VN - Ren'Py - Alenja's Adventures [v0.20 Final] [Wet & Wild Production]

soooo i played it (the part which is available) and here are my opnions:
- i like the intro, the story and the setting very much
- i like most characters (the mother and her daughter are great! and the old guy is a great contrast to them!! +1)
- the blond girl looks decent and reminds me of the series "the last seeker" or how the title was. like her outfit and hair, the face is...ok she could be a bit curvier imo ^^
- the black armoured woman on the other hand i don't like look wise. its okay she has more muscles and better armour, but her face and hairstyle looks - in my opinion - kinda ugly, sry. she could has a pretteir face and hair similar to the blond girl that would be nice. ^^
- the orc could look a bit fatter or uglier but nonetheless look good +1
- i liked the small mini game
- the implented choices are AWESOME! more of this! just sad every second choice end up in dying.

and what bothered me the most is: it's already over. xD and ends at an exciting point. xD MORE! please <3 and keep it up! really great job!

Not even the orks with their arm-size cocks, but the ugly, bold, bearded oldman spoils every impression of the game.
So does the first seeming "choice" in the game, leading to a disgusting image.
The girls models are fine, though...

It's like I got some fresh air - immersion in the world! That's somerhing I've been missing in games. Splendid work! I don't have a professional point of view on the visual part since I'm just a user but from what I've seen I'm more than impressed. The story is coherent. As to the mini-games there's nothiing prominent yet it's still a nice bonus to the gameplay which is never superfluous. The music adds to the atmosphere. Overall it's a very promising project!