VN Ren'Py Anita's Internship [v0.40] [Pigeon Pleasure]

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Progreso del desarrollo del juego:

• Renders : 3655 imágenes (En general)
• Código / Texto : ~24800 líneas (En general)

El día antes de que comience la pasantía (hecho)

Día 1 / Episodio 1 (hecho)

Día 2 / Episodio 2 (hecho)

Día 3 / Episodio 3 (hecho)

Día 4 / Episodio 4 (hecho)

Día 5 / Episodio 5 (hecho)

Día 6 / Episodio 6 (hecho)

Día 7 / Episodio 7 (En progreso...):

• 1) Escena del sueño de Anita (hecho)
• 1a) Reescribió una sinopsis más apropiada de la historia para una mejor comprensión
• 2) Escena de la mañana 1 (hecho)
• 3) Escena de la mañana 2 (hecho)
• 4) Escena de la mañana 3 (~50%)
• 5) Escena de la mañana 4 (~10%)

Importante: El sistema de puntos afectará a Anita en la segunda semana de la pasantía.

Sinopsis :
Anita tiene una oportunidad para asegurar su futuro: una carta de recomendación estelar es su único camino hacia el éxito. Con solo dos semanas para demostrar su valía en su pasantía, debe adaptarse rápidamente a los desafíos de un nuevo lugar de trabajo mientras navega por el delicado equilibrio de la vida familiar. Su ya tensa relación con su madre se complica aún más con la presencia de la pareja de su madre, y de su hijo, una variable inesperada en la turbulenta vida de Anita. Anita debe elegir cuidadosamente en quién confiar y dónde encontrar puntos en común, ya que cada decisión podría dar forma a su futuro. A medida que el trabajo y la vida familiar se vuelven más complicados, Anita debe lidiar con desafíos difíciles, tensiones familiares ocultas y la presión de probarse a sí misma. ¿Se adaptará y seguirá adelante, o el peso de la realidad la aplastará antes de que tenga la oportunidad del futuro que anhela desesperadamente?
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[Ssato243]

nice thanks cant wait

 

[morpheus1987]

following

 

[L7Bear]

Not sure if I'm still catching up on past versions or the current version, but I'm on Page 26 of my saves and am loving the game.

I've got a lot of notes to cover later, but wanted to jump on here now to mention one thing in particular:
Both David's ballet career and Walter's marriage and relationship with his daughter were the result of unrelated car accidents.
Mostly I'm mentioning this because it's something I've caught myself doing too often in my own writing - I come up with a compelling event for one character's background, and come up with a compelling event for another character's background, and then several weeks later realize I used the same type of unrelated compelling events for two characters.

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I hate the portrayal of "Mongo" so far. Especially now that they've become a recurring character.
I don't know if there is some authentic representation that this is portraying, but to me it seems 1/3rd "

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[PigeonPleasure]

Not sure if I'm still catching up on past versions or the current version, but I'm on Page 26 of my saves and am loving the game.

I've got a lot of notes to cover later, but wanted to jump on here now to mention one thing in particular:
Both David's ballet career and Walter's marriage and relationship with his daughter were the result of unrelated car accidents.
Mostly I'm mentioning this because it's something I've caught myself doing too often in my own writing - I come up with a compelling event for one character's background, and come up with a compelling event for another character's background, and then several weeks later realize I used the same type of unrelated compelling events for two characters.

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I hate the portrayal of "Mongo" so far. Especially now that they've become a recurring character.
I don't know if there is some authentic representation that this is portraying, but to me it seems 1/3rd "

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" from Blazing Saddles and 2/3rds

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Thank you for your interest in the game and for your great analysis of the story!

Edit 1:
I reread your comment several times and decided that if you took the time to analyze it so thoroughly, you deserve to hear the logic behind how I developed the storyline. In the scene after the ballet performance, Anita has a conversation with David. Anita can ask some information about every employee in the company. David is the director of the company, a mature person with an analytical mind. To hide the real truth, he lies about being in a car accident, because global car crash statistics are excessively high, and I wanted to reflect that aspect in this scene (especially considering the car accident involving the character Walter). Also, David’s character is already used to hiding behind that kind of statistic, supposedly You analyzed and engaged with the story very well, and I am sincerely grateful for that — it means a lot to me! I agree that having both stories (David's and Walter's) involve car accidents might seem like poor taste to some extent, but from my subjective perspective, it’s not critical, because the real situation with David is actually a bit different

Edit 2:
It's a pity that the character Mongo irritates you, but on the other hand, if he provoked some kind of emotion or reaction in you, maybe that's not such a bad thing )) As a fellow writer - creator, I think you can understand what I mean here And by the way, I wish you good luck with your own creative work! Thanks again for your detailed comment!

 

[samar69]

when is the next version coming??

 

[PigeonPleasure]

when is the next version coming??

Thank you for your interest in the game. I'm trying to do my best to develop it as quickly as my mental strength allows, considering the ongoing war...




It's very, very, very not that easy to think in terms of the blue segment of the "Maslow's" pyramid when you're in the orange segment — hearing the buzzing of a Shahed drone flying past your house almost every night...

 

[PickleSteve]

Thank you for your interest in the game. I'm trying to do my best to develop it as quickly as my mental strength allows, considering the ongoing war...


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It's very, very, very not that easy to think in terms of the blue segment of the pyramid when you're in the orange segment — hearing the buzzing of a Shahed drone flying past your house almost every night...

Stay safe and strong, my dude. Take your time, your country and you are working miracles. May all evils that beset you be defeated sooner rather than later.

 

[Papayaz]

Thanks and stay safe

 

[samar69]

Thank you for your interest in the game. I'm trying to do my best to develop it as quickly as my mental strength allows, considering the ongoing war...


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It's very, very, very not that easy to think in terms of the blue segment of the pyramid when you're in the orange segment — hearing the buzzing of a Shahed drone flying past your house almost every night...

Stay safe. And btw this is on my goated list, it is such a great game, especially anita our mc and her scenes with the main investor.

 

[Skeeve]

"Anita's Internship" [V 0.45]
When will it be freely available?

 

[PigeonPleasure]

"Anita's Internship" [V 0.45]
When will it be freely available?

Thank you for your interest. The game will be freely available after going through all the circles of patreon's tiers. ~In about three weeks.

 

[DZE]

so, whats new in the update?

 

[Skeeve]

Anita, where are you?
Please upload

 

[Skeeve]

We need a hero

 

[samar69]

We need a hero

it's available for free on patreon if you just login

 

[Deckmaster]

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