That was the bit I commented to the dev on and he said he'd fix, but I might have missed some (I told him about using the wrong speaker when meeting Sam in the restaurant, and calling Sam the MMC's name when leaving).
Yeah, a lot of little mistakes. I guess he doesn't have anyone proof read his stuff. I'm already doing it for him, but I have not been able to contact him.
Also, since I am editing all the dialogue I find the "stay at home" text scenes a real pain and kind of dull. I doubt many readers are even taking that route. IMO, he should stop with that and just have Miles follow her on dates or just show the date with a minimal amount of follow up texting.
There's actually more texting dialogue in the new update than actual dialogue.
