VN Ren'Py Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.5 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

[StrawberryCheese83]

Shouldn t she be able to avoid all of these "things" on the pure Path??? I mean...i get it...i m playing all of the Paths that you offer. Shouldn't there be big differences between the individual paths? I mean, the poor girl is being abused, groped and almost raped on the pure path (gym class)....Also, she is being highly sexually harassed. I get it that this is a game but seriously...this can't be right, can it??? How can this be increased? With gang rape?
Imho....this should be fully avoidable...at least on the Pure Path....

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Front page. At least their honest.
"NOTICE: This game uses "porn-logic" and is not meant to be a serious take on real life. The story is not a romance novel by any stretch and is also meant to poke fun at life and not to be taken too seriously. Please enjoy!":

I am just talking about the different Paths, WR. Don t worry. I don t want to ruin anyones gamefun....at least not yours.

 

[Macinnes]

Front page. At least their honest.
"NOTICE: This game uses "porn-logic" and is not meant to be a serious take on real life. The story is not a romance novel by any stretch and is also meant to poke fun at life and not to be taken too seriously. Please enjoy!":

Well the original version of the game touted it being based on a gal IRL. I played that version then ripped on it as being cringe, so the developer PM'd me. I offered some suggestions then he revised it before this revision, So I'm guessing the story since it hasn't changed much is still based on that gal IRL.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Well the original version of the game touted it being based on a gal IRL. I played that version then ripped on it as being cringe, so the developer PM'd me. I offered some suggestions then he revised it before this revision, So I'm guessing the story since it hasn't changed much is still based on that gal IRL.

No, her looks and body type is based on a girl irl, not the story. It is completely fictional...

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Well the original version of the game touted it being based on a gal IRL. I played that version then ripped on it as being cringe, so the developer PM'd me. I offered some suggestions then he revised it before this revision, So I'm guessing the story since it hasn't changed much is still based on that gal IRL.

Will she ever be able to fight back, at some point??? Best Situation so far : Would you be my Girlfriend?? Yeah..i have never seen you but okay...!

Also at most crucial Scenes, there are no Choices. (molesting; being gropes and so on and so on..)

I cannot stress this enough dear Devs : If your are building and offering Paths...stick to them! (NTR=NTR; cheating=cheating; pure=pure); Thank you!

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Shouldn t she be able to avoid all of these "things" on the pure Path??? I mean...i get it...i m playing all of the Paths that you offer. Shouldn't there be big differences between the individual paths? I mean, the poor girl is being abused, groped and almost raped on the pure path (gym class)....Also, she is being highly sexually harassed. I get it that this is a game but seriously...this can't be right, can it??? How can this be increased? With gang rape?
Imho....this should be fully avoidable...at least on the Pure Path....

Im not going to have her get raped let alone gang raped....

Pure path isn't and was never meant to be a path where nothing happens. What kind of porn game would have nothing happen????

The pure path and other paths is how she chooses to react to the situations she's in, not to dictate what kind of story she'll have.

If the game overview on the main OP didn't persuade you this wasn't your kind of game, then what else do you expect?

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Will she ever be able to fight back, at some point??? Best Situation so far : Would you be my Girlfriend?? Yeah..i have never seen you but okay...!

Also at most crucial Scenes, there are no Choices. (molesting; being gropes and so on and so on..)

I cannot stress this enough dear Devs : If your are building and offering Paths...stick to them! (NTR=NTR; cheating=cheating; pure=pure); Thank you!

I dont think you realize how much work and depth of coding and story writing it would take to have 3 actual paths that arch in completely different directions. If I had a team of devs and all day to work on this game then, sure, id make it that in depth. Be realistic with what you expect from a FREE game man, seriously.

 

[Valronn]

Woohoo waiting for an android port, love this fmc!

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

I don t wanted to step on your feet, really Pal. If i did...i m gonna say i am sorry. Do it your way...just...please...stick with logical consequences in each Path you offer and maybe..just maybe...make Events skippable (no extra Renders needed)... Thats all. At the End....its your decision. If you ever need a Playtester for each Path....i would like to help. Believe me...i am a nitpicker in relation to Gamepaths

 

[status10]

Is the Rework far from covering the content of the old one? Anyone knows?

 

[naurd]

Good update, glad we are getting into action quickly. Love a game that doesn't take itself too seriously while delivering on the faps.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

I don t wanted to step on your feet, really Pal. If i did...i m gonna say i am sorry. Do it your way...just...please...stick with logical consequences in each Path you offer and maybe..just maybe...make Events skippable (no extra Renders needed)... Thats all. At the End....its your decision. If you ever need a Playtester for each Path....i would like to help. Believe me...i am a nitpicker in relation to Gamepaths

I can understand why you would want to skip certain things like the MC getting groped against her will etc., some people play a game and really immerse themselves into the MC, especially those who throw a fit over NTR etc., so I get where you are coming from, who wants to be groped, right? I agree...

Personally, I do not immerse myself into the position of a female protagonist, I look at it more like...I get to control this girl in a mind control sort of angle, and that I get to see her go through the choices that I make for her. But each player is different, so again, I can see why you'd want to avoid you (as the MC) getting groped etc.

That being said, I rarely go through creating my game and basing it off of who may be offended at what. I at least included ways to skip and/or not experience the more extreme stuff, but the stuff you're talking about is part of the overall story of this poor girl who was thrust into a world of overly horny people.

Does my game take it way over the top? Absolutely... but that is part of the not-so-seriousness of it. I'm glad you gave my game a shot, but maybe this isn't the game for you. I do appreciate you pointing out the inaccuracy, I will try to fix that part.

 

[ZeR0Gsod]

Man... That is one of a kind game, really! Love it! Why wouldn't you make an account on patreon or sub? It would get you a ton. And I would pay you, to see more kinkier progress, if I may put this way ))
So, DM me if you are interested.

 

[Macinnes]

No, her looks and body type is based on a girl irl, not the story. It is completely fictional...

OK my bad. It has been a while.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Man... That is one of a kind game, really! Love it! Why wouldn't you make an account on patreon or sub? It would get you a ton. And I would pay you, to see more kinkier progress, if I may put this way ))
So, DM me if you are interested.

I used to have a Patreon and my game got banned. Since then it has become just a passion project of mine. I prefer it this way for personal reasons, but I do appreciate the unpaid kind of support here from the F95 community.

 

[Rake Tyler]

The protagonist's appearance needs to be improved because she has a lot of breasts but little butt, her lower part is very straight

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

DigiurgeCreations, if you are going to put my links in the OP, then just link to my compressed post instead of just taking my links.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

DigiurgeCreations, if you are going to put my links in the OP, then just link to my compressed post instead of just taking my links.

Sorry, didn't know it was that big of a deal? I'm still rather new at running an OP so forgive me for not knowing the way it's supposed to be. I'll link your post. And thanks for the compression btw, much appreciated.

 

[Konca1985]

I will be including an android version for the next update. It'll take a little extra effort but I think there's enough content after the next update to justify the effort.

Hey, it is realized?

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Hey, it is realized?

I am getting an error when building the android port. It may take me awhile to fix this issue.