you really need to spend more time on your game's dialogue. it has so many spelling and grammatical errors that it takes away from how great the visuals are. i started the new update from my old save so as to spare myself from too much of the awful grammatical errors. sorry to be so critical of something probably not many people care that much about. i will assume the writer is not a native english speaker, so you should reach out to someone for proof reading help on the dialogue. just my observation. i enjoy the story otherwise. as i said, the visuals are very well done.
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I came to say that the proof-reading took a notable step back from previous chapters, but then I saw that this is the pre-alpha.
IHATESlowburnBluBallgames
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SpyderArachnid
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What part of the warning did you not understand exactly?
As soon as you load your game this message is thrown right at you for several seconds. Why complain about something it literally says to not complain about if you play this pre-alpha version?
Dessolos
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haha I didn't even get that far, I saw pre alpha on the thread page so figured wasn't a good time to replay the game. So there was enough signs / warnings if you read.
Dessolos
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it's just an Alpha build might not be the best idea to update a mod till the full release incase of bugs / changes
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He really is but he hasn't got the time in the world for modding these days.
Since he got his new job , he stated.
All we can do is keeping our fingers crossed.
I don’t speak about joker mod but sometimes isn’t the best choice who are highlighted
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I will update the game only on full releases.pls update this 2 Chapter 9 - Pre Alpha
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Same, buit if done well (as in make me choose at/towards the end) it's not that bad.
men not every dev here is native english speaker,to be honest i don t see any problem as i can understand him.
He said it is partial harem,u can get 3 girls at same time.There 9 LI from understand and some side girls.
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7 LI - Amelia, Aria, Charlotte, Sophia, Emily, Aubrey - (the 7th is either Isabella or Hailey, I'm pretty sure it's Isabella, but I can't remember if dev has confirmed that, or just my thinking).
Harem - You can get a harem with Charlotte, Amelia & Sophia if you want to.
Throuple - You can also go for a throuple with Emily & Aubrey if you want to.
Am I crazy or did Asami's scene just end despite her saying there was supposed to be more? This was in like Chapter 5 btw
charlotte the aunt?why i was thinking it is aria in the harem instead
Who is isabella?