as someone who played the lola games when they first came out i was surprised to see a modern rendition!
youve done a fantastic job! simple and fun, and sexy. id just prefer if it wasnt all at the park lol.
there was an old interactive fiction by gary plume about a girl adopting a dog and you have to play your cards right at a park, eventually leading to you defending her in a home invasion, which eventually leads to the intimate ending which basically gives you (the dog) free rein to fuck her how ever you like. its actaully very tricky but the pay off is free choice so its worth it.
i tell you this, because i think it would make a fantastic story line for one of your games.
anywho, good luck and great work so far!