Really short. Spelling and grammar in serious need of work, I'm assuming Dev is not native English speaker. I don't mind the seemingly random (but isn't) zig-zag intro, lots of movies and books start out confusing flashback style. The fact that the last picture shows the MC with long hair and tattoos, and the earlier dialog references him being 16 (underage for porn activity) and in the "last year of middle school" (which would mean he was 13-14ish, probably meant last year of High School, but then he would be 17-18) means this is a flashback/memory before the start of the game we will be actively playing.
Overall it looks bizarre, weird, nightmarish, confusing and.........interesting because of all of those
, at least to me. Of course I like stories like that.
I hope it works out as well as it looks like it could, but things almost never do. Either way I'm going to watch this closely for an update or two at least.