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Damn, thats some hot signature dear sirYou never know, maybe that's fashionable in Brookesville
These wives look much hotter though
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These wives look much hotter though
- May 9, 2024
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No love for the librarian redhead? I'm shocked!Damn, thats some hot signature dear sir
These wives look much hotter though
- Sep 18, 2022
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I mean.. yea sure librarian redhead is fine too, buuuut... the other 2 wives are muuuch hotter. just a preference *smirk*
No worries about the AI art dude. All the best for the game. If the story is good, and the scenes interesting, the art wont be a turn off. Onwards for technology!
- May 9, 2024
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Thanks, appreciate it! I'm already at work writing more story, making good progress
- Sep 18, 2022
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Leaving my review in this forum. this has helped new ppl a lot already:
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5*
v0.1
Arlighto. Let me be the first one to leave a review here.
First things first... I FREAKING LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS GAME OMFG!! I have always been a MILF and housewives lover, and this game is PERFECT. Sure, it's not hand-drawn or provides quality animations from well-known programs, but dear lord. AI allows for faster content and if this game continues with such quality AI art, I'm all IN FOR THAT!!!
My favorite girls have my favorite names: Laura and Sarah. Someone needs to proofread. Sentences are understandable, but the choice of words isn't the best. The art looks really good. TheMILFS women look so fine, and the backgrounds have a nice touch. And there are various cuts for one scene, which give it a better flare. I like everything about it.
I have to admit I like the husbands so far... they look like it will be fun to steal their wives away lol. Especially Jake
I actually like the conversations with the girls. They are actually quite entertaining. I would love to see much more of those.
Some background music would be nice. Make it cozy so you can enjoy the atmosphere and the conversations with the girls.
Aside from some small mistakes like spelling, etc., the eye color sometimes changes. During the ghost hunting event, Sarah had brown eyes instead of her blue ones. Plus, mostly for Laura the hair lengths and accessories often randomly change. It's not bad, but... confusing sometimes, not gonna lie (Laura looks beautiful with long hair and her accessories during the garden party, by the way).
The pacing is going well. It's a bit fast, but maybe it's fitting with the characters of these wives. I'm glad that they are trying to hold back at the start, so it doesn't become a mindless meet and fuck game.
Holy shit, the story is actually going somewhere, making me all intrigued about them!
By the way, the husbands sometimes don't have any names during the dialogue. They are just called "man".
Despite all the great things this game offers, there IS something that is seriously DISTURBING me... that would be... they were all missing their wedding rings... missing wedding rings on the wives are a serious crime for a MILF game man.. I'm not joking. A ring on their fingers makes them all 300% hotter. Please put them on from the start of the game. It's a very, very serious matter, dear dev. Wedding rings showing a reflection of light, making them even shinier. Yep.
So yes. Just give dem women their deserved wedding rings, and I can confidently say that this game will definitely become even greater later.
GOOD LUCK DEAR DEV!!
7/5
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5*
v0.1
Arlighto. Let me be the first one to leave a review here.
First things first... I FREAKING LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS GAME OMFG!! I have always been a MILF and housewives lover, and this game is PERFECT. Sure, it's not hand-drawn or provides quality animations from well-known programs, but dear lord. AI allows for faster content and if this game continues with such quality AI art, I'm all IN FOR THAT!!!
My favorite girls have my favorite names: Laura and Sarah. Someone needs to proofread. Sentences are understandable, but the choice of words isn't the best. The art looks really good. The
I have to admit I like the husbands so far... they look like it will be fun to steal their wives away lol. Especially Jake
I actually like the conversations with the girls. They are actually quite entertaining. I would love to see much more of those.
Some background music would be nice. Make it cozy so you can enjoy the atmosphere and the conversations with the girls.
Aside from some small mistakes like spelling, etc., the eye color sometimes changes. During the ghost hunting event, Sarah had brown eyes instead of her blue ones. Plus, mostly for Laura the hair lengths and accessories often randomly change. It's not bad, but... confusing sometimes, not gonna lie (Laura looks beautiful with long hair and her accessories during the garden party, by the way).
The pacing is going well. It's a bit fast, but maybe it's fitting with the characters of these wives. I'm glad that they are trying to hold back at the start, so it doesn't become a mindless meet and fuck game.
Holy shit, the story is actually going somewhere, making me all intrigued about them!
By the way, the husbands sometimes don't have any names during the dialogue. They are just called "man".
Despite all the great things this game offers, there IS something that is seriously DISTURBING me... that would be... they were all missing their wedding rings... missing wedding rings on the wives are a serious crime for a MILF game man.. I'm not joking. A ring on their fingers makes them all 300% hotter. Please put them on from the start of the game. It's a very, very serious matter, dear dev. Wedding rings showing a reflection of light, making them even shinier. Yep.
So yes. Just give dem women their deserved wedding rings, and I can confidently say that this game will definitely become even greater later.
GOOD LUCK DEAR DEV!!
7/5
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Some feedback from me. First, the technical aspect:
As for the writing:
- Huge black empty space on the sides is the biggest flaw for sure.
- Each character having their own text colour might be a good idea. That way people can identify who's speaking without having to look at the name.
- Why is MC speech in italics? The convention is italics = thoughts. And it's already in a different colour so it's easily distinguishable.
- Character hairstyles keep changing during a single scene. Easy fix would be to generate more images, group them by hairstyle, and have them change from scene to scene instead (updo one day, hair down another day, etc.)
- A few of the pics have this white frame around them, pretty annoying.
- Extra fingers can usually be edited in PS with minimal effort.
- Some scenes have disappearing pubic hair, also an easy fix.
As for the writing:
- Overall writing is good, interesting characters, IMO things with Laura move a little too fast but it's no big deal.
- Sex scenes are too short, sometimes only one pic. And mostly talking. While I appreciate not inserting any pointless ooohs and aaaahs, people exchanging amusing remarks is not prime jerking material.
- Fetish scenes are too vanilla to satisfy any watersports or struggle snuggle enthusiast. They lack any impact that should come with those fetishes, but that could be because overall sex scenes are not very good.
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The Art is really one of the best i ever saw in that style. All the female bodys with great proportions
even in complex poses and realistic with all the wrinkles on skin etc.
This Dev or the Artist should do the artwork for Indecent Wife Hannah or other Manga/Comic Art VN's where mostly unrealistic chubby meat loaf Art with Monster Tits are shown.
This is very beautyful and sexy Art and a great VN even there are no animations.
even in complex poses and realistic with all the wrinkles on skin etc.
This Dev or the Artist should do the artwork for Indecent Wife Hannah or other Manga/Comic Art VN's where mostly unrealistic chubby meat loaf Art with Monster Tits are shown.
This is very beautyful and sexy Art and a great VN even there are no animations.
- Dec 14, 2017
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I agree about the wedding rings. A lot of VN devs don't add wedding rings to their married milf models. I noticed a lot of the DAZ 3D models in these VN's who are supposed to be married in the story aren't wearing wedding rings. If you're gonna put married women in your VN you should have them wearing their rings. Not sure if it's that DAZ doesn't have rings to add or it's an oversight by the devs.
- May 9, 2024
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Alright, thanks everyone for the feedback so far!
- About the rings, I tested and can't get good results, it's the same with cigarettes and straws from drinks. They are too small for the model to pick up reliably, so it would only further complicate the issues people have had with deformed fingers. Let's just say that because they are open to exploring alternatives, they might be carrying them in their pockets or on a chain, I also know several people who hate the feeling of wearing a ring all day.
- I'll do further tests with the prompts with particular focus on hands and fingers.
- I expect the next version to be out by the middle or end of June.
- I'll clean up any errors that I spot (if possible for me, my drawing skills are meh), but don't expect too much in this regard, simply for time and skill reasons. I'm already up to 1500 images once the next update publishes. I'll do my best, but perfection is not feasible here, for me at least.
- I learned that source_comic_book was the prompt that led to my own personal annoyance of multiple frames in one generated image, so now that I found and fixed that I will be able to generate more images that don't get sorted out immediately.
- Dec 14, 2017
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hey there, about the next update,
will it be about these current hotties story progression, or about new neighbours?
- May 9, 2024
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Hey, for the foreseeable future it will be the four who are in the game right now, I really want them all to have long-ish story lines before I do any further ones. Then, my plan is to make at least one new scene for each existing character per update so that no matter what someone's favorite is, there is at least some new content for them to play through each update.
I have some distant plans for more wives and potential story lines, but honestly there's a lot to write and make images for still before I run out of my current plans
I just ran the statistics in RenPy to check, and apparently I'm already at 40,000 words written so far Right now, I'm working mostly on Vivian's storyline (the librarian) and have a lot of story done for Jodie as well. I'm not sure how much of that is going to make it into the next update, I might make a break at some point until I can properly playtest it myself. But I do know that I have enough to stay on time for the next update.
There hasn't been enough polydactyl inclusion in my opinion - some representation for the Anne Boleyns out there!
Nah, the AI doesn't bother me, so long as the characters are fairly consistent themselves (also it's not the fingers that I'm into.) Hand drawn would of course be preferred, but I like the art style and is way less distracting than most other attempts at an anime feel on this site, plus the story so far is as expected - isekai adventure in decent English as opposed to Google-translated, unrealistic characters with parody-proportioned art.
I'm just here for a quick wank over a fantasy situation in yet another horny one-hand, home-made visual novel. For realism there is porn, for gameplay there are games and nude mods, for story there are books. If AI is a deal breaker that's up to the person - I see this as progress in using it as a tool, getting consistent characters in story situations rather than just typing in "make porn compooter or me smash" and trying to sell the first random stable diffusion images it gives you that don't make you physically sick from body horror.. We can expect a deluge of bad AI "games" and this is one of the good ones, even if it's still just progress.
Nah, the AI doesn't bother me, so long as the characters are fairly consistent themselves (also it's not the fingers that I'm into.) Hand drawn would of course be preferred, but I like the art style and is way less distracting than most other attempts at an anime feel on this site, plus the story so far is as expected - isekai adventure in decent English as opposed to Google-translated, unrealistic characters with parody-proportioned art.
I'm just here for a quick wank over a fantasy situation in yet another horny one-hand, home-made visual novel. For realism there is porn, for gameplay there are games and nude mods, for story there are books. If AI is a deal breaker that's up to the person - I see this as progress in using it as a tool, getting consistent characters in story situations rather than just typing in "make porn compooter or me smash" and trying to sell the first random stable diffusion images it gives you that don't make you physically sick from body horror.. We can expect a deluge of bad AI "games" and this is one of the good ones, even if it's still just progress.
I did go a round with the game. I have to make a mark, I'm totally not a cheating fan, but the style of Jodie was breaking every ice for that, big thumbs up! As for confirming, like others do, I don't mind AI CG, what's more, even those discrepancies are slipping quite well - which is odd, because usually I'm bothered by it... but not these ones. I don't have now the time to elaborate a review, but I would give a 4/5, encouraging to continue.
I don't think AI art is inherently bad on its own, but it might be a good idea to touch up the artwork manually, if for nothing else but the thumbnail images. Everybody talks about fingers, but nobody's talking about Thumbnail 3, where she's lifting up her athletic shorts to another, equally thin pair of athletic shorts.
It's a fun game so far, but the art can be pretty distracting... the hairstyle on the redhead librarian changing back and forth in the same scene (even getting shorter then longer again) is something a lot less easily ignored than extra fingers.