VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.17] [DeepSleep]

[Dessolos]

Hello, I'm quite confused right now. When I started playing, the scene immediately began in the hospital and someone was shot. Am I missing something? Should I play the chapter 1 first?

yeah you need to play Ch 1 to understand the story best and what's going on with Anna. ( there is a fan made Renpy version). The actually story of it doesn't get really going till the end and all of Chapter 2 imo. Ch 1 is more about building up Anna's character rather than the story

 

[88stanford88]

Hello, I'm quite confused right now. When I started playing, the scene immediately began in the hospital and someone was shot. Am I missing something? Should I play the chapter 1 first?

you have to start with CH1
if you are not used to RPGM games and you want to be more fast I have linked you the renpy version of CH1

https://f95zone.to/threads/8482/

 

[Drake_McCoy]

There's so many links where do i even start?

 

[zero8_4]

you have to start with CH1
if you are not used to RPGM games and you want to be more fast I seffest you the renpy version of CH1 in the link

https://f95zone.to/threads/8482/

Thanks!
I'm actually fine with RPGM, but if Renpy version is much then is the version complete? Is RPGM version have anything different from Renpy version, or it's just "visual novel"?

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Can definitely guarantee that this next update is going to be hell lot of boring like the previous one!

Andrew, Benjamin are over the top vanilla characters and we would not get to see corruptive side of Anna or any other character corrupting Anna!

Benjamin is hardly a vanilla character. Gerontophilia is a specific sexual kink, and both Alfred and Benjamin are there for people interested in this. And since Andrew is going to play a big part in one of the main paths, the Devs can't simply ignore him, just because you or others find him boring. He's not one of my favourite characters either. But having committed themselves to pathways where Anna and Andrew will stay together, it's obvious that some updates are going to involve content, which progress those pathways forwards.

 

[L0b0ts]

I was financially supporting the RPGM version of the game back in the day because it was that good. The whole thing about cucking her boyfriend while he is in a coma in hospital with his Dad was my idea.

 

[88stanford88]

And since Andrew is going to play a big part in one of the main paths, the Devs can't simply ignore him, just because you or others find him boring. He's not one of my favourite characters either. But having committed themselves to pathways where Anna and Andrew will stay together, it's obvious that some updates are going to involve content, which progress those pathways forwards.

Fantastic surprise, you deserve my heart of appreciation. i see that you finally realized that Anna and Andrew are not going to be separated and that as you mistakenly said in this post...

God knows why you're banging on about scholarships, what does that have to do, with what we're talking about?They're not together full stop. And those early statements to the contrary, at the beginning of Chapter 1, Old Church and Hard Exam have now been superceded. And that's official, no matter what you want to believe.

CH1 , Old Church, HardExam and Christmas Gift, either will ever be "outdated" or "obsolete" because they ALL contain the real personality of the character Anna and her relationship with her boyfriend since they were in high school.
At the beginning of chapter 1 it is clearly stated.
The Deep reason to use College instead High School is very clera to me: since there are rules prohibiting the publication of illustrated scenes containing explicit sexual intercourse between minors.., if not Deep would take an immediate Patreon BAN!
and the reason why I still beat on the fact that HardExam and Christmas Gift are centered on the fact that Anna has to take the scholarship that as is known all over the world in the united states there are stringent rules to get a state scholarship and those rules include the fact that no such scholarship has to be applied for, before you turn 18 and it is only pie students who have a very high grade in all subjects to get it... in fact promising basketball players have special privileges and high school where principals try to get them high grades- -
- high school sports teams are a stepping stone for those who want to join professional teams and increase el high school notoriety. ..

Hard Exam and Christmas Gift are not "superceded" (??) my translator corrected this word to "outdated" but i was responding to your specific question for trying to explain you where my "logic" take place for the simple reason that all chapters and novels are still connected with the CH2 that is in developing. Also Deep recently release the part 3 of HardExam although he continues to remain vague about the character Anna's early age (for obvious reasons).

There are very popular TV series where it is clear that scholarship can be get only at High School and he does that to avoid Patreon Ban but in Hard Exam due to the scholarship he story takeplace in High School for sure!

it is very strange that you never responded to me in the high school topic by highlighting this point to me...I expected you to close this topic using this logical way, because avoiding patreon ban is the most logical response!

At the time of Anna's First Time, Anna has yet to meet Andrew. She doesn't even know he exists. Because they only meet later at college. Which in all probability means originally they were living in different towns.

At the Time of Anna's First Time Deep said that the story was not in the canon of the main story
and at that time
khantus wrote to me this https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-ch-2-ep-17-deepsleep.2689/post-10413265

It is clear that Deep wanted at least Anna's first time to be tender and romantic, all the kinky stuff is in the two chapters of the main story, but also Deep could have given the player the option to choose with whom Anna would lose her virginity, if with the grandfather by staying at home with him and that would lead to rough sex or with the motorcycle guy as it happens in the short novel, although that would have taken more time.

Regarding the story, Deep commented that there would be certain modifications to the story of the short novel, but I honestly don't think that will happen.

and here there is one who voted

This is simply my opinion, but I think most of the people who voted for Anna's first time (myself included) was thinking about something completely different. I mean, look how far she went. Before this novel we already knew about the farm and her grandfather, so when I voted for it I was thinking about something more "dirty", like a hidden side of Anna which comes to light after her accident. Her grandpa taking her flower (obviously) or selling it to one of his friends for paying a poker debt, a bully at school, ... Idk why we get this "vanilla" thing.

And here another one

I was also very disappointed, such a disappointment from this game I did not expect, you could come up with so much and we got so banal and vanilla story that I want to vomit

About "Anna's First Time"

the Devs can't simply ignore him, just because you or others find him boring. He's not one of my favourite characters either. But having committed themselves to pathways where Anna and Andrew will stay together, it's obvious that some updates are going to involve content, which progress those pathways forwards.

here you finally admit that Andrew is not your favorite character and this makes me believe that it was you who started this crusade to break the story between Anna and Andrew....
I will never play this path and it was disrespectful that the developer did not allow me to choose at what marks my path with whom Anna was to lose her virginity... bc for me she has already been deflowered by her alcohol-addicted father

The only logical explanation of introducing a new character that never existed in any of the chapters and other short novels is that Deep decided to add a path where Anna abandons Andrew because at some point she will meet David which for those who do not want Andrew like you, leads to a happy ending for Anna

That short novel needs to be revised before the endings otherwise Anna's Firs time remains an episode out of the mainstream chapters of the short novels published before CH2

to conclude here is my suggestion on how to edit the plot of Ann's First Time to connect it to the main story without having to make choices si who should be her first boyfriend.

https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-ch-2-ep-17-deepsleep.2689/post-10450368

Spoiler: Anna First Time revision to fit with all the main path of the game (author is 88stanford88)

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There really isn't anymore to say on the matter. So I suggest we all give it a rest.

The only not logical event is that Hard Exam take place in high school but we can agree that since there are rules prohibiting the publication of illustrated scenes containing explicit sexual intercourse between minors, Deep thought it best to write in Hard Exam and in the CH1 intro; Anna had sex in college (although in reality with an alcohol-addicted father and motherless for sure real-life logic dictates that the father has already tried to dip his "cookie" in Anna's vagina long before she went to college

I agree to you. NOW after that my previous answer to your post was deleted... there really isn't anymore to say on the college-high-school topic
Deep wrote "college" just to avoid Patreon BAN!(as many other developers do!)
Hope the case is now closed for real

and i hope this post will not be deleted as the one that is still visible in the DD3DD funny replay. This time I haven't posted real actresses from "Little Pretty Lairs"

 

[88stanford88]

Benjamin is hardly a vanilla character. Gerontophilia is a specific sexual kink, and both Alfred and Benjamin are there for people interested in this. And since Andrew is going to play a big part in one of the main paths, the Devs can't simply ignore him, just because you or others find him boring. He's not one of my favourite characters either. But having committed themselves to pathways where Anna and Andrew will stay together, it's obvious that some updates are going to involve content, which progress those pathways forwards.

I have waited a long time for such a precise post from you and that is why I gave you my heart-like in your post from me
I am finally agreeing with you!

 

[RecklessOG]

Benjamin is hardly a vanilla character. Gerontophilia is a specific sexual kink, and both Alfred and Benjamin are there for people interested in this. And since Andrew is going to play a big part in one of the main paths, the Devs can't simply ignore him, just because you or others find him boring. He's not one of my favourite characters either. But having committed themselves to pathways where Anna and Andrew will stay together, it's obvious that some updates are going to involve content, which progress those pathways forwards.

Then why Andrew got introduced during last few updates when he could have been brought back to life way early in chp 2?Why just NOW?He was just brought back out of nowhere and that means Anna's fun with Dr shcimdt is over now!

I agree with Alfred and Alfred is overall very good character but Benjamin is just homeless old snob with no other intention of love towards and Anna and only has lust factor in him

 

[RecklessOG]

The upcoming dinner with Benjamin,future picnic is just giving me beating around the bush vibes to Updates!

There are still lot of important paths not progressed yet like with mayor,taxman,Dr schimdt yet latest update contains boring scenes with those petty drug dealer boys,lame bar scene,movie date with boys was also boring

 

[ShadowTower456]

I hope that in addition to Alfred in the update following the one that will be released there will be this meeting that we were talking about at the beginning of 2024 with Jeff. If I think about all the updates this year, most of them have been boring unfortunately

 

[88stanford88]

Then why Andrew got introduced during last few updates when he could have been brought back to life way early in chp 2?Why just NOW?He was just brought back out of nowhere and that means Anna's fun with Dr shcimdt is over now!

Early?
Do you have any idea how few days it has been since Andrew was shot in CH1 and that from the next day CH2 starts and Andrew has been in a coma at the hospital for about ten days or more?
Perhaps Deep is failing to impress upon you the time that has passed since Chapter 1 and that Anna had to raise tens of thousands of dollars to pay for the various surgeries required to save him...

I believe it hasn't been a month yet sine the end of CH1, and Andrew has only been returning to at home for 4/5 days

I have not counted the days that have passed since the beginning of chapter 2 but I think it is less than a month since it started

I'm sure Zara will be more precise in the day of the end of Ep17... the full CH1 was 28/29 days of story if i remember well

I have problem to unpack RPA files in my version of MacOs so I cannot check how many days are in CH2

I agree with Alfred and Alfred is overall very good character but Benjamin is just homeless old snob with no other intention of love towards and Anna and only has lust factor in him

Not in my path
Here Benji gets Anna fucked by two old homeless men to save himself from 'losing a clock he had stolen... and Anna saves him have sex intercorse with the two bums

There are still lot of important paths not progressed yet like with mayor,taxman,Dr schimdt yet latest update contains boring scenes with those petty drug dealer boys,lame bar scene,movie date with boys was also boring

Surely Anna will fuck them with all those you mentioned and with many she has already done so ... aand Andrew never notices anything ...
in my opinion there is nothing boring...instead this story is full of funny situations that will lead Anna to be the empress of Sun City

I really suggest you to play the CH1

 

[doccop63]

Fantastic surprise, you deserve my heart of appreciation. i see that you finally realized that Anna and Andrew are not going to be separated and that as you mistakenly said in this post...

CH1 , Old Church, HardExam and Christmas Gift, either will ever be "outdated" or "obsolete" because they ALL contain the real personality of the character Anna and her relationship with her boyfriend since they were in high school.
At the beginning of chapter 1 it is clearly stated. View attachment 4218388
The Deep reason to use College instead High Schoòò is very clera to me: since there are rules prohibiting the publication of illustrated scenes containing explicit sexual intercourse between minors.., if not Deep would take an immediate Patreon BAN!
and the reason why I still beat on the fact that HardExam and Christmas Gift are centered on the fact that Anna has to take the scholarship that as is known all over the world in the united states there are stringent rules to get a state scholarship and those rules include the fact that no such scholarship has to be applied for, before you turn 18 and it is only pie students who have an very high in all subjects to get it in fact promising basketball players have special privileges and high school principals try to get them high grades- -- high school sports teams are a stepping stone for those who want to join professional teams and increase el high school notoriety. ..

Hard Exam and Christmas Gift are not "superceded" (??) my translator corrected this word to "outdated" but i was responding to your specific question for trying to explain you where my "logic" take place for the simple reason that all chapters and novels are still connected with the CH2 that is in developing. Also Deep recently release the part 3 of HardExam although he continues to remain vague about the character Anna's early age (for obvious reasons).

There are very popular TV series where it is clear that scholarship can be get only at High School and he does that to avoid Patreon Ban but in Hard Exam due to the scholarship he story takeplace in High School for sure!

it is very strange that you never responded to me in the high school topic by highlighting this point to me...I expected you to close this topic using this logical way, because avoiding patreon ban is the most logical response!

At the Time of Anna's First Time Deep said that the story was not in the canon of the main story
and at that time
khantus wrote to me this https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-ch-2-ep-17-deepsleep.2689/post-10413265

and here there is one who voted

And here another one


About "Anna's First Time"

here you finally admit that Andrew is not your favorite character and this makes me believe that it was you who started this crusade to break the story between Anna and Andrew....
I will never play this path and it was disrespectful that the developer did not allow me to choose at what marks my path with whom Anna was to lose her virginity... bc for me she has already been deflowered by her alcohol-addicted father

The only logical explanation of introducing a new character that never existed in any of the chapters and other short novels is that Deep decided to add a path where Anna abandons Andrew because at some point she will meet David which for those who do not want Andrew like you, leads to a happy ending for Anna

That short novel needs to be revised before the endings otherwise Anna's Firs time remains an episode out of the mainstream chapters of the short novels published before CH2

to conclude here is my suggestion on how to edit the plot of Ann's First Time to connect it to the main story without having to make choices si who should be her first boyfriend.

https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-ch-2-ep-17-deepsleep.2689/post-10450368

Spoiler: Anna First Time revision to fit with all the main path of the game (author is 88stanford88)

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The only not logical event is that Hard Exam take place in high school but we can agree that since there are rules prohibiting the publication of illustrated scenes containing explicit sexual intercourse between minors, Deep thought it best to write in Hard Exam and in the CH1 intro; Anna had sex in college (although in reality with an alcohol-addicted father and motherless for sure real-life logic dictates that the father has already tried to dip his "cookie" in Anna's vagina long before she went to college

I agree to you. NOW after that my previous answer to your post was deleted... there really isn't anymore to say on the college-high-school topic
Deep wrote "college" just to avoid Patreon BAN!(as many other developers do!)
Hope the case is now closed for real

and i hope this post will not be deleted as the one that is still visible in the DD3DD funny replay. This time I haven't posted real actresses from "Little Pretty Lairs"

Dude, Quit spamming the thread! Play it the way you want and feel. This thread doesn't need a professorial tutelage on why you believe what a character should or Shouldn't be or how the dev should write or re-write his own story! FCS man, this isn't a NY Times best-seller story, it's a porn-themed game. Porn stories have Never made sense. The eroticism is Always more important than the story. Are there some games that have been well written? Sure but most Aren't. Quit making this more than it is, FGS.

 

[Travis72]

Dude, Quit spamming the thread! Play it the way you want and feel. This thread doesn't need a professorial tutelage on why you believe what a character should or Shouldn't be or how the dev should write or re-write his own story! FCS man, this isn't a NY Times best-seller story, it's a porn-themed game. Porn stories have Never made sense. The eroticism is Always more important than the story. Are there some games that have been well written? Sure but most Aren't. Quit making this more than it is, FGS.

Couldn't agree more. When I realized that some members ( we know who they are ) turned this thread in a long and boring discussions about nothing ( at least Seinfeld is funny ), the only way is start to ignore them, as I did.

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Does anyone have the latest Version (VN with Bugfix, from Oct. 12th)?? This Version in here is bugged....

 

[RecklessOG]

The upcoming dinner with Benjamin,future picnic is just giving me beating around the bush vibes to Updates!
Even the comic fest with Timothy was random, out of nowhere type of idea

There are still lot of important paths not progressed yet like with mayor,taxman,Dr schimdt yet latest update contains boring scenes with those petty drug dealers,lame bar scene

Early?
Do you have any idea how few days it has been since Andrew was shot in CH1 and that from the next day CH2 starts and Andrew has been in a coma at the hospital for about ten days or more?
Perhaps Deep is failing to impress upon you the time that has passed since Chapter 1 and that Anna had to raise tens of thousands of dollars to pay for the various surgeries required to save him...

I believe it hasn't been a month yet sine the end of CH1, and Andrew has only been returning to at home for 4/5 days

I have not counted the days that have passed since the beginning of chapter 2 but I think it is less than a month since it started

I'm sure Zara will be more precise in the day of the end of Ep17... the full CH1 was 28/29 days of story if i remember well

I have problem to unpack RPA files in my version of MacOs so I cannot check how many days are in CH2


Not in my path View attachment 4219464
Here Benji gets Anna fucked by two old homeless men to save himself from 'losing a clock he had stolen... and Anna saves him have sex intercorse with the two bums


Surely Anna will fuck them with all those you mentioned and with many she has already done so ... aand Andrew never notices anything ...
in my opinion there is nothing boring...instead this story is full of funny situations that will lead Anna to be the empress of Sun City

I really suggest you to play the CH1

Have played CHP 3 thrice and it was way better in terms of storyline than CHP 2

And regarding Andrew I don't care how many days he was in coma but Dr schimdt said thath he would need Anna for teaching medical studies to students and now Since andrew is back in business that means the deal between de schimdt and Anna is over!
How is this possible when Dr schimdt said himself that he is going to need Anna more

 

[RecklessOG]

By bringing back Andrew,Dev has broken his own game because Dr schimdt was going to continue experiments with Anna,
Then how could andrew come back from coma so early when Dr schimdt's path wasn't even finished?

 

[Dessolos]

By bringing back Andrew,Dev has broken his own game because Dr schimdt was going to continue experiments with Anna,
Then how could andrew come back from coma so early when Dr schimdt's path wasn't even finished?

yeah I thought it was odd how quickly she got the money for him on that path. Made more sense on the other tho that was still a bit to fast as well imo. It kind of felt like Andrew's recovery / surgery is a bit rushed to bring back into the story sooner.

I would of loved the option to not help him out cause I don't care about him at all and find he gets in the way from the fun scenes.

 

[88stanford88]

Dr schimdt said thath he would need Anna for teaching medical studies to students and now Since andrew is back in business that means the deal between de schimdt and Anna is over!

From what do you deduce that the new offer Dr. Schmidt gave Anna about student teaching is related to Andrew?
The doctor's offer is still the same as the one he makes to Anna when she agrees on “method” of payment for the cost of surgical procedures for Andrew

Andrew is back, but Anna has a deal with the doctor worth $20000 for the surgeries and subsequent tests needed to make sure everything went well. in EP 16 Andrew has to undergo a CT scan and Anna accompanies her beloved boyfriend.
Maybe you use the sandbox version?
As I have said many times using sandbox games does not help to reshoot the scenes and you easily forget the plot
--this causes confusion and does not allow you to focus on the story and you start complaining about events disconnected from the story plot

here is what happens in the previous episode:

Anna is for sure an impeccable woman... but after the doctor turns on the CT machine. Dr.Schmidt reminds Anna that the pact she agreed to have with the doctor for get the big discount to pay for the surgical expenses is not yet finished (she is paying almost nothing so she can't refuse her agreement she takes with him at the start of the game).
And that's why I always say to prefer the VN version because those who (like you) use sandbox version are not able to stay focused on the story and....
you are very wrong when you say you don't care how many days have passed since the beginning of CH2.
The time passing is a very important part to understand that Anna was corrupted since the high School/Collega days.

Here is what happens during the Andrew check up at the Hospital

A little break just to suggest you to read the dialogues in this very funny scene:
The doctor is testing Anna's body reaction in public, exposing her to an audience of students as she is sexually stimulated by objects and hands touching and penetrating her; actually, the doctor is researching Anna's nymphomania. And this makes a lot of sense with CH1

Anna is for sure a nymphomaniac but she is also trilled and aroused if Andrew can caught her

Anna is very hot with herperfect hairstyle here

Anna has an agreement with Dr Schmidt and must accept everything he asks of her as long as the doctor wants to

I just want showtheend of this scene .. I think is important...

At the end of the session Anna puts her clothes back on, but being a provocative woman and always aroused so she lets the nipple aoreole be seen for the pleasure of the men watching her... wow she is stunning as hell

you are wrong here Andrew... She knows everything... she does it on purpose

she said ....Sorry, but not sorry

By bringing back Andrew,Dev has broken his own game because Dr schimdt was going to continue experiments with Anna,

Deep didn't break anything at all - I think you're the one breaking the story on insignificant little sandboxes

Then how could andrew come back from coma so early when Dr schimdt's path wasn't even finished?

Andrew come back home bc the doctor is a great doctor but the agreement between Anna and Dr.Schmidt is not finished... She will fuck with all the students in future episodes... Anne have to pay for her debts to the doctor...
Andrew has nothing to do with the doctor... Dr.Schmidt is now only Anna business!
and
Good doctors induce the coma if the condition is severe to avoid suffering the patient and to prevent him from posing with a sudden movement to aggravate his injury.

At the end, everything you said about the presentation that Anna makes to the doctor's students is totally untrue because in the previous episode Anna is arranged with the doctor.

I can only excuse you because I know you use to sandbox version... and if not you are just super wrong and you have no ability to understand what is clearly written in the dialogue in the game

Instead... I with each new episode start playing a little earlier because the VN version allows me to see if the whole story is well written.
I maintain that Deep is doing a great job and the plot is developed consistently and becomes more interesting each episode!
Don't forget to always stay focused in the entirety of the plot...from chapter 1 to today to me it really feels like a beautiful erotic story!
I think I have explain you evry point of your questions... and at this point....

I want to thank you this developer for his very well done job!
He is writing a great story!

Thanks to DeepSleep!

 

[RecklessOG]

From what do you deduce that the new offer Dr. Schmidt gave Anna about student teaching is related to Andrew?
The doctor's offer is still the same as the one he makes to Anna when she agrees on “method” of payment for the cost of surgical procedures for Andrew

Andrew is back, but Anna has a deal with the doctor worth $20000 for the surgeries and subsequent tests needed to make sure everything went well. in EP 16 Andrew has to undergo a CT scan and Anna accompanies her beloved boyfriend.
Maybe you use the sandbox version?
As I have said many times using sandbox games does not help to reshoot the scenes and you easily forget the plot
--this causes confusion and does not allow you to focus on the story and you start complaining about events disconnected from the story plot


Anna is for sure an impeccable woman... but after the doctor turns on the CT machine. Dr.Schmidt reminds Anna that the pact she agreed to have with the doctor for get the big discount to pay for the surgical expenses is not yet finished (she is paying almost nothing so she can't refuse her agreement she takes with him at the start of the game).
And that's why I always say to prefer the VN version because those who (like you) use sandbox version are not able to stay focused on the story and....
you are very wrong when you say you don't care how many days have passed since the beginning of CH2.
The time passing is a very important part to understand that Anna was corrupted since the high School/Collega days.

A little break just to suggest you to read the dialogues in this very funny scene:
The doctor is testing Anna's body reaction in public, exposing her to an audience of students as she is sexually stimulated by objects and hands touching and penetrating her; actually, the doctor is researching Anna's nymphomania. And this makes a lot of sense with CH1



Anna has an agreement with Dr Schmidt and must accept everything he asks of her as long as the doctor wants to View attachment 4222102




she said ....Sorry, but not sorry


Deep didn't break anything at all - I think you're the one breaking the story on insignificant little sandboxes

Andrew come back home bc the doctor is a great doctor but the agreement between Anna and Dr.Schmidt is not finished... She will fuck with all the students in future episodes... Anne have to pay for her debts to the doctor...
Andrew has nothing to do with the doctor... Dr.Schmidt is now only Anna business!
and
Good doctors induce the coma if the condition is severe to avoid suffering the patient and to prevent him from posing with a sudden movement to aggravate his injury.

At the end, everything you said about the presentation that Anna makes to the doctor's students is totally untrue because in the previous episode Anna is arranged with the doctor.

I can only excuse you because I know you use to sandbox version... and if not you are just super wrong and you have no ability to understand what is clearly written in the dialogue in the game

Instead... I with each new episode start playing a little earlier because the VN version allows me to see if the whole story is well written.
I maintain that Deep is doing a great job and the plot is developed consistently and becomes more interesting each episode!
Don't forget to always stay focused in the entirety of the plot...from chapter 1 to today to me it really feels like a beautiful erotic story!
I think I have explain you evry point of your questions... and at this point....

I want to thank you this developer for his very well done job!
He is writing a great story!

Thanks to DeepSleep!

First of all stop spamming the thread with long msgs!U can keep them short to let everyone understand
And second,how did u decide that I have played sandbox only?I have never played sandbox version of CHP 1 ever and u made a judgement?
And the explanation u gave for andrew coming back out of comma is lame!How can such miracle happen? People don't tend to come out of comma even for many years,then how did Andrew come back?
And the debt which Anna owes is ok but Dr schimdt clearly had the intention plotting even more before Andrew could come back from comma.I think its just a fake reason given by Deepsleep to bring back Andrew in game & Anna actually owes more than $20000