Quetzzz

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Do you ever get second chances to get back on a path after rejecting one of the LIs? Hannah came on waaaay too strong and bitchy at the beginning so I just naturally shut that down, but she's becoming a bit more tolerable (and frankly as one of the only non balloon tits character she stands out as more appealing) and I was hoping there could be an on ramp.

Also, just to confirm, none of the ladies models change during the story eh? I really like Dora but the boobs just make me laugh every time I see her, so can't seriously consider her as a LI without any changes.
My brother! It's almost creepy how aligned we are on this. I had the same questions.
 

txe320

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Do you ever get second chances to get back on a path after rejecting one of the LIs? Hannah came on waaaay too strong and bitchy at the beginning so I just naturally shut that down, but she's becoming a bit more tolerable (and frankly as one of the only non balloon tits character she stands out as more appealing) and I was hoping there could be an on ramp.

Also, just to confirm, none of the ladies models change during the story eh? I really like Dora but the boobs just make me laugh every time I see her, so can't seriously consider her as a LI without any changes.
Nope, pretty sure you should do a new run from the beginning.
 

Roger-a-Dale

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So I've been dashing through this title quite quickly. I might not be a writer, an AVN dev or a literary critic... I have no pedigree. But what I am is a reader who constantly complains about bad writing, bad dialog and derp MCs. That being said... the writing in this title is freaking fantastic. Top shelf. Five star.

I've had posts deleted, here and elsewhere, because I forget you aren't suppose to mention other titles and characters. That makes it rather difficult when trying to express quality because we measure quality by comparison so if there's nothing to compare to then you have no value of quality. So... I can't tell you other writers/devs who I love and who this writing stands up to and sometimes surpasses in enjoyment so you'll just have to do your best.

Why is this writing so good? It's clean, it's crisp, the dialog is sharp and funny... quite funny. One thing though really stands out. There is no real fluff. Each word and sentence is written deliberately and accomplishes a purpose beside filler or time passing. It either gives a laugh or something sexy or advanced the story or fleshes out a character.

Anyway, well done you Mr Dev/writer guy. This is really, really fantastic and I will be on the hook for more. You certainly stand head and shoulders above the rest. Many thanks for sharing your talent, creativity and most importantly... your sense of humor. Cheers!

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I absolutely love the banter between the characters in this. It's hilarious.
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