- May 5, 2017
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I have to echo some of the sentiment here that this started out great but then really took a turn for the worse.
The renders look good, the model is interesting and her sister is hot. Great!
However, towards the end some of the same old clichés and illogical nonsense came popping up.
1) the fat/big-boned boss that acts like a complete asshole. In reality no-one would want to work for him, especially since Anna just got a job AND has been offered additional work by her sister's boyfriend. With her boyfriend looking for a job there is no direct need to work for someone that acts so angrily before she's even hired!
In addition; why would we want to fuck him? We play as Anna, why would I want to see her have sex with him? He's a cunt, there's no motivation for me to please him.
2) the flatmate that acts like a complete asshole. The story makes it seem like he and the boyfriend are good mates. So why does he turn out be a giant creeper/asshole/worst friend the first time we 'meet' him? He sets up a webcam because his flatmate doesn't pay the rent? I know there's such a thing as 'porn logic' but this is pretty fucked up. Again, we're introduced to a character that we kinda have to hate from the start. There's nothing likeable about this person. He's not funny, friendly, a good friend/neighbour, so why do we want to fuck him?
3) the reason to both the questions above is of course 2 fold; one, this is an adult game and if we don't say 'yes' we don't get any scenes. And reason number two is... they have big dicks! Giant cocks! etc. God this has to be the biggest cliché around; any girl will do anything if you just have a big dick. Doesn't matter if you have 0 personality, if your a giant asshole. If you have a penis bigger then her boyfriend then it's all good. And of course her boyfriend, with whom she has seemingly amazing sex, has the smallest penis around.
This is not just poor writing, it's also really boring. Every game does this and it's painful to see a potential good game fall down the same old narrative. It's perfectly possible for the boyfriend to have a big dick and Anna can still cheat on him anyway. Perhaps to reward a favor, perhaps to gain a favor, perhaps because her boyfriend ignores her, perhaps because the other guy is funny/sweet, perhaps because she is drunk. Or because just had a life-threatening accident and decides to go 'yolo' time to have fun while I still can etc.
Might sound like I hate the game. I don't, that's why I felt compelled to write this post. I would just like this to be a better 'Lily of the Valley', not a slightly better 'Sarah's Life'. A game with interesting characters that we want to see together, characters that we want to see fucking each other. A game that doesn't rely on the cliché humiliation and blackmail arguments for sex.
Hopefully the next update will improve on this.
The renders look good, the model is interesting and her sister is hot. Great!
However, towards the end some of the same old clichés and illogical nonsense came popping up.
1) the fat/big-boned boss that acts like a complete asshole. In reality no-one would want to work for him, especially since Anna just got a job AND has been offered additional work by her sister's boyfriend. With her boyfriend looking for a job there is no direct need to work for someone that acts so angrily before she's even hired!
In addition; why would we want to fuck him? We play as Anna, why would I want to see her have sex with him? He's a cunt, there's no motivation for me to please him.
2) the flatmate that acts like a complete asshole. The story makes it seem like he and the boyfriend are good mates. So why does he turn out be a giant creeper/asshole/worst friend the first time we 'meet' him? He sets up a webcam because his flatmate doesn't pay the rent? I know there's such a thing as 'porn logic' but this is pretty fucked up. Again, we're introduced to a character that we kinda have to hate from the start. There's nothing likeable about this person. He's not funny, friendly, a good friend/neighbour, so why do we want to fuck him?
3) the reason to both the questions above is of course 2 fold; one, this is an adult game and if we don't say 'yes' we don't get any scenes. And reason number two is... they have big dicks! Giant cocks! etc. God this has to be the biggest cliché around; any girl will do anything if you just have a big dick. Doesn't matter if you have 0 personality, if your a giant asshole. If you have a penis bigger then her boyfriend then it's all good. And of course her boyfriend, with whom she has seemingly amazing sex, has the smallest penis around.
This is not just poor writing, it's also really boring. Every game does this and it's painful to see a potential good game fall down the same old narrative. It's perfectly possible for the boyfriend to have a big dick and Anna can still cheat on him anyway. Perhaps to reward a favor, perhaps to gain a favor, perhaps because her boyfriend ignores her, perhaps because the other guy is funny/sweet, perhaps because she is drunk. Or because just had a life-threatening accident and decides to go 'yolo' time to have fun while I still can etc.
Might sound like I hate the game. I don't, that's why I felt compelled to write this post. I would just like this to be a better 'Lily of the Valley', not a slightly better 'Sarah's Life'. A game with interesting characters that we want to see together, characters that we want to see fucking each other. A game that doesn't rely on the cliché humiliation and blackmail arguments for sex.
Hopefully the next update will improve on this.
- May 4, 2017
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@Okatra , some people are in to humiliation and rape. They don't want to have sex with those bad characters, they want them to abuse the innocent female protagonist. Also making likable characters and realistic sex scenes is difficult. And writing doesn't seem to be this dev's strong side.
- Dec 17, 2016
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This another exploited female story where the MC, who is dumb as rocks,
gets tricked or coerced into sex by everyone and the whole time you're left like
they got me again?
- Apr 29, 2017
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I have to agree on that part, I'll never understand how all these games where the MC likes being abused only because of the big dicks, it's a joke.
Hi,
Thank you for your thoughts.
1) As for the new boss, there is and will be further options to not fall into his hands, there will be even an option to have a revenge on him and player won't lose any further scenes, as Anna will move and change regardless. He is for those, who like and want's such a character in the game.
2)I might have made something wrong about flatmate in the story, but they are not best friends, Annas boyfriend has also moved to the city and that is just some old friend, not his best mate.
3) You don't have to say yes to everyone, to see later scenes. You can say no the boss and still have scenes with others later. There might be some different routes, to make it more interesting, but she will still move on with her sexual growth. I want it that way because I understand that people won't like all the characters in the game.
And there are and will be more good guys, who will get into her panties differently without blackmail or humiliation.
As for dicks, he has a normal size dick and some people even favour it, that not everyone has enormous cocks. His flatmate is just an asshole, that's why he talks like that.
- Jul 2, 2017
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I totally agree. Seems to be heading to another boring story of dumb girl fucked for everyone. But this road can still be avoided, I hope so because the CGs are very good.Edit: Thank you @
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for your answer. I see you have great ideas. I hope you will make a good game.
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I think you're doing a very good job! For that it is your first game, you make that really good! The story is really good! Anna needs this job and can not afford to lose that job. Of course you can not make 100% realistic stories! Otherwise, Anne would simply go to the police and the game would be over! And Anna is clever, has already been proven, at the test! I hope you do not lose the desire for the game! Most people do not know how hard it is to create such a game! So stay with it and do not let go down! Because for me this is by far the best game in this category!
- May 19, 2017
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You know how when you buy a DVD and try to play it, but you get 4fps, and the video quality sucks because the disk is all DRMed, encrypted, fucked and unplayable, so you go and pirate the movie instead? Yeah, this latest release is like that. Glitchy, laggy and crashy, because the dev encrypted and re-encrtpted everything which just makes good things turn to shit. As if RPG maker didn't have enough problems already, this just ruins the game.
Maybe some helpful pirates will fix those problems, if the dev doesn't do it him/herself.
Maybe some helpful pirates will fix those problems, if the dev doesn't do it him/herself.
Oh. Sorry to hear. First I used enigma, so the game is in one discreet .exe file, but I dropped it when someone complained that BitDefender is blocking it. So now it's just regular encryption that everyone uses and this is the first time I hear it's Glithy, laggy and crashy. If encryption does that, then I might drop that one too.