VN Ren'Py Alpha Omega [v0.3.1] [EzyGames]

[Chartone]

A solid start despite the oft utilized setting of MC goes to college (as well as using MC is a fighter as a plot device). I sometime wonder if writers on this site have been to college with how it gets portrayed, but I digress.

The characters feel and talk like actual characters, and not an AI bot writing dialog. I can't say I like Lily- too "LoL SO RaNDoM XD" for my taste, but I definitely like Natasha and look forward to seeing how she's developed. There are characters in other stories that have some similarities to her, but she seems pretty unique amongst the often repeated character tropes here.

I wish the choices were a little more nuanced than positive/negative/neutral- for example deciding whether to look Natasha in the eyes or make fun of the seat creaking is a more interesting choice than thumbs up/down.

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Lol, I think that in a game you shouldn't feel that everything a character says it's a statement of the developer world view.. maybe itìs just what that character feels.. is it weird to think that a giant amazon thinks something like this?

I could engage in a discussion with you about that now but i won't because it would get deleted anyway. So think what you want, so will i.

 

[caravaggio]

I could engage in a discussion with you about that now but i won't because it would get deleted anyway. So think what you want, so will i.

I really don't get what your implying.. I'm for biology and all, but if I see a tiny character saying "I'm gonna kick your ass" to a bigger one, I assume it's just the character saying that, and won't rant "But Dev! This is not possible! A tiny character could never beat such a huge one! I can't stand such a narrative".
But I won't try to change your view.. I was just giving my two cents.

 

[Andrejplaysgames]

Imagine the size of the buff blonde's SCHMEAT Muscle momma

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I really don't get what your implying.. I'm for biology and all, but if I see a tiny character saying "I'm gonna kick your ass" to a bigger one, I assume it's just the character saying that, and won't rant "But Dev! This is not possible! A tiny character could never beat such a huge one! I can't stand such a narrative".
But I won't try to change your view.. I was just giving my two cents.

Way to completely miss his point.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

For one, i applaud the MC being black, its a change from the usual white guy trope. That said it is a bold choice to go for avoiding the porn side of the game, that usually is why people play games from F95 and site like it. I do wish you luck with the game, and i might try it out non the less, since the screens look good. I like the look of the MC and cast, and who knows maybe the story will keep me hooked.

Good luck with the game.

When will we ever have a straight up biracial (black mixed white) MC tho

 

[Ragnar]

I really don't get what your implying.. I'm for biology and all, but if I see a tiny character saying "I'm gonna kick your ass" to a bigger one, I assume it's just the character saying that, and won't rant "But Dev! This is not possible! A tiny character could never beat such a huge one! I can't stand such a narrative".
But I won't try to change your view.. I was just giving my two cents.

The mixed women/men MMA is a dumb idea even for a VN. We can see irl how trans women are beating the shit out of women in MMA. Imagine a man without the handicap of transition meds vs a woman in the cage.
There is a good reason why men and women compete in different categories.

 

[caravaggio]

The mixed women/men MMA is a dumb idea even for a VN. We can see irl how trans women are beating the shit out of women in MMA. Imagine a man without the handicap of transition meds vs a woman in the cage.
There is a good reason why men and women compete in different categories.

Man, you're certainly right IRL, but this is an adult game.. it's not worth mentioning the plethora of average quality games around here with lusty incestuous family, or great representation of male population (where everyone is a jerk except the protagonist), or plots that holds together only because every actor in the story seems extremely dumb. But apart from those even most of the highest rating games have some (or many) dubious assumptions that easily falls apart if you look too close to it.. having women fight with men seems on the low end of the scale to me.. and not because I have a kink for strong muscular women or anything, quite the contrary, but I feel like white knighting today

 

[BlackGuy85]

I agree with what recreation wrote and i kinda enjoyed playing it until i reached this point:


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That is not how it works, no matter what mainstream media and certain groups of people want to push. Biology and actual events prove otherwise. Yes men and women should be equal but they are not the same.

I'm concerned about that also

 

[krisskross94]

When will we ever have a straight up biracial (black mixed white) MC tho

don't worry is in the work it will be out soon

 

[BlackGuy85]

When will we ever have a straight up biracial (black mixed white) MC tho

There was one that had a MC like that but it disappeared.

 

[dreamgoat]

Will look out for this in the future. Looking good so far. Thanks for sharing!

 

[Before I Forget]

No hardcore sex scenes and a black protag?

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Like huh? How is that gonna work? I finally see a black MC game that's not done by that Jobeo guy and there's not going to be decent sex scenes lol. I like romance games but there HAS to be a payoff of some sort.

 

[Before I Forget]

Lol, I think that in a game you shouldn't feel that everything a character says it's a statement of the developer world view.. maybe itìs just what that character feels.. is it weird to think that a giant amazon thinks something like this?

Thank you, he's making a character who's obviously a feminist, why do people take this things so literal?

 

[Aristos]

Like huh? How is that gonna work? I finally see a black MC game that's not done by that Jobeo guy and there's not going to be decent sex scenes lol. I like romance games but there HAS to be a payoff of some sort.

Exactly.
A nice, non-stereotyped black MC.
A fantastic, sexy-ass black lady who looks like an actual person, among other LIs.
But there's no sexual thrill for the adult game players.

I read a previous comment by the dev saying that we won't show images of women covered in cum, etc.
I get that. You want to make a more vanilla story that depicts what normally happens in romantic relationships. I'm all for that and normally avoid games or paths with certain kinks or fetishes that make me uncomfortable.
But wanting to show respect for women in your game shouldn't preclude the appearance of explicit sex with the woman of the MC's choice. Just make it vanilla and sweet, but give the players explicit sex (animations are not even needed, plenty of nice renders would do).

 

[Before I Forget]

Exactly.
A nice, non-stereotyped black MC.
A fantastic, sexy-ass black lady who looks like an actual person, among other LIs.
But there's no sexual thrill for the adult game players.

I read a previous comment by the dev saying that we won't show images of women covered in cum, etc.
I get that. You want to make a more vanilla story that depicts what normally happens in romantic relationships. I'm all for that and normally avoid games or paths with certain kinks or fetishes that make me uncomfortable.
But wanting to show respect for women in your game shouldn't preclude the appearance of explicit sex with the woman of the MC's choice. Just make it vanilla and sweet, but give the players explicit sex (animations are not even needed, plenty of nice renders would do).

I absolutely agree, seems like he's just selling himself short, unfortunately.

 

[Before I Forget]

So Lilliana has a glass eye for anyone who is wondering.. or cares. But that explains why here eyes looked like they were at a meet and greet, I was disappointed when I saw some of the things "excluded" from this game but I'm going to give it a shot. This had a lot pros and cons, I'm still going to give it the benefit of doubt for now and see how it progresses. Besides, some of the assholes on here already butchered it enough. Natasha is so far the only girl worth my time even with her flaws , I could say the sister but I doubt it's one of "those" games. Nothing but the best to this Dev, hang in there.

 

[Kroenen12]

Good start, Natasha is great

is it possible to get more than 8 friendship score?

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[Ezykeyal]

is it possible to get more than 8 friendship score?

Not in the current episode.

 

[Kroenen12]

Not in the current episode.

have you considered putting a list of planned tags?