I don't think I've changed the style of way things happen in the story. for the 2 years (i think) while I rendered the images for 2Sides nothing in the writing has changes since all of this was written long before I started on 2Sides. I just really needed a break from working on the same thing and yes I have another project lined up that I will be starting on after this chapter.Now that 2 Sides is completed, will we start getting updates where the important events are seen through? Not just being started and the updates being random series of events, like the last update for example.
You know I'm a fan, given my guide for getting all scenes earlier in the thread, and I'm still playing this and enjoying it... But you also know from my comments about 2Sides that I'm not going to hold back on criticism.I don't think I've changed the style of way things happen in the story. for the 2 years (i think) while I rendered the images for 2Sides nothing in the writing has changes since all of this was written long before I started on 2Sides. I just really needed a break from working on the same thing and yes I have another project lined up that I will be starting on after this chapter.
I like the anticipated sex scenes. i have a very vivid immigration and I have to draw a line on what to show and what to leave to the imagination of the reader, or I might never get anything released.You know I'm a fan, given my guide for getting all scenes earlier in the thread, and I'm still playing this and enjoying it... But you also know from my comments about 2Sides that I'm not going to hold back on criticism.
I do know what this user is talking about, and kinda agree with them.
From about the weddings onward, a lot of scenes in this game just... cut off halfway through, and feel incomplete. We don't see the rest of them (including a bunch of anticipated sex scenes that fall very flat for this reason), or narratively-important scenes are mentioned in passing but never shown (e.g. Jenny leaving the harem), or characters just vanish from the story and we don't see any of the expected continuation of interactions with them (e.g. Jocelyn). There's a definite, distinct shift at that point.
I understand what you are saying, and at the end of the day it's obviously your decision, but...I like the anticipated sex scenes. i have a very vivid immigration and I have to draw a line on what to show and what to leave to the imagination of the reader, or I might never get anything released.
we knew Jenny was only going to be a temp when we hired her as a stand in for PeiPei but dont worry about her too much she'll be back
again back to what can I render and still make a full chapter. think of all of this as like a sitcom or a sexcom show I can't show everything (i'm not an IRL streamer) but don't worry about Jocelny Lou if working on bringing her back permeant and she'll introduce us to somebody
i gotta spread some things out, it's just how I write and create. just give me some time and I'll get us there hopefully
You may be misunderstanding what I mean. You say you like the anticipated sex scenes... But you don't actually show them to us. You show us the lead-up, or the very start of it, and then BAM, on to the next scene. Anyone interested in seeing the rest of that scene ends up frustrated and disappointed, because it's not like you're going to return to it later on to fill out the rest of it, and let the characters finish on-camera. And it wasn't about Jenny leaving the harem at all (though I'm not particularly happy about that in general, since it doesn't make much narrative sense as-is), I was complaining about her leaving the harem completely off-camera. It just feels like, since the weddings, we're only getting these tiny snippets of incomplete but important scenes (when they're not just a text description of something important that happened that we don't get to watch), instead of seeing those meaningful, important scenes all the way through.I like the anticipated sex scenes. i have a very vivid immigration and I have to draw a line on what to show and what to leave to the imagination of the reader, or I might never get anything released.
we knew Jenny was only going to be a temp when we hired her as a stand in for PeiPei but dont worry about her too much she'll be back
again back to what can I render and still make a full chapter. think of all of this as like a sitcom or a sexcom show I can't show everything (i'm not an IRL streamer) but don't worry about Jocelny Lou if working on bringing her back permeant and she'll introduce us to somebody
i gotta spread some things out, it's just how I write and create. just give me some time and I'll get us there hopefully
i like them in that when they are left open it allows my mind to fill in the blanks and not the writer. (i will try to keep them to a minimum)You may be misunderstanding what I mean. You say you like the anticipated sex scenes... But you don't actually show them to us. You show us the lead-up, or the very start of it, and then BAM, on to the next scene. Anyone interested in seeing the rest of that scene ends up frustrated and disappointed, because it's not like you're going to return to it later on to fill out the rest of it, and let the characters finish on-camera. And it wasn't about Jenny leaving the harem at all (though I'm not particularly happy about that in general, since it doesn't make much narrative sense as-is), I was complaining about her leaving the harem completely off-camera. It just feels like, since the weddings, we're only getting these tiny snippets of incomplete but important scenes (when they're not just a text description of something important that happened that we don't get to watch), instead of seeing those meaningful, important scenes all the way through.
I have a friend from California, earthquakes don't bother him, he served in combat no problem, but bring on the possibility of a tornado and he freaked. Be Safe.Chapter 18 (update #3) Almost Dead
I've completed 125 of the 295 images for this chapter so far.
Had some fun at work when everyone freaked out because the building was swaying (there was an earthquake in Thailand). Having lived in California for too long, it didn't bother me, and I kept on working. I finally went down in the elevator. "It's just an earthquake. What's wrong?" Ahhhh, good times.
stay safe out there
double jeopardy does NOT apply (google Timothy Baily Hennis as proof)I like how you are putting in that military members are the only people in the US that can be charged for the same crime twice. Once under US/local laws as any citizen would, and again under the UCMJ.
He will be discharged, along with possible reduction in rank, and forfeiture of pay. Then the military person will be turned over to public authorities after his discharge for further punishmentI am up to the point where Sharon has woken up in the hospital, and her husband has been captured. I like how you are putting in that military members are the only people in the US that can be charged for the same crime twice. Once under US/local laws as any citizen would, and again under the UCMJ. I would be surprised if he got the BCD, I would think this would fall under Dishonorable. Mostly because BCD can be upgraded to General over time, and to Honorable after more time. Clearly there is nothing honorable about this man. Then again, that's just my opinion. I don't know the laws under the UCMJ that would apply, and how severely he could be punished. Still, he'll have to serve his prison time for the military before he can start his prison time for the State, so he won't be a concern any time soon.