About misterday's review.
Thank you Deep, i never thought you will respond my review.
Yeah, Rebecca next action with Anna would be against Patreon rules, but maybe if Rebecca was in same room with Anna, but she only watch Anna on couch, without joining sex scene with her sister, i think that's not against the Patreon rules, right?
The Bar scene in every updates always bring us unexpected event. From striptease and then Anna lay down at Bar desk. I liked it. Even if i read carefully, everytime Anna comes to work at Bar, she never happy or enjoy doing nasty things.
Perhaps, changing Anna's emotion at Bar will be your big homework. How could she willingly accepting her boss's task?
I think, next big problem is not how Anna & Andrew will react at last scene, but what will happen after that, is it will make a big impact to whole story? And how you're fans will react with your decision?