TheimmortalP My advice is this. Read both spoilers on the first page. Then decide if it's for you as many players feel they have NO choices in the game and all the girls just jump apparently onto MC's dicky dick, which is to some extent true and to another extent it's not, or there is a reason for the women to levitate to the MC. That is what I've read from the devs patron or discord page if i recall correctly now.
As for English it's not ENGRISH at all. The pacing of the dialogue is good. It's not annoyingly long and if you really interested in the story as I am, then you have to focus as I've seen/read somethings that are kinda making sense now since we know who MC actually is or suppose to be.
There are also complaints about some "FORCED" scenes at start and apparently it happens, even though if you don't go and look, you wouldn't know who or what is happening, this is somehow an issue for many players. Meaning they all went and click on the button that took them to have a look and now complaining it 'happened'. OR they are clairvoyant and know who's doing what without clicking on the "go see" button.
As for pacing, i'd say work on an average of 8 hrs. Download, play for an hour or so and decide.