VN Ren'Py Angst [v0.2] [Falling Bear Studio]

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[Eye-switcher]

Add kinetic tag, there isn't a single choice in this game (except name)

 

[grossegon]

thx

 

[sanguinius95]

Always this feeling of déjà vu

MC = loser
MC = impotent (not necessary, seriously)
MC = MC this, MC that, incapable of satisfying his wife, she'll get hooked on the first bull she tries, MC will look at his wife like a doting puppy, etc... a scenario seen hundreds of times, so much for originality...

An orange rectangle soon?

I hope I'm wrong, but so far, zero backstory.

MC acts like a wimp, really no desire to identify with him, lol.

You'll see that MC will end up being humiliated.(the thing I hate more than anything )

In short, not much hope.

Good luck anyway, DEV, with your game.

Wait & see bro ...

 

[zrm2213133]

ntr?

 

[Danliness]

ntr?

You do know how to read tags and look at game descriptions (overview) right?

 

[SinisterPortal]

just chilling

 

[packard1928]

Fan art ? Or, a preview.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

THX-

Slightly fixed the overview.

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[Saint Blackmoor]

a scenario seen hundreds of times, so much for originality...

This is what I think of when I read these unnecessary comments. A complaint that we've seen a hundred times.

Let's hear your "Original" story, pal. I know you won't even try.

 

[SinisterPortal]

Fan art ? Or, a preview.

it's from the game

 

[Gonzo01]

A good start - looking forward to the next update.
Slightly confused though - Claire only seems to want to go with other men, simply to please her husband, rather than for herself and her own desires. Would like to see some storyline where Claire cheats behind his back occasionally.

 

[DressedToThrill]

Is the angst avoidable? I mean, I don't mind the wife-sharing, that's hot, but I'd rather just relax and chill with my games. There's plenty of dread and turmoil in reality.

 

[rockerdark665]

+1

 

[bradleycooper69]

Is this straightforward happy hot-wife game or can she go outside of her "boundaries" and maybe betray/cheat a bit too?
I'm hoping it's the latter, judging by the game title.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Is the angst avoidable? I mean, I don't mind the wife-sharing, that's hot, but I'd rather just relax and chill with my games. There's plenty of dread and turmoil in reality.

Why don't you go get a beer from the fridge for me, I am parched after banging your wife.

 

[Trasher2018]

This misses a kinetic tag.

Also the game ignores custom names most of the time.

 

[EyeWish1]

I felt the dialogue was a bit of a mess so I re-did the entire script.

Changes made:

1- Spiced up the dialogue but did not alter the dev's vision of the story in any way. It remains 100% in tact.
2- Fixed numerous grammatical errors.
3- Fixed the naming convention errors.
4- Fixed all "Thinking to self" dialogue errors.
5- Added animation to static sex scenes in part 4. The dev must have missed this. It was a very simple fix.

I do not know how to program. All of these corrections were done to the script files.
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To add my scripts simply go to the Game/Scripts folder and overwrite when prompted.

Enjoy!

*Please note that I do this as a hobby. I have not contacted the dev about this.

 

[Pantiless]

A little light on content for a ver. 0.2 release. The story definitely doesn't break any new ground either.
However I'm still here for it. It does a decent job of what it is. Hopefully development continues.

 

[EyeWish1]

A little light on content for a ver. 0.2 release. The story definitely doesn't break any new ground either.
However I'm still here for it. It does a decent job of what it is. Hopefully development continues.

Check out my script changes and let me know if you think it is an improvement.