VN Ren'Py Actual Roommates 2 - Sorority Crash [Ch.2] [HanakoXVN]

[Acsuka]

Yes, come on... I loved the first part and I totally played the harem route because it's impossible to say no to girls... I loved them all, and I think there are only beautiful girls here too... But this game is completely different... The author has now transferred the success of the previous game to a "mediocre" university game, where there are idiotic girl and boy "clubs"... Maybe the girl "club" is okay, but what is the need for boys in a lesbian game? I'm a "legend" who fucks first and only asks later... So then, why should I help a "dick" candidate get panties? I didn't help him, I don't want to be close to little idiots and I didn't help the other two guys make up at the party. What do I have to do with what they're arguing about? I don't even know them. I want girls in this game, not wasting my time with whining loser boys... And of course I'm already sure that in order to progress the story, I have to join the Alpha club too... Another negative is that we can only get Becky together with Miho. Why doesn't she have a solo route? I hope Rhea will have a scene in the next episode, because she's the best girl so far, and of course Julia who appeared at the end of the episode... And why isn't Tori LI? That girl is so hot that eggs would fry on her body... Of course, these are all just my thoughts, and there are a lot of questions about the future... Despite my "negative" thoughts, this could be a very good game, and I'm looking forward to the sequel... I hope I didn't hurt anyone's feelings, especially not the game's creator, but I felt like I had to say this... Peace...

 

[Buletti]

Yes, come on... I loved the first part and I totally played the harem route because it's impossible to say no to girls... I loved them all, and I think there are only beautiful girls here too... But this game is completely different... The author has now transferred the success of the previous game to a "mediocre" university game, where there are idiotic girl and boy "clubs"... Maybe the girl "club" is okay, but what is the need for boys in a lesbian game? I'm a "legend" who fucks first and only asks later... So then, why should I help a "dick" candidate get panties? I didn't help him, I don't want to be close to little idiots and I didn't help the other two guys make up at the party. What do I have to do with what they're arguing about? I don't even know them. I want girls in this game, not wasting my time with whining loser boys... And of course I'm already sure that in order to progress the story, I have to join the Alpha club too... Another negative is that we can only get Becky together with Miho. Why doesn't she have a solo route? I hope Rhea will have a scene in the next episode, because she's the best girl so far, and of course Julia who appeared at the end of the episode... And why isn't Tori LI? That girl is so hot that eggs would fry on her body... Of course, these are all just my thoughts, and there are a lot of questions about the future... Despite my "negative" thoughts, this could be a very good game, and I'm looking forward to the sequel... I hope I didn't hurt anyone's feelings, especially not the game's creator, but I felt like I had to say this... Peace...

To be fair there where some male characters in AR 1 as well. And I don`t think you will have to join the sorority. Imho it all leads to a choice wheter to stay with your roommates or join ASS (have no sigmas on my keyboard). Already indicated while masturbating under the shower.

This would mean a crazy shitload of work by Hanako as she would have to maintain to separate story branches but to me it sounds like the crazy challenge she would put herself into.

Looking very much forward to how the story unfolds.

 

[HanakoXVN]

I want girls in this game, not wasting my time with whining loser boys...

That's why there's the option to not engage with them.

And of course I'm already sure that in order to progress the story, I have to join the Alpha club too...

No, you won't. Story will progress regardless if you join or not.

Another negative is that we can only get Becky together with Miho. Why doesn't she have a solo route?

'Cause those two were created specifically for those who wanted a poly relationship in the game.

And why isn't Tori LI? That girl is so hot that eggs would fry on her body...

'Cause she didn't exist before I started writing the dorm hangout scene. Maybe she'll appear again in the dorm route if people want to see more of her.

 

[Acsuka]

That's why there's the option to not engage with them.


No, you won't. Story will progress regardless if you join or not.


'Cause those two were created specifically for those who wanted a poly relationship in the game.


'Cause she didn't exist before I started writing the dorm hangout scene. Maybe she'll appear again in the dorm route if people want to see more of her.

Thanks for the answers. So I can avoid boys without any consequences, then that's good. It's also reassuring that the "girl club" is not mandatory. Of course, regardless of that, I admit that the dress was very sexy on her. I'm still sad about Becky, but unfortunately that's my loss then... I would be really happy if Tori was really LI, because that girl is very hot... And again, sorry if I overreacted a bit with my comment. One last request, if you allow me: Please give this beautiful woman more scenes in a few episodes (spoiler)... It's okay if it's not spicy, just so we can see her, because now she's even more beautiful than before...

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[Avaron1974]

So I can avoid boys without any consequences,

Well, it is a lesbian game, purely lesbian. The boys are only there in the same capacity as the ones from the first game, extras.

 

[FatGiant]

want to see more of her.

Chalk me up for more cuddles with the Cuddles Queen. You did a wonderful job with her. And I have to say, I'm not a big fan of over tattooed persons, but I'll forgive her that over her warm post-coital cuddles.

+1

 

[Bingoogus]

Neat, played it, loved it, but i knew i would before i started since i loved the first one, looking forward to the next update.

 

[Ssato243]

please let us havwe a big harem klioke the first one love this game

 

[FaceCrap]

Noticed that if you happen to make choices that give you a mix of Legend/Empress points, you get locked out of some choices either way.

e.g. When visiting ASS offering to help clean up, you can't choose the legend or the empress option when they trick you in tryin on the uniform...

And what's with the constant toggling of $ config.menu_include_disabled?
either always show them or never... not this half-hearted sometimes showing sometimes hidden.

 

[MRMIdAS2k]

Couple of spelling/grammar niggles.

"It was this much see-through" is ok, but a bit clunky, "it was this see-through" or "it was as see-through as this" feel better.

"something like this, isn't it?" should be "somthing like this, is it?"

And that's all I found.

 

[HanakoXVN]

And what's with the constant toggling of $ config.menu_include_disabled?
either always show them or never... not this half-hearted sometimes showing sometimes hidden.

'Cause sometimes I want to show the player the choices they can't make because of lack of points.
Then I turn it off 'cause otherwise the game would look like this:


Inb4 "You should do X, Y and Z": I'm aware that the execution is sloppy and leads to problems, especially when rolling back. I'm learning this shit as I go along and that was something I added late into coding.

 

[FaceCrap]

"something like this, isn't it?" should be "somthing like this, is it?"

Sorry, just couldn't let it pass Replacing one, presumed, error with another?

I say "presumed" because actually it's not incorrect. "isn't it" here is used as a

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These are used to elicit confirmation or affirmation for a statement (quoted from the above referenced page).
In this case, referring to the "It's not the first time she did something like this"

Also, " IT WAS {i}THIS MUCH{/i} SEE-THROUGH??? " refers to

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It may sound clunky to you, but the amount of see-through can actually vary from 'almost' to 'totally'.
That's why the "THIS MUCH" was emphasized.

 

[MRMIdAS2k]

Sorry, just couldn't let it pass Replacing one, presumed, error with another?

I say "presumed" because actually it's not incorrect. "isn't it" here is used as a

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These are used to elicit confirmation or affirmation for a statement (quoted from the above referenced page).
In this case, referring to the "It's not the first time she did something like this"

Also, " IT WAS {i}THIS MUCH{/i} SEE-THROUGH??? " refers to

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It may sound clunky to you, but the amount of see-through can actually vary from 'almost' to 'totally'.
That's why the "THIS MUCH" was emphasized.

Yeah, either I derped and missed an "e" or my keyboard hates me. lol, but the sentence is still wonky to an Englisher, unless she has an accent quirk, like stereotypes of Welsh folk, "is it?" is still a question, "isn't it?" along with the previous "isn't" drops us into double negative territory, and y'all ain't not wantin to not do that now, ya heard?

and in the other case "As see through as *this*" would be correct then, or even "As sheer as *this*" would work, but "sheer" doesn't seem to be the style of top she's wearing, or even "you could see *this much* through it!" would work, just yeah, to a native speaker, "this much see through" just doesn't feel right, it's like the "You made a porn" joke in Family Guy, it's either "You made porn" or "You made a porno", same here.

 

[FaceCrap]

Yeah, either I derped and missed an "e" or my keyboard hates me. lol, but the sentence is still wonky to an Englisher, unless she has an accent quirk, like stereotypes of Welsh folk, "is it?" is still a question, "isn't it?" along with the previous "isn't" drops us into double negative territory, and y'all ain't not wantin to not do that now, ya heard?

and in the other case "As see through as *this*" would be correct then, or even "As sheer as *this*" would work, but "sheer" doesn't seem to be the style of top she's wearing, or even "you could see *this much* through it!" would work, just yeah, to a native speaker, "this much see through" just doesn't feel right, it's like the "You made a porn" joke in Family Guy, it's either "You made porn" or "You made a porno", same here.

Like I pointed out with the reference pages, grammatically speaking, both cases were correct. So, it's not a question whether it *feels* right or not, or if it's a double negative, but simply if it's grammatically correct, and that's all that matters.

 

[MRMIdAS2k]

Like I pointed out with the reference pages, grammatically speaking, both cases were correct. So, it's not a question whether it *feels* right or not, or if it's a double negative, but simply if it's grammatically correct, and that's all that matters.

Except then with the double negative, it becomes more a statement not a question. Like I said, unless the author is going for a VERY specifically stereotypical accent, the double negative just doesn't work, it then means it IS the first time she did that. And that's clearly not what the scene is going for.

And as I pointed out with my FG example, English is VERY much a languge of feel and nuance and slang and soforth, and while something may look gramatically OK, it might also be entirely incorrect when spoken aloud, and vice versa. It's 3 languages clumsily bolted togther and somtimes it shows. lol.

 

[FaceCrap]

Except then with the double negative, it becomes more a statement not a question. Like I said, unless the author is going for a VERY specifically stereotypical accent, the double negative just doesn't work, it then means it IS the first time she did that. And that's clearly not what the scene is going for.

I'll say this for the last time. Go read the page about question tags...

And as I pointed out with my FG example, English is VERY much a languge of feel and nuance and slang and soforth, and while something may look gramatically OK, it might also be entirely incorrect when spoken aloud, and vice versa. It's 3 languages clumsily bolted togther and somtimes it shows. lol.

Feel, slang or nuance has got nothing to do with it. Also, it doesn't just 'look' grammatically' correct, it IS grammatically correct.

But it's like the old adage, you can lead a horse to water... so I'm going to leave it at this, as there's no point flogging a dead one...

 

[J1215]

I like FemMC
For NPCs, I like Cassie, Becky, Amanda

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I like FemMC; I like that there's a specific NPC(LI) that I like. That's great because that's important to me for me to like the game. I like that there are choices in the game.
I'm looking forward to the continuation of the game.

 

[Avaron1974]

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Becky and Miho come as a couple. They are wanting to add the MC to their relationship, they aren't splitting up. They were added for people looking for a throuple.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

I feel that Becky is a bunch of walking red flags.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

I feel that Becky is a bunch of walking red flags.

If Mom could make things work with Empress Fujikawa, I'm sure we can do it too.