VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.18] [DeepSleep]

[khantus]

John's scene was exceptionally naughty because they were doing it right next to a sleeping Andrew. Not in a coma this time, so he could have woken up and discovered them very easily. John was off his head, and therefore not exactly fully aware of the possible consequences of what they were doing. If Andrew had caught them, it would have been much worse for him than Anna. Since the version of Anna that takes part in that scene, is very likely the one that will ultimately leave him, and probably already made that choice in the last update. Whereas John risks losing his relationship with his son, which is important to him. What that scene demonstrated, is how far Anna is now addicted to pleasure. She's prepared to risk more and more for that added taboo thrill. And that's why that scene required such high corruption to see it.

And the mayor's scene was all about the ass to mouth. Pushing Anna to degrade herself even more. Maybe there was no fucking, but it was equally thrilling to see her doing this and kind of enjoying it. You just know eventually, that she's going to end up loving being degraded, as all true subs do. And this scene is a taste of what's to come, with Anna being seduced into more and more depravity, with the promise of financial reward.

The beach scene was just one long tease. I bet everyone thought she was going to get fucked by all those young guys at the end? It's obvious that's what will happen eventually, probably with Anna getting high on weed beforehand. But that scene perfectly illustrates how exhibitionist and slutty she's become. How comfortable she really is with public nudity and naughtiness, even if she still tries to pretend she's not.

The line at the end, where she says how much she enjoys pleasuring people. I think that's what that scene was really about. Sex is no longer just about getting pleasure for Anna, it's becoming her mission and perhaps even her purpose in life?

Excellent review of the latest update.

 

[Latex224]

Weekly Update

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Hello, dear Patrons!

Finally a progress update for the next release and some comments about the previous release!

I have received a lot of comments about the previous update. Both good feedback and some critics as well. I understand that there has been too few sexual scenes in the previous update, but some times it's needed, so it doesn't turn out into just straight fuckfest. There has been only a few releases with a small amount of sexual content and it's not a regular thing. Anyway, the next one will have enough naughty content, but no mindless porn all around.

As for the next release. I have already finished the conclusion of Timothy's cosplay scene and it turned out very interesting, with Andrew somewhere around plotting something on his own with the help of Ashley.

There will also be a scene with Dr. Schmidt in the next update. We know what agreement with Anna was
Anna will also go to the restaurant owner with Taxman to talk about further takeover.
Info about other scenes coming soon. I'm Still finalizing them.

Thank you again for your amazing support!

Sincerely yours,

Deep

Thanks 4 the share khantus

 

[DD3DD]

Actually, she was also sunbathing there nude, when Steve, Donny and Rocco met her for the first time. It's the obvious place, being tucked just behind the beach bar, in amongst some palm trees.

That scene was a playful set-up for future content. It was deliberately intended to tease the players, making them think Anna was going to fuck with all of them. Even using the same location as that threesome with Timothy and Diane to tease us even more. I also suspect the bit at the end could have a deeper meaning as well?

I didn't mind it, but making it a re-hash of the meeting she had with Micheal in Chp. 1 instead of something new like I mentioned, felt like a waste of potential.

 

[Digga D]

We need more scenes with Anna and John fucking around next to Andrew's dumbass. Like last update in the bed, or the hospital scene when he was comatose.

Something like sucking John off then kissing Andrew afterward, just more stuff that insults or degrades Andrew

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Weekly Update

View attachment 3462280

Hello, dear Patrons!

Finally a progress update for the next release and some comments about the previous release!

I have received a lot of comments about the previous update. Both good feedback and some critics as well. I understand that there has been too few sexual scenes in the previous update, but some times it's needed, so it doesn't turn out into just straight fuckfest. There has been only a few releases with a small amount of sexual content and it's not a regular thing. Anyway, the next one will have enough naughty content, but no mindless porn all around.

As for the next release. I have already finished the conclusion of Timothy's cosplay scene and it turned out very interesting, with Andrew somewhere around plotting something on his own with the help of Ashley.

There will also be a scene with Dr. Schmidt in the next update. We know what agreement with Anna was
Anna will also go to the restaurant owner with Taxman to talk about further takeover.
Info about other scenes coming soon. I'm Still finalizing them.

Thank you again for your amazing support!

Sincerely yours,

Deep

I wonder if this means that Anna and Timothy as fuck buddies is coming to an end? Cos it seriously looks like Timothy is going to finally get a girlfriend. And Anna surprisingly for once, is not getting jealous of another girl moving in, on one of her men. It really seems like she wants Timothy and Felicia to become an item.

I must admit, when I first saw Felicia, I thought she was the prostitute from the Park, because she could be her identical twin.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

We need more scenes with Anna and John fucking around next to Andrew's dumbass. Like last update in the bed, or the hospital scene when he was comatose.

Something like sucking John off then kissing Andrew afterward, just more stuff that insults or degrades Andrew

Well that's gonna happen in the next update with Anna, Timothy and Felicia having some naughty fun in the toilet cubicle, while Andrew talks with Ashley just outside. No doubt Ashley will guess who's really in the cubicle, whilst Andrew will be once more totally oblivious.

I think this is going to become a thing, with Anna taking more and more outrageous risks, doing naughty things which Andrew might discover. Deep down maybe there's a part of her, that wants him to? I just keep going back to those three choices Anna had, regarding her future with Andrew, and what they really meant. The top and bottom one, were fairly obvious, but what about the middle one? I think that one (stay with Andrew, but acknowledge that only others can give her sexual pleasure) could lead to a possible open relationship? And I'm guessing that would be for her, more than him. So maybe, just maybe, that's the cuck route, some people have asked about in the past? Just a wild guess at present, but what else could it be for?

 

[DD3DD]

Well that's gonna happen in the next update with Anna, Timothy and Felicia having some naughty fun in the toilet cubicle, while Andrew talks with Ashley just outside. No doubt Ashley will guess who's really in the cubicle, whilst Andrew will be once more totally oblivious.

I think this is going to become a thing, with Anna taking more and more outrageous risks, doing naughty things which Andrew might discover. Deep down maybe there's a part of her, that wants him to? I just keep going back to those three choices Anna had, regarding her future with Andrew, and what they really meant. The top and bottom one, were fairly obvious, but what about the middle one? I think that one (stay with Andrew, but acknowledge that only others can give her sexual pleasure) could lead to a possible open relationship? And I'm guessing that would be for her, more than him. So maybe, just maybe, that's the cuck route, some people have asked about in the past? Just a wild guess at present, but what else could it be for?

But hasn't Andrew already seen her with the Taxman (whoever went that route), so I think Andrew is not going to be oblivious from here on, and maybe the choice of him being jealous/angry/disappointed or turned on should become a choice imho.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

But hasn't Andrew already seen her with the Taxman (whoever went that route), so I think Andrew is not going to be oblivious from here on, and maybe the choice of him being jealous/angry/disappointed or turned on should become a choice imho.

Yeah, he did. But he didn't recognise her. Just like he was unable to recognise her, when she was standing on the stage in the cosplay event, right in front of him. Ashley knew it was her straight away, even with the veil covering her face. Andrew's instincts told him, that the person on the stage was his girlfriend. But he doesn't believe that Anna is that kind of a girl, so he disregarded what his eyes were telling him. And the same thing happened with the Taxman. He believes that Anna is still the pure girl who he fell in love with. And that's why it's so easy for him, to ignore the evidence of his own eyes. Anybody else but Andrew, would have worked it out by now. He just is, that dumb.

That's why Anna was like, how could Andrew have sussed out Carl? Because he's just so unobservant where she's concerned.

But I think he will find out eventually. Just not anytime soon.

 

[DD3DD]

Yeah, he did. But he didn't recognise her. Just like he was unable to recognise her, when she was standing on the stage in the cosplay event, right in front of him. Ashley knew it was her straight away, even with the veil covering her face. Andrew's instincts told him, that the person on the stage was his girlfriend. But he doesn't believe that Anna is that kind of a girl, so he disregarded what his eyes were telling him. And the same thing happened with the Taxman. He believes that Anna is still the pure girl who he fell in love with. And that's why it's so easy for him, to ignore the evidence of his own eyes. Anybody else but Andrew, would have worked it out by now. He just is, that dumb.

That's why Anna was like, how could Andrew have sussed out Carl? Because he's just so unobservant where she's concerned.

But I think he will find out eventually. Just not anytime soon.

Ughh... that's just bad character development. I really think giving the player the choice of Anna seeing Andrew spying on her through the gap on the stall and then letting them decide if his reaction is Sad/Cucked or Turned On/Sharing Fetish would be a nice place to take the character.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Ughh... that's just bad character development. I really think giving the player the choice of Anna seeing Andrew spying on her through the gap on the stall and then letting them decide if his reaction is Sad/Cucked or Turned On/Sharing Fetish would be a nice place to take the character.

It's not bad character development at all. My theory is just that. The cuck idea is an extremely hypothetical scenario at present, which the Devs have never suggested is going to happen. So if he's not going to be cucked, why would they do it? Until if/when that becomes an option, nothing like that is going to happen. Because that would be giving the game away, and if there's one thing we know about Deep, he doesn't give anything but the vaguest clues of what's going to happen in the future.

In the first choice, where Anna decides to split up with him, she does say, but I don't need to say anything until I decide to cut and run. And the clear indication of that, is nothing is going to change between her and Andrew for some considerable time. Andrew's purpose in this game, has always been to be the guy she cheats on. Deep told us this years ago. He's always been clear about that. And as such, he cannot find out the truth about Anna. Andrew was created to be the fall guy. And until Awake joined as a joint Dev, that was all he was going to be. Deep fully intended to have Anna dump him eventually. But Awake persuaded him, to give Andrew an ending with Anna. So that will be the vanilla ending probably. And if he was to find out now, well that couldn't happen. He'd have to have, two completely different Andrew paths. One where he knew, and one where he didn't. And that would delay things, and the last thing we want is anymore unnecessary delays.

So just in terms of practicality, I don't think it would be sensible to do what you suggest.

I'm not saying it wouldn't be an interesting idea, it's just the extra time it would take, to duplicate Andrew's scenes.

 

[DD3DD]

It's not bad character development at all. My theory is just that. The cuck idea is an extremely hypothetical scenario at present, which the Devs have never suggested is going to happen. So if he's not going to be cucked, why would they do it? Until if/when that becomes an option, nothing like that is going to happen. Because that would be giving the game away, and if there's one thing we know about Deep, he doesn't give anything but the vaguest clues of what's going to happen in the future.

In the first choice, where Anna decides to split up with him, she does say, but I don't need to say anything until I decide to cut and run. And the clear indication of that, is nothing is going to change between her and Andrew for some considerable time. Andrew's purpose in this game, has always been to be the guy she cheats on. Deep told us this years ago. He's always been clear about that. And as such, he cannot find out the truth about Anna. Andrew was created to be the fall guy. And until Awake joined as a joint Dev, that was all he was going to be. Deep fully intended to have Anna dump him eventually. But Awake persuaded him, to give Andrew an ending with Anna. So that will be the vanilla ending probably. And if he was to find out now, well that couldn't happen. He'd have to have, two completely different Andrew paths. One where he knew, and one where he didn't. And that would delay things, and we don't want anymore unnecessary delays.

So just in terms of practicality, I don't think it would be sensible to do what you suggest.

Sorry, I meant to say character arc, since Andrew is sticking around now.

 

[Digga D]

Ughh... that's just bad character development. I really think giving the player the choice of Anna seeing Andrew spying on her through the gap on the stall and then letting them decide if his reaction is Sad/Cucked or Turned On/Sharing Fetish would be a nice place to take the character.

You can't expect real character development and good writing in a female protagonist corruption porn game. All of them have porn logic with characters doing stupid actions etc., for the sake of lewd scenes.

This is what 99% of players are here for when playing this type of game, they just want to make the FMC as slutty as possible and view as many sex scenes, no matter how it happens or the logic behind it. They don't take the writing and characters seriously, as they should.
(I think the only FMC corruption game that has decent writing and takes itself somewhat seriously is AWAM, in later updates.)

 

[pedrogz]

You can't expect real character development and good writing in a female protagonist corruption porn game. All of them have porn logic with characters doing stupid actions etc., for the sake of lewd scenes.

This is what 99% of players are here for when playing this type of game, they just want to make the FMC as slutty as possible and view as many sex scenes, no matter how it happens or the logic behind it. They don't take the writing and characters seriously, as they should.
(I think the only FMC corruption game that has decent writing and takes itself somewhat seriously is AWAM, in later updates.)

A couple duet of love is good too

 

[Dustyride]

I am an avid tester of these games and usually can spot where the game is going .I am all for reading what the character is saying in the game ,but I noticed that some games are just novels .It can be very boring when scrolling through 30 pages of conversation without any action .I usually turf those games .I like to play the game instead of reading a novel .

 

[Dustyride]

The game keeps crashing .I get this message every time ...
line 898, in execute
raise Exception("Sayer %s is not a function or string." % self.who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer b'j' is not a function or string.

 

[Caboose88]

The game keeps crashing .I get this message every time ...
line 898, in execute
raise Exception("Sayer %s is not a function or string." % self.who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer b'j' is not a function or string.

I don't mind corruption games with some reading as long as the choices actually mean different paths. this game is starting to bounce around to much though.. the bar scenes were hot with the open crowd watching but those are gone... i don't care for the Alfred scenes or timothy either. somehow my save got messed up because i got rid of jermy but he is back in the update for me

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I don't mind corruption games with some reading as long as the choices actually mean different paths. this game is starting to bounce around to much though.. the bar scenes were hot with the open crowd watching but those are gone... i don't care for the Alfred scenes or timothy either. somehow my save got messed up because i got rid of jermy but he is back in the update for me

Just because the last episode in the Bar was somewhat different, doesn't mean Anna performing for the crowd is gone for good. I'm pretty certain there'll be more scenes of the type you like in the future.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

You can't expect real character development and good writing in a female protagonist corruption porn game. All of them have porn logic with characters doing stupid actions etc., for the sake of lewd scenes.

This is what 99% of players are here for when playing this type of game, they just want to make the FMC as slutty as possible and view as many sex scenes, no matter how it happens or the logic behind it. They don't take the writing and characters seriously, as they should.
(I think the only FMC corruption game that has decent writing and takes itself somewhat seriously is AWAM, in later updates.)

AWAM never delivered what it appeared to promise early in the game. All the good writing in the world doesn't make up for a total lack of action in adult games. Adult games are about sex scenes, and an adult game without sex scenes is pointless.

 

[Digga D]

AWAM never delivered what it appeared to promise early in the game. All the good writing in the world doesn't make up for a total lack of action in adult games. Adult games are about sex scenes, and an adult game without sex scenes is pointless.

I agree with you but that doesn't rebuke my point. The sex scenes and writing are mutually exclusive imo. AWAM still has decent writing for a corruption game. In fact, the slow-burn and lack of immediate sex scenes just makes the corruption a little more believable and realistic, by FMC porn game standards.

Of course it should have a lot of sex scenes, its the main reason we play adult games especially FMC corruption, hence why I prefer Anna overall. But I'm more invested in AWAM's characters and storylines. I like them for different reasons basically.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I agree with you but that doesn't rebuke my point. The sex scenes and writing are mutually exclusive imo. AWAM still has decent writing for a corruption game. In fact, the slow-burn and lack of immediate sex scenes just makes the corruption a little more believable and realistic, by FMC porn game standards.

Of course it should have a lot of sex scenes, its the main reason we play adult games especially FMC corruption, hence why I prefer Anna overall. But I'm more invested in AWAM's characters and storylines. I like them for different reasons basically.

I don't mind slowburn. But there's not enough progression in AWAM. It's advancing at a snail's pace, rather than slowly. At the present rate of progress, Sophia will be an old woman before she does anything remotely naughty. I agree the standard of writing is high, but I just find it a very frustrating game.