If I had written this review 2 months ago, it would have earned a much higher rating, perhaps even 5 stars. Now however, I hate to admit that this has sunk from one of my favourite VNs, to barely above "meh" territory.
The first 4-5 chapters were nicely done. We had interesting characters introduced, good humour and an interesting story. These chapters were light-hearted, but had enough drama in them to keep the story from being dull.
Then the last 2 chapters rolls around, and suddenly tries to make the story Romeo & Juliet 2.0, with even more drama sprinkled on top. The story used to feel real, in that we had mostly good times, but enough bad elements involved, that it never felt perfect. Most people can probably relate to this feeling.
Now we are just bombarded with tragedies, drama, confusing plots and weird character development.
It honestly feels like the dev suddenly watched Game of thrones a bit too much, and decided it was necessary to kill off a couple of characters and add a bit more controversy to the story, which is not what was needing IMO.
The game was already leading up to a dramatic enough ending with Liam's character arch, and plenty enough excitement could have been made from that angle alone. No need to make every aspect of the ending depressing.
Still giving an above average rating, since I still enjoy the first many chapters, but the last 2 chapters sadly ended up making the story worse in my eyes.
Edit*
The game have reached its final release, so I thought it would only be fair to update the review to match this.
The final chapter somehow manages to salvage most of the things that were done poorly in the last couple of chapters and manages to give a satisfying ending to the game.
I will add an extra star to the rating, given that I did not think it would be possible for me to feel satisfied once I reached the end, but was proven wrong (even if the ending is still bittersweet), and the story is wrapped up fairly nicely.
I am actually happy to have been proven wrong about my fears of how the game was shaping up. Good on you, DrPinkCake.