Ren'Py Altered Destiny [v0.10c] [ICCreations]

[Famescua]

The thing is that the only one that was considered straight up u till then was the mom. Penny was obviously bi so was his grandma, Kim so far is straight lesbian no signs of being interested in guys. How the dev will pull this off will be a thing to look into. Also just because the outcome is good doesn't mean it was a good thing. Instead of taking the easy route of I'll just fuck her and make her feel better, she could have just been there supporting and listening to her problems. Offering her comfort and a shoulder to lean on. Nope she went all for the sex. And the dev says you wont be an ass to her because the outcome was good and she will save your life later. Well she had no way of knowing that the outcome would be good she didnt even think about her friends feelings when she did all that. Also only the players know what will happen because of the spoiler you gave. The mc still feels betrayed and like the other guy said he knows nothing about his new life because he hasn't lived it, so yeah he will feel like an outcast in his own family.

 

[hpshi]

well he seems to have a plan in mind so i think that in gives him at least the benefit of daubt, i mean sure kim messed up and many wouldnt foregive her, but if the dev says she will make up for it, that is his decision to make and if there is anyone who think that he can do it better he can make his on game with similar scenarios to prove it, im genuinly interested in seeing that.
i mean writing a story isnt easy as it appears i personally started and abandoned so many in the last 20 years (and as i was six i mean ordinery stories not erotic ones). so as we on this site get all of it for free why not dial down on the critiscim, respect each other, saying "thank you" or nothing at all, and simply wait to see what happens next?

 

[GamerJon12]

Actually I am very objective, any point I made I gave reasoning behind it, you are the one in his discord it appears by you having that post, so one could argue I would imagine you are less objective. If you want to label anything I stated as angry, that is on you. I always reason out what I state, it is for others to disagree or agree. But if you want a long detailed response on everything I think. You can read my review hopefully by the end of the day with many references to in game.

I'm curious if you'll dock points due to 'what you know' now. It's a story that continues. You are probably not supposed to get all the answers right from the get go and I bet that a lot of your points will be set up in ignorance. Not that saying your dumb or anything, but just because you don't know how things are at this current version, doesn't mean it's bad. Just means that it'll be more clear as things go on. Anyone who actually knows how the story would probably facepalm at people docking points due to not knowing. It's like the who 'MC could have died' thing. People were so pissed off and they were completely wrong. It wasn't a thing.

 

[GamerJon12]

The thing is that the only one that was considered straight up u till then was the mom. Penny was obviously bi so was his grandma, Kim so far is straight lesbian no signs of being interested in guys. How the dev will pull this off will be a thing to look into. Also just because the outcome is good doesn't mean it was a good thing. Instead of taking the easy route of I'll just fuck her and make her feel better, she could have just been there supporting and listening to her problems. Offering her comfort and a shoulder to lean on. Nope she went all for the sex. And the dev says you wont be an ass to her because the outcome was good and she will save your life later. Well she had no way of knowing that the outcome would be good she didnt even think about her friends feelings when she did all that. Also only the players know what will happen because of the spoiler you gave. The mc still feels betrayed and like the other guy said he knows nothing about his new life because he hasn't lived it, so yeah he will feel like an outcast in his own family.

"Feel like an outcast". That is a bold statement. If the dev says he won't then he wont. I guess back to the future was a horrific ending too. His life was changed for the better, but his family was different.

 

[Legendary101]

I'm curious if you'll dock points due to 'what you know' now. It's a story that continues. You are probably not supposed to get all the answers right from the get go and I bet that a lot of your points will be set up in ignorance. Not that saying your dumb or anything, but just because you don't know how things are at this current version, doesn't mean it's bad. Just means that it'll be more clear as things go on. Anyone who actually knows how the story would probably facepalm at people docking points due to not knowing. It's like the who 'MC could have died' thing. People were so pissed off and they were completely wrong. It wasn't a thing.

I will write my review with reasoning on why I gave a certain score and it will be based on the current state of the game, not the future or promises of how something is going to change or be explained in future updates, I can only rate what is in front of me. If it improves over time, I will be sure to come back and update the review in a year or so, god willing I am alive and if updates have been released by then. I will even have no problem if you want to remind me if I forget.

But if you are saying you have some knowledge and I should wait for more releases as it is one of those games that needs a few more releases. I am not against waiting, I can wait.

 

[LWtbo]

Unfortunatly as the dev deleted their account due to muppets thats used this thred for this game to moan about him not working on his other game instead of moaning on his other games thred as they should have.
So the Dev is unlikly to hear what is said here unless its passed on to them.

And although I see the Dev's point and understand his reasons he forget one thing.
Not only do some people find it hard to forgive stuff like what Kim did and her responce to it.
But Kim could only redeem herself as the Dev plans if she allowed to save MC's life because once back in our own time.
For them it would be the end of the friendship and the very last time the MC and Kim hung out together not to mention the very last time the MC would even be willing to talk to Kim.
To all intents and purposes She would now be considered dead to the MC.

Not everyone believe the saying "everyone deserves a second chance" thats a saying thats allready been proved to be a saying that gets people killed.

And it's extreamly hard if nigh impossible to redeem yourself if the person that you hurt won't have anything to do with you.
Therefore with the people that feel this way it's not so suprising they want a way to tell Kim to fuck off.

Me i would definatly cut ties with her in RL but for the games sake give her a chance but thats me.

Just Sayin.

 

[GamerJon12]

I will write my review with reasoning on why I gave a certain score and it will be based on the current state of the game, not the future or promises of how something is going to change or be explained in future updates, I can only rate what is in front of me. If it improves over time, I will be sure to come back and update the review in a year or so, god willing I am alive and if updates have been released by then. I will even have no problem if you want to remind me if I forget.

But if you are saying you have some knowledge and I should wait for more releases as it is one of those games that needs a few more releases. I am not against waiting, I can wait.

I have talked with the dev and I actually do know some key big moments. I won't ever spoil them though. I just see a lot of complaining built up on ignorance. Just so many wrong people, not because they missed something, but because the story isn't there yet. The premise of time travel is built on unlikeliness, but if ppl always went with what would most likely happen, that would be boring.

Being negatively critical because you don't know the answer yet is bad. Movies and tv shows often end on a cliffhanger. Doesn't mean the whole movie/season was terrible. Just gotta wait to see what happens.

 

[Famescua]

"Feel like an outcast". That is a bold statement. If the dev says he won't then he wont. I guess back to the future was a horrific ending too. His life was changed for the better, but his family was different.

Yet in back to the future you didnt see your best friend fuck your mom. But hey whatever floats your boat. I tried looking at the whole picture before saying anything. Obviously the dev has his story and knows what will happen and we dont. But c'mon trying to compare a porn game to a regular movie. In back to the future you didnt fuck your mom although she tried, lol. In this you had someone you trusted betray you. Your whole life changed you dont know what happened with your aunt you just found out you had, you dont know how the people in your life will react to you not knowing what happened last week. But hey if you can go on with your life like normal not knowing anything that happened in the last 20 years , I guess you wont feel wierd

 

[antsz]

idk why so much of you are angry with kim.. i loved where the story goes thanks to kim's action. if mom would be with an asshole ok, but rivera ...

 

[GamerJon12]

Yet in back to the future you didnt see your best friend fuck your mom. But hey whatever floats your boat. I tried looking at the whole picture before saying anything. Obviously the dev has his story and knows what will happen and we dont. But c'mon trying to compare a porn game to a regular movie. In back to the future you didnt fuck your mom although she tried, lol. In this you had someone you trusted betray you. Your whole life changed you dont know what happened with your aunt you just found out you had, you dont know how the people in your life will react to you not knowing what happened last week. But hey if you can go on with your life like normal not knowing anything that happened in the last 20 years , I guess you wont feel wierd

Of course it's going to be weird for him at first. I was referring to the whole outcasts statement. Feeling like an outcast and a friend betrayal are two completely different things. Again, I'm sure when the next update or two happens it'll show exactly how things are gonna be. You're just speculating and believing it's going to go one way, when in fact it won't.

 

[Caramelo9]

I am on the fence with this as I am finding the story really interesting however let me be blunt for a lot of people it doesn't matter if Kim suddenly cured cancer to make the world better, the fact is she broke the MC/our trust and I'm not sure about anyone else but even if I wanted to trust someone again if they had betrayed me like that then I doubt I ever could... From what i read the Dev is saying that Kims positive influences in the world will outweigh the action she committed but that's not the point. The point is that most people can't just go back to being "best friends" with a person that has done that. I certainly couldn't. So yes the MC might let things go and not try for any revenge but he couldn't ever go back to the way things were with Kim.

 

[Famescua]

idk why so much of you are angry with kim.. i loved where the story goes thanks to kim's action. if mom would be with an asshole ok, but rivera ...

Like people stated it's not the effect that people are upset about. It's the fact that your best friend betrayed your trust.

 

[exirock]

For those complaining about the story just think about one thing its really early stage so we dont know what path the story is gonna take, so complaining how Kim fck up and ranting how the dev shouldnt have made that happen, its not gonna make any difference, this is not the end of the story its the start so alot can happen and the dev can always make some touches.

Who would know that one scene would make a huge war and long post text's.
ICC keep the story has it is, cause for me i didnt have any problems with the story im actually looking forward to see how the story will go and the only really complain i have its the update size which u know already.

 

[Daloza]

Yet in back to the future you didnt see your best friend fuck your mom. But hey whatever floats your boat. I tried looking at the whole picture before saying anything. Obviously the dev has his story and knows what will happen and we dont. But c'mon trying to compare a porn game to a regular movie. In back to the future you didnt fuck your mom although she tried, lol. In this you had someone you trusted betray you. Your whole life changed you dont know what happened with your aunt you just found out you had, you dont know how the people in your life will react to you not knowing what happened last week. But hey if you can go on with your life like normal not knowing anything that happened in the last 20 years , I guess you wont feel wierd

Yeah yeah, bla bla bla, Now:You, the MC and your best friend, Kimberly stumble upon an ancient.... artifact. Upon touch you witness a vague catastrophic event that takes place in the near future. Unbeknownst to it's true meaning, you both are then linked to another timeline... nearly two decades into the past. While you may freely travel between these two timelines of the same world, you must figure out a way to prevent a catastrophic event that is lurking ahead.
Before:A family of five (Son, Older Sister, Younger Sister, Mom and Dad) have just moved to a new town to start a new life. The player stumbles upon an ancient artifact. Accidentally infusing himself with it, and unleashes monsters into a world between worlds. These beings will stop at nothing to destroy the artifact's host to gain entry into the real world. This artifact has uncontrollable powers, but feeds off of sexual energy to survive. The player will need to feed onto his own desires to prevent the artifact from killing it's host and bringing terrible monster's into this world. These powers may provide scenes with invisibility, instantly making people horny, Increase Penis Size, etc. Body-switching? The player will still need to find natural ways to get into his family's pants. Welcome to the our team.

 

[Famescua]

Of course it's going to be weird for him at first. I was referring to the whole outcasts statement. Feeling like an outcast and a friend betrayal are two completely different things. Again, I'm sure when the next update or two happens it'll show exactly how things are gonna be. You're just speculating and believing it's going to go one way, when in fact it won't.

Im not speculating anything, I already said the dev has his story. And I'm not saying it will go one way or another. I'm saying you come back home and you see everything is totally different "better no doubt" but still different. You supposedly are supposed to be used to the life you have now which is better than the one you where living. But you dont feel right because in your mind this is not the life you grew up with. Like I said he will feel like something is fundamentally wrong until he gets used to it and assimilated the new situation he is in.so yeah he will feel like an outcast because his personal history and that of his family is different from what he knows. It's like you go to school and learn history but then go to another country where their point of view on history is different. You will feel like an outsider because you see things differently.

 

[GamerJon12]

I'll make sure to run by the dev to give a 'fuck it im out' option at the beginning of the next update and let the credits roll. give the people here what they want.

I can see it now, they aren't friends anymore and he goes on with his changed life. the end.

 

[DA22]

I'll make sure to run by the dev to give a 'fuck it im out' option at the beginning of the next update and let the credits roll. give the people here what they want.

I can see it now, they aren't friends anymore and he goes on with his changed life. the end.

Do not forget about that part of the disaster they felt something about happening.

Though in defense of the Kim haters, it is not impossible since dev does know the rest of the story and all that will happen in it his overall impression of Kim is better as that of the players that do not have all that information yet and as such he underestimated a bit how much of a cunt she seemed in that scene for people that do not know the whole story yet.

 

[-Hex-]

Do not forget about that part of the disaster they felt something about happening.

Though in defense of the Kim haters, it is not impossible since dev does know the rest of the story and all that will happen in it his overall impression of Kim is better as that of the players that do not have all that information yet and as such he underestimated a bit how much of a cunt she seemed in that scene for people that do not know the whole story yet.

I mean, with that move she was a cunt regardless of her future char evolution, and for a lot of people that is the problem
Maybe she'll become the best character ever of every vn on this site, but that was a dick move, period
And i'm not saying that what she did negates any evolution she'll have in the future (as i said mybe she'll become my favorite char ever), but for what she did perople have a right to be mad at her

 

[DA22]

I mean, with that move she was a cunt regardless of her future char evolution, and for a lot of people that is the problem
Maybe she'll become the best character ever of every vn on this site, but that was a dick move, period

Yeah I meant it more, since dev does know all inns and outs of her character, including all her current and future good sides and how she develops he might have been just a bit too influenced by that knowledge and not understanding fully how bad she would be shown in that scene for someone without knowing that char so completely as he does. If true that scene and the one after might need some slight tweaking, if not well then it is what it is. Only dev can decide that.

Just played another game a few days ago with a much disliked character where same thing plays a bit.

 

[GamerJon12]

I mean, with that move she was a cunt regardless of her future char evolution, and for a lot of people that is the problem
Maybe she'll become the best character ever of every vn on this site, but that was a dick move, period
And i'm not saying that what she did negates any evolution she'll have in the future (as i said mybe she'll become my favorite char ever), but for what she did perople have a right to be mad at her

I don't think the dev thinks that you shouldn't, but more towards the people that say 'i hated that, uninstalled shit game'