V.Final
not much of a plot and short on delivery so not really a VN more Visual short story. the image in the OP suggests a possible threesome but this turned out to be false hope. what IS here is well done as having no big idea to deliver it does not outstay it's welcome. unfortunately it remains too short to be a viable purchase and too plotless to be memorable for me.
the art is good by this sites standards and fairly involved, though why an MC who has held a long attraction to this woman, would not even glance at her crotch area while giving her a foot rub, is a question only the dev can answer. a missed moment of icing on this cake.
the writing is strong with this one. at no point while reading did my immersion break. it is very well delivered and doesn't fall into the word-repetitive trap many other dev/writers fall into from having a limited vocabulary. this leads to a natural read which is rare and a massive plus point for any VN lover.
certainly worth a few bob if it floats your boat but i see this more as a small step towards the devs future. if they take what they have showcased here and add a decent plot that captures imagination and deliver it at the same pace, along with a lengthy 8 hours or more of game play, well......
expand that imagination and take us on a journey dev
not much of a plot and short on delivery so not really a VN more Visual short story. the image in the OP suggests a possible threesome but this turned out to be false hope. what IS here is well done as having no big idea to deliver it does not outstay it's welcome. unfortunately it remains too short to be a viable purchase and too plotless to be memorable for me.
the art is good by this sites standards and fairly involved, though why an MC who has held a long attraction to this woman, would not even glance at her crotch area while giving her a foot rub, is a question only the dev can answer. a missed moment of icing on this cake.
the writing is strong with this one. at no point while reading did my immersion break. it is very well delivered and doesn't fall into the word-repetitive trap many other dev/writers fall into from having a limited vocabulary. this leads to a natural read which is rare and a massive plus point for any VN lover.
certainly worth a few bob if it floats your boat but i see this more as a small step towards the devs future. if they take what they have showcased here and add a decent plot that captures imagination and deliver it at the same pace, along with a lengthy 8 hours or more of game play, well......
expand that imagination and take us on a journey dev