It's exciting to see this project finally start to materialize after so long, but I think you guys jumped the gun on this release. This isn't a good first impression.
For all the time you've had to come up with ideas and work on putting them in a game there is nothing here to hook people other than the pretty art design. The story, writing, locations, presentation of characters, and setting are all very basic and bland.
I wish you all the best and hope your project succeeds, but I hope you know how much work is ahead of you to really make this game good.