together with Acting Lessons they are very good games.

From Acting Lessons I love his story, it is very moving.

You can tell from DrPinkCake the love he puts into his works. A five star.