VN Ren'Py Angel & Demon [v0.3] [Saint]

[adsl2009]

looks good.please continue .... thanks

 

[Saint_RNG]

For the most part I enjoyed the game. Has a lot of setups which I'm looking forward to. Especially because its On SS, we know there will be more fetishes explored without consequence. Love Veronica's body. Finally we have a highly realistic girl and shape. Ass is a little flat she has a sag to her tits and has a hairy pussy. Maybe some people don't realise that no matter the age, boobs do sag for so many women. Plus most don't bother to wax or shave their pussy that often.

To the Dev Saint, Its good that you're taking in the feedback. I would say don't feel you have to change too much or cater to people's likes and dislikes. Once you start trying to make everyone happy, then nobody is! Do it your way.

Thanks for the feedback !

Indeed, that's what I'm trying to show, a more "realistic" aspect to human bodies (it'll stay that way, if people want perfect bodies there are tons of other games that offer that).

When it comes to asses, something I've realised is that in reality, when it comes to the buttocks, apart with curved poses, it remains rather "flat" (in comparison to all the asses you can see in a lot of games here). The exceptions are women who store abnormally large amounts of fat in their buttocks, sportswomen (the reason I added Maria) or women who have had surgery(the reason I added Veronica bimbofication/demoness).

 

[Reenko24]

Bootstrap to the start of init.init. took 0.00s
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Manufacturer realme model RMX2151
Screen diagonal is 6.1051446923660295 inches.
Version: Ren'Py 8.1.1.23060707
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Android search paths: /storage/emulated/0/JoiPlay/Angel_And_Demon-0.1-pc/game /data/data/cyou.joiplay.renpy/files/private/game /storage/emulated/0/JoiPlay/Angel_And_Demon-0.1-pc/extras
Loaded 6 patches
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Loading error handling. took 0.14s
Loading error handling. took 0.14s

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap
File "renpy/main.py", line 492, in main
File "renpy/script.py", line 310, in load_script
File "renpy/script.py", line 785, in load_appropriate_file
Exception: Could not load from archive core/imagescreens.rpyc.

While loading the script.
Exception: Could not load from archive core/imagescreens.rpyc.


Anyone know why?

 

[Saint_RNG]

Anyone know why?

So you're on Android if I'm not mistaken. When does it happen ?

 

[Reenko24]

So you're on Android if I'm not mistaken. When does it happen ?

Yes,i use joiplay
It happened right before I posted the comment

 

[Saint_RNG]

Yes,i use joiplay
It happened right before I posted the comment

I didn't know what Joiplay was before your post, why are you using that ?
When I meant "when" is it at what point in the game, as soon as you launch it or at a certain point in the story ?

 

[Skylark21]

Yes,i use joiplay
It happened right before I posted the comment

Why would you use joiplay when Android version exists?

 

[Jungkook89]

thx

 

[Rozhok]

@ dev: would love to sub but getting this error

"You have more active subscriptions than a threshold set by this Creator.
To subscribe, please reduce the number of

You must be registered to see the links

. "

 

[Saint_RNG]

@ dev: would love to sub but getting this error

"You have more active subscriptions than a threshold set by this Creator.
To subscribe, please reduce the number of

You must be registered to see the links

. "

I had set a limit of subscriptions per user, so if you supported more than 5 creators you couldn't support me. I've changed this limit to 15 (hope that's enough).
Thanks for your support.

 

[Rozhok]

I had set a limit of subscriptions per user, so if you supported more than 5 creators you couldn't support me. I've changed this limit to 15 (hope that's enough).
Thanks for your support.

Unfortunately it also counts free subscriptions, so I'm actually at 18

 

[Saint_RNG]

Unfortunately it also counts free subscriptions, so I'm actually at 18

It should be fine now (25).

 

[JaszMan]

Demons Corrupting Conservative woman and Angels ensuring they're purity, sign me up. Although even though Having the shy girl get corrupted is neat, watching the demoness infect the Angel also the more the MC sides with the demoness. That would be cool. To see an Angel turn Demon along with the MC,Or the Demoness getting infected by the Angel the more the MC sides with the Angel. Just a thought.

 

[Ciaran8023]

You know, I was pleasantly surprised by this. At first glance it seems to be catered to a very specific type of trope (with the best friend and her "boyfriend") that we've seen so many times and usually poorly done, but the swing into supernatural territory and a corruption/purity focus is a refreshing twist.

Generally solid writing, renders are good and models are well made and realistic, MC might be a bit naive for her age (though I don't doubt that there are people who are this naive) given that they seem to live in a fairly large city and have access to the internet/phones, but not to a point where it's annoying or anything like that.

This is solid thus far, I'll look forward to the updates.

 

[Blurpee69]

Thanks for the feedback !

Indeed, that's what I'm trying to show, a more "realistic" aspect to human bodies (it'll stay that way, if people want perfect bodies there are tons of other games that offer that).

When it comes to asses, something I've realised is that in reality, when it comes to the buttocks, apart with curved poses, it remains rather "flat" (in comparison to all the asses you can see in a lot of games here). The exceptions are women who store abnormally large amounts of fat in their buttocks, sportswomen (the reason I added Maria) or women who have had surgery(the reason I added Veronica bimbofication/demoness).

Just my two cents. I personally really like that she's "plain" to start. She is not ugly, but she isn't the ridiculous paragon of beauty that so many other creators shoot for. And, as I think you hinted at in this comment, the demon and angel can assert some level of physical change over Veronica as they garner more influence over her.

I also really like JaszMan 's suggestion of the angel and the demon changing to match the other as Veronica's personality is solidified one way or another. Although I see how that might become a nightmare down the way as far as programing and dialogue. Definitely an easier said than done task. But as Monstalova said, do your own thing, make yourself happy with the game you create, it might not make everyone happy, but it will at least make someone happy.

 

[Saint_RNG]

As for the Angel/Demoness relationship, there will be no physical change to either of them. As you'll see in the next version, they'll sometimes be against each other, sometimes together against Veronica (for her own good).

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[JaszMan]

As for the Angel/Demoness relationship, there will be no physical change to either of them. As you'll see in the next version, they'll sometimes be against each other, sometimes together against Veronica (for her own good).

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Still cool, yet seeing the Angel's halo change colour to black and or wings change colour to black, shoot even eye colour turn red, would be enough to indicate she has been infected by the demoness, all because Veronica was influenced more by the Demoness and not the Angel. In contrast, if Veronica sides with the Angel, just having the Demoness's eyes change to bright blue, outfits turn white. Just very,very subtle changes, would be a neat twist compared to the game "Zoe's Temptations" where Zoe & her step sister are the only ones who have any physical changes and the Fae and Demon stay the same, except I believe they end up having a hidden affair behind Zoe's back in the Third Act of the Story. Be as it may, What ever the developer decides, this story is amazing, love the concept. The Supernatural,a pinch of horror,female protagonist and Corruption.Awesome

 

[Enlight432]

As for the Angel/Demoness relationship, there will be no physical change to either of them. As you'll see in the next version, they'll sometimes be against each other, sometimes together against Veronica (for her own good).

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I wish the developer didn't include the guardian angel and devil in the story, it would reduce the seriousness of the story
The only flaw of the game is that
the guardian angel and the guardian devil are not compatible with the atmosphere of this game

 

[single_guy_from_au]

do we know when the next episode coming?

 

[Big Black Banana]

Promising. Amazing work and story so far. Great work Saint.

The corruption here and the design of characters are top tier. The more natural in looks is very appealing and then hopefully shapely as she becomes more of a bimbo will be hot to witness (love to see her with a big'ish ass and those sexy droopy breasts slightly enlarged and succulent).

Can't wait to see our girl getting so turned out by the inner demonic voices.

Hoping for a BBC path that has been hinted and strangely curious if there will be Demon sex?.. so the whole batwinged, red/ black eyes, horned and fanged demonic muscular giant type... Don't usually go for demon esque porn game's but wouldn't mind it here. So with everything planned will anything like that be present too? Obviously on a really corrupt path of course and the Demon want's to partake in enjoying her to really show her a good time.