HTML Abandoned An Ordinary Girl [Part 1(1.1)] [Antiduke]

[antiduke_99]

Can you please remove the "female domination" tag until there is actual femdom content in this game? This is very unsatisfying and annoying to read if you tend to be disgusted by maledom and try out this game solely because the tags mentioned it does have femdom content! Where on Earth is it???

I do not mind if you wanted to write the main character as a submissive and the female domination comes in the form of MC suddenly realizing she's bi and eventually getting into a relationship where she's being dommed by some lesbian/bi mistress, or in the form of turning the tables on that cocky asshole Jake and pegging him/giving him a whipping session so that he "makes up to you" (after which MC realizes she enjoys assuming a dominant role and either breaks up with him or only continues the relationship if he agrees to being her sub bitch, at least temporarily), or honestly in any other form, but as it is this game is NOT in the slightest bit femdom!

So, once again, can you please remove the deceiving tag? I will abstain from giving the game a terrible 1 star review for the very unpleasant experience of reading through what is essentialy vanilla-porn with a light tinge of maledom for now, but this should be fixed! Also, will there be any femdom route/content in one of the coming updates and, if so, what kind? Will we get a dedicated character/route, multiple ones or just a scene here and there? Can MC become dominant or will the femdom also be her being dominated by other women? I might come back to this game, but definitely not if it continues in the direction it's currently headed in...

EDIT: I see people talking about a blackmail Jake route: where exactly is the choice that leads to that? I have tried telling him that "he owes me one" but all that leads to is him taking MC to the "Red Club" after the Italian restaurant and MC asking him to "fuck her hard"... Is there currently any femdom content I have somehow missed?

I wouldnt have put the tag if it didnt exist.

I understand the frustration though. I am trying to include a large variety of content. If tagging the game with femdom means the main character needs to be that way from beginning to end I will certainly change it. I was under the impression that it simply needed to exist at all.

As for how to get to it:

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I will say that if you have a specific fetish that you are wanting to see consistently from beginning to end, this is probably not for you. I apologize that you appear to have had such a bad time, but I did not put any tags on the game that don't exist.

 

[LAKueiJin]

I wouldnt have put the tag if it didnt exist.

I understand the frustration though. I am trying to include a large variety of content. If tagging the game with femdom means the main character needs to be that way from beginning to end I will certainly change it. I was under the impression that it simply needed to exist at all.

As for how to get to it:
As you correctly figured, you need to get blackmailed by jake. To do this, ghost him, call the police, show the cop the pictures. On the next day, brush off the proposed date with Marcus. This will get you to the scene.

There is a 2nd femdom scene already written on part two (lesbian).

I will say that if you have a specific fetish that you are wanting to see consistently from beginning to end, this is probably not for you. I apologize that you appear to have had such a bad time, but I did not put any tags on the game that don't exist.

That's fair enough. I will give it another go later today - originally when I picked "ghost him" I only got the option to "call him out for being an asshole" later on. I did not get any "call the police" option - maybe it's because I decided to watch the movie instead of going straight to sleep? I downloaded the game yesterday so I don't think the version changed... Anyway, I'll redownload it for good meassure and keep going back to try all the options and check. Obviously the main character doesn't have to be dominant throughout the whole game, but because I couldn't find any femdom content on several multiple paths I assumed you included the tag just because of planned future content.

Thanks for the swift reply and I will get back to you after I try it! Cheers!

 

[antiduke_99]

That's fair enough. I will give it another go later today - originally when I picked "ghost him" I only got the option to "call him out for being an asshole" later on. I did not get any "call the police" option - maybe it's because I decided to watch the movie instead of going straight to sleep? I downloaded the game yesterday so I don't think the version changed... Anyway, I'll redownload it for good meassure and keep going back to try all the options and check. Obviously the main character doesn't have to be dominant throughout the whole game, but because I couldn't find any femdom content on several multiple paths I assumed you included the tag just because of planned future content.

Thanks for the swift reply and I will get back to you after I try it! Cheers!

Just went back and double checked how to get to that line. Was laying in bed when I replied and was a little foggy. Forgot to add that after Jake asks if you are ghosting him, you need to send him a fake apology.

 

[_DarkDesires_]

That is definitely on the table - perhaps not full on slave, but content more in line with that.

Could we also have the opposite option, of the protagonist being broken and turned into a slave?
For all the predictable offended people at the blackmail tag, there actually isn't any. Both the MC and Jake do NOT act like one is being blackmailed by the other. It's more of a mutual play right now. So if you're actually planning femdom, please also write some genuine maledom.

 

[antiduke_99]

Could we also have the opposite option, of the protagonist being broken and turned into a slave?
For all the predictable offended people at the blackmail tag, there actually isn't any. Both the MC and Jake do NOT act like one is being blackmailed by the other. It's more of a mutual play right now. So if you're actually planning femdom, please also write some genuine maledom.

There definitely is blackmail currently in the story, both by Jake and Marcus. Now, it might not be to the extreme some are looking for, but you have to start somewhere. I will agree the maledom scenes currently are quite light in nature, but I'm hoping for more of a gradual build up. That will be coming soon though.

 

[afc2112]

Decent start. Gonna have to see how this develops to really form an opinion.

 

[menatv]

Nice start. I'd also like more blackmail, maybe some other types of coercion for the MC to deal with. Maybe after turning Jake down, have him stalk you from time to time.

Look forward to more content. Excellent beginning.

 

[antiduke_99]

I hate Jake so much and wish there was a way to cut him out of my character's life entirely.

Multiple paths of getting rid of him are in the works. I'm hoping to have an update by the end of the week.

 

[Deleted member 1040613]

Solid writing so far...though Jake seems to be part of the main plot - I would have dumped him after that text message and not forgiven him at all. His true nature was revealed, and that's not something that can be wrote off with cheap flowers

 

[antiduke_99]

Solid writing so far...though Jake seems to be part of the main plot - I would have dumped him after that text message and not forgiven him at all. His true nature was revealed, and that's not something that can be wrote off with cheap flowers

Heh. Yep, well aware. A solution is in the works. But for the record they were not cheap flowers!

 

[Savita23]

Hey, is there any ETA for the second part? Highly, anticipating the release

 

[ayayaomegaclap]

The route where you end up in the club with Jake and Lorenzo is pretty hot. As someone who has had to deal with much worse, I don't think Jake is that bad honestly... He's just mischievous and you are totally wrong about no one wanting to forgive someone like him. These are the types of thrills regular people are aching for to get out of their routine. Why do you think women send imprisoned serial killers love letters? Just because you would run away screaming doesn't mean everyone else would. My only negative comment about Jake would be his creepy ass text when you ghost him, that one needs a trigger warning or something.

 

[MidaHanna]

Already abandonned ? It was a real good first release

 

[bloodbus]

Already abandonned ? It was a real good first release

" Progress has slowed down unfortunately due to some unforeseen events, but I am still working on it! Part 2 will likely not be ready any time soon, but I do already have several scenes written with more planned out. " - From the dev's itchio

 

[antiduke_99]

The route where you end up in the club with Jake and Lorenzo is pretty hot. As someone who has had to deal with much worse, I don't think Jake is that bad honestly... He's just mischievous and you are totally wrong about no one wanting to forgive someone like him. These are the types of thrills regular people are aching for to get out of their routine. Why do you think women send imprisoned serial killers love letters? Just because you would run away screaming doesn't mean everyone else would. My only negative comment about Jake would be his creepy ass text when you ghost him, that one needs a trigger warning or something.

Hey, thanks for the comment! That is kindof how I see him. I am allowing people to be rid of him (at least temporarily) but I'm definitely going to try and keep that same mysterious, dark vibe.

 

[antiduke_99]

Already abandonned ? It was a real good first release

Not abandoned! Just slowed down unfortunately. I've got a number of scenes completed and ready to add. Just trying to tie up a few more loose ends before publishing the update.

 

[afc2112]

I totally forgot this game existed, I had to look the date from the last update!

 

[antiduke_99]

I totally forgot this game existed, I had to look the date from the last update!

The next update is now planned for the end of May or early June! It's not going to be a huge update (will feature around 6 new scenes), but this will completely finish Part 1. Also, I have enlisted another writer to work on some of the scenes, so I'm hoping to be able to put out more updates as we move forward!

 

[Dole]

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[Bryan_Chima]

I would love if there would be real porn gifs/videos since the Story seems quiet interesting