- Apr 23, 2021
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Okay. Love it. Lilith Darkeddgar. All the sexual preferences are set up at the start right now anyway. I will get on... here haha.You did so much, i thought it would only be fair to start from the beginning, so i dont know if the savegames would even be compatible, i just wanted to give your hard work a detailed review and dont know how much you changed in the "old" part.
First you need to pick a brighter color for the menu on the starting screen, dark red is hard to read on semi transparent black.
Minor detail, make lucy younger, she looks more like 18-20 than 24 (should be only in the selecting screen, dont think you are running around telling everyone your age or getting asked for it ^^)
Erm...lol...after reading this demo is focused on the guy i am back at the menu...so i cant provide more testing, dont play guys if i can avoid it. But at least you know what to expect as soon the lucy demo is out ^^
What the panda said is true, best you edit the tags in your op and add an "optional" or "avoidable" to the tags that are not unavoidable.
The bull also has a point, personally i would love to change the name, Lilith would be my choice for her ^^
Next I will plow through chapter one. Then I will...ugh. Redo all of Lucy's chapter. Then I will re-write even more stories.. Then I will edit it all. - This. Id say...3 days. For it to be ready. It will be much faster now systems work. HOWEVER, I am getting rid of those ugly red over buttons for something.. cleaner that displays a now.