VN Ren'Py Completed Actual Roommates [Steam Final] [HanakoXVN]

[SonsOfLiberty]

Actual Roommates [Ch. 1] [HanakoXVN]

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[Deleted member 1769437]

Really enjoyed this. Here's my, hopefully constructive, notes.

Spoiler: Writing

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Spoiler: Complaints About Decisions

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Spoiler: Storytelling / Image Nitpicks

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But yeah, really enjoyed this first release and I'm looking forward to Step 2 in April.

 

[Malika1234]

please be good!

 

[FatGiant]

please be good!

Relax, it is... so far it's quite good.

 

[Malika1234]

Relax, it is... so far it's quite good.

Thank you for your feedback... i will play it soon!

 

[kinvar]

finally some Lesbian harem games , their really aren't enough of these .
MOAR I SAY .
seriously though good job so far keep it up .

 

[Lexkan]

Unofficial Android Port [Chapter 2]
(With German & Spanish Translation)

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Spoiler: Images

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Spoiler: German Translation

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Android Port By Naxle
German Translation By Agent0815
Spanish Translation By LokiStark

 

[Joshy92]

Wow these women look beautiful.
I would totally ask them out on dates and hold their hands.

 

[deltahalo241]

My God, they were room-mates?!

 

[MixQQ]

Wow these women look beautiful.
I would totally ask them out on dates and hold their hands.

you don't have any chances, because they are all lesbians

 

[Joshy92]

you don't have any chances, because they are all lesbians

Thats true.
But that doesn't mean I can't be their male best friend.

Maybe they will even let me watch all the hot lesbian action that's going to happen.

 

[FatGiant]

Thats true.
But that doesn't mean I can't be their male best friend.

Maybe they will even let me watch all the hot lesbian action that's going to happen.

I think you will see most of it... they don't seem shy about it also... Thankfully.

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Looks veeery interesting. Those future tags arr right up my alley.

 

[lnomsim]

Are the renders in the first chapter final?
The quality isn't really good.

There is a lot of over-exposition, it's grainy, there are no object shadows, and from time to time, some objects are missing.

When Sarah is introduced, the flowers near the sofa and the beam on the ceiling blink in and out of existence.

Also, there is something wrong with their eyes, it feels like they have been sewn in their socket.

Spoiler: Eyes

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Spoiler: Grain

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Spoiler: Copperfield

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Spoiler: Exposition

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[FatGiant]

Are the renders in the first chapter final?
The quality isn't really good.

There is a lot of over-exposition, it's grainy, there are no object shadows, and from time to time, some objects are missing.

When Sarah is introduced, the flowers near the sofa and the beam on the ceiling blink in and out of existence.

Yes, this seems to be a current problem that hopefully will be solved later.

While I don't really discount the problem, the story suffers nothing from it. It isn't unusual that 1st versions to suffer from problems like these. Let's focus on what's positive instead, ok? We all want the Dev to feel encouraged to continue, right?

If anyone has suggestions of how to fix, put them on, instead of just pointing to them accusingly...

Peace

 

[lnomsim]

Yes, this seems to be a current problem that hopefully will be solved later.

While I don't really discount the problem, the story suffers nothing from it. It isn't unusual that 1st versions to suffer from problems like these. Let's focus on what's positive instead, ok? We all want the Dev to feel encouraged to continue, right?

If anyone has suggestions of how to fix, put them on, instead of just pointing to them accusingly...

Peace

I'm not accusing, just observing.
Unfortunately, I know nothing about 3D rendering, so observing and asking is all I can do.

 

[TsubameYui]

Really enjoyed this. Here's my, hopefully constructive, notes.

Spoiler: Writing

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But yeah, really enjoyed this first release and I'm looking forward to Step 2 in April.

The top point gain for choosing Sarah in the shower made sense to me. If you choose Emily, you fantasize about being a bottom, thus lose one top point. If you choose Sarah, you fantasize about being a top, thus gain one top point. Bear in mind that you can get a total of 5 top points by the time they're checked, and no matter what you choose in the shower, you can still get the required 3 points for the top variant scenes. You can also do what I do, and use URM to see everything, regardless of choices and points.

Also, my cat was a feral stray that I took in after he came onto my porch looking for food. Lots of people take in stray cats.

 

[neennah]

Promising so far

 

[GreenDark]

Let's focus on what's positive instead, ok? We all want the Dev to feel encouraged to continue, right?

If anyone has suggestions of how to fix, put them on, instead of just pointing to them accusingly...

We can do both. Criticism is necessary for improvement. Praising what's done well is helpful to keep motivation, focus and direction.
And having a solution to the problem is not necessary for criticism. Pointing it out is enough, just like with praise.

 

[lnomsim]

I just finished it.
So far so good for a first project.

I just have one thing to add:

Spoiler: Narrative point of view

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This is just my opinion though, and it engages only me.