VN Ren'Py Completed AlwaysFan [v1.0] [AtemX Games]

[voyeurkind]

I was really digging this--until the evil businessman showed up. At which point I quit playing and deleted the game.

I really don't understand why devs do this. There's already plenty of conflict in the story. In fact, this could have been a fun management game. But apparently there's a need to throw in a criminal subplot that simply just doesn't fit the tone of the game.

Good luck. I'm saddened by what I consider wasted potential though.

 

[AtemX]

Ok now what about pregnancy?

There will be pregnancy content, it's planned. But not for a while.

Great content so far for an inicial release! I loved it! Keep it up and hope to see an update soon! great work.

Thanks very much! Don't be too impatient either, I started working on the project in December, so it will probably take me at least that long before the next update. This is the problem of games with several different paths like here, to satisfy everyone you have to work 2/3 times more. And I don't want to rush either, I prefer to take my time so as not to lack inspiration when writing, that's probably the thing that scares me the most ^^.


@ KopengaKris & Mommysbuttslut:
I have read your feedback and understand your frustration. For the scene with Amanda, the MC is really caught off guard and doesn't really know how to react (not to mention that he's turned on after the shooting), everything happens very quickly and he's really bad about himself in the love route, hence the fact that he tells her the truth and apologizes. Maybe I didn't emphasize enough that he was caught off guard and I apologize for that. Don't worry, all sexual interactions with girls in the love route will be up to you (depending on whether you want to stay loyal to Emilie or make a harem).

As for the nudes, well yes I said to myself that cosplay, either you have to buy them and it's expensive (something they can't afford), or it takes time and requires knowledge/materials that they don't have. But it will happen very quickly don't worry and I retain the idea of completely replacing nudes with cosplay in the love route. Don't forget that this is the very first version of the game and that the story is bound to evolve.

 

[KopengaKris]

There will be pregnancy content, it's planned. But not for a while.

Thanks very much! Don't be too impatient either, I started working on the project in December, so it will probably take me at least that long before the next update. This is the problem of games with several different paths like here, to satisfy everyone you have to work 2/3 times more. And I don't want to rush either, I prefer to take my time so as not to lack inspiration when writing, that's probably the thing that scares me the most ^^.


@ KopengaKris & Mommysbuttslut:
I have read your feedback and understand your frustration. For the scene with Amanda, the MC is really caught off guard and doesn't really know how to react (not to mention that he's turned on after the shooting), everything happens very quickly and he's really bad about himself in the love route, hence the fact that he tells her the truth and apologizes. Maybe I didn't emphasize enough that he was caught off guard and I apologize for that. Don't worry, all sexual interactions with girls in the love route will be up to you (depending on whether you want to stay loyal to Emilie or make a harem).

As for the nudes, well yes I said to myself that cosplay, either you have to buy them and it's expensive (something they can't afford), or it takes time and requires knowledge/materials that they don't have. But it will happen very quickly don't worry and I retain the idea of completely replacing nudes with cosplay in the love route. Don't forget that this is the very first version of the game and that the story is bound to evolve.

I'm very pleased to hear that. Don't get me wrong, your game is off to a good start and we're only trying to give you good constructive feedback. I rated your game a 4/5, but that's only because of the uploading of Emilie's nude pics (It's considered as sharing, not everyones kink and all Sharing and NTR was optional). Otherwise I'll definitly follow this and can't wait for the next update. Well done and congratz, AtemX

 

[Avaron1974]

I did the loving route, sweet, she's adorable.

I tried to do the less loving route and couldn't, she's too nice.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

I did the loving route, sweet, she's adorable.

I tried to do the less loving route and couldn't, she's too nice.

big mood my friend XD

 

[Avaron1974]

big mood my friend XD

I didn't get very far on the second run. I tried to keep it distant but friendly.

After a scene of her being bullied and the flashback to her and her mom about her crush on MC I couldn't keep on that route.

Pretty much stuck on the loving route with this one and if the dev lets anyone hurt her I will find him.

 

[AtemX]

I did the loving route, sweet, she's adorable.

I tried to do the less loving route and couldn't, she's too nice.

I am delighted to read it, it means that I have succeeded in creating a bond of attachment between you (player) and her and it makes me very happy. Me too I clearly prefer this route but I want to satisfy those who are looking for something else in a game and I want certain choices to have serious consequences on the story, without that, a VN loses its flavor in my opinion.

 

[KopengaKris]

I was really digging this--until the evil businessman showed up. At which point I quit playing and deleted the game.

I really don't understand why devs do this. There's already plenty of conflict in the story. In fact, this could have been a fun management game. But apparently there's a need to throw in a criminal subplot that simply just doesn't fit the tone of the game.

Good luck. I'm saddened by what I consider wasted potential though.

To bad you did'nt like the game, but calling it a wasted potential i harsh. I like the game and don't agree at all. This game has alot of potential

I didn't get very far on the second run. I tried to keep it distant but friendly.

After a scene of her being bullied and the flashback to her and her mom about her crush on MC I couldn't keep on that route.

Pretty much stuck on the loving route with this one and if the dev lets anyone hurt her I will find him.

Me too....not a fiber in my body that want's to hurt Emilie. She's to cute, adorable and loving.

 

[Krylo Zagato]

Good start. Tried the love route and idk what to call the other one "non-love" route maybe? Liked the love route a lot more.

 

[MisterNephilim]

I didn't get very far on the second run. I tried to keep it distant but friendly.

After a scene of her being bullied and the flashback to her and her mom about her crush on MC I couldn't keep on that route.

Pretty much stuck on the loving route with this one and if the dev lets anyone hurt her I will find him.

Same, if the dev lets anyone hurt her or drug her, I'll go for the legs, you go for the throat.

We protecc Emilie here.

 

[KopengaKris]

If you liked the game you might wanna consider writing a review (vote). No way is this is 2,5 star rating game, due to a 1 star vote troll. So the game actually get's the credit it deserves. Some on F95 will only download the game after ratings so.

 

[Madarahyuuga]

To bad you did'nt like the game, but calling it a wasted potential i harsh. I like the game and don't agree at all. This game has alot of potential

Me too....not a fiber in my body that want's to hurt Emilie. She's to cute, adorable and loving.

With me it was different the more flashbacks I had of her the crueler I wanted to be, I can't wait for dinner with Cassandra and her boyfriend and the MC to join them.
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[Nerra]

AlwaysFan is an adult visual novel where you play as Chris (customizable name),
a 21-year-old man who is in a difficult situation after the death of his parents.

Porn games, where parents go to die...

 

[giggitygigity]

I think game is interesting, what is not however, to me, are Emilie's eye shapes, it's just too barbie doll-ish

 

[r3ck5]

*snip* with some shameless flirting like ASMR(or whatever the name is the thing of pretending to be someone's GF in a teasingly erotic video XD)

Just have to note that you're thinking of GFE content. ASMR is using sounds or visuals to relax, like hair brushing sounds, writing on paper, "follow the light" stuff, etc. There -is- GFE type asmr but that's not what it's usually used for.

 

[rgnar62]

Hi man!
I'm crazy about netorase content.... so this game could become one of my big favourite!!
What are your thoughts concerning 'harem netorase' = whoring and sharing more than just our albino loving crush?

 

[KopengaKris]

With me it was different the more flashbacks I had of her the crueler I wanted to be, I can't wait for dinner with Cassandra and her boyfriend and the MC to join them.
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Go nuts, dude!

 

[Raoddik]

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It lacks "I love her but I still don't mind sharing her from time to time as long as it's my decision" imho

 

[Ragnar]

So in the love route we play as Belle Dolphine boyfriend and that triggered ptsd in some players judging by the reviews

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Just have to note that you're thinking of GFE content. ASMR is using sounds or visuals to relax, like hair brushing sounds, writing on paper, "follow the light" stuff, etc. There -is- GFE type asmr but that's not what it's usually used for.

yeah...i think i mentioned(or implied) the fact that i don't know a thing about this stuff ^^ but fair enough