Ren'Py Apartment #69 [v0.08] [Luxee]

[Bartlett]

wow this was a lacking update.

"Millie content" - lump of texts with one portrait of millie being shown as texts go by. Mind you, not like changing photos or anything, just two selfies. Solid content right there.

Yeah I'll have to agree on that, that felt cheap. That barely takes any time to produce since all you need is one render of the MC in bed and two of Millie's selfies - even the text is typical text message speak so it's all shorthand and the scenes are pretty short besides.

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Overall I'll echo the complaints on this being way too short for the wait. I understand these things take time with rendering and all, but come on - the actual sexual content is down to a bare minimum and one of the scenes is just the MC ranting to Heather.

We're still not even done with the main character introductions in 0.04. That, to me, speaks of a bloated cast but also a rather glacial pace on the storytelling side. I don't mind most of the girls, but I feel like we could've done with less. That way maybe the arcs wouldn't stall out for months on end while the story focuses on some other girl because there's not enough time to give every girl something in each update.

The worst part is, I'm not sure we'll even get to knowing Heather and meeting Yui next update if Luxee does what I figure he will and puts all his attention on the incest arc with maybe more development for Nea (fallout from the lunch scene) and some for the black girl since she hasn't been around for a while.

I like the game, I like the writing (the incest subplot is a little bit too unbelievable at times but it's tolerable enough) for the most part, but it's really looking like one of those games you only check out once a year right about now. Which is a shame to me because it definitely has some interesting and original ideas and the girls are pretty cute.

 

[Ariostebaldo]

Apartment69-0.04-pc-"censored" What is censored?

Thank’s for the new Update.

It's because...

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[raykun]

Not Worth to download it atm...
not much new Content just a bit of text

 

[Thedude715]

Wow that was short my last save was dated february and the content took sub 10 minutes to get through.
What was new was nice I suppose but man..

 

[JiraiyaSennin]

Ah ah ah .... I was already about to ask "It went from update 2 to v0.4 in a flash" and then it was a "different" Apartment

 

[Badjourasmix]

if he keeps treating the teacher like that....fuck that shit...
I might even consider stop playing it...
He goes from sweet guy/honorable guy to cunt in 0.1 sec.....
EDIT : The scene with Suki and Teacher made fucko sense to me...

I think he acts that way with the teacher because she has a kink for that kind of stuff. It didn't bother me that much but it would be cool if in the future we got the option to treat her better.

 

[Havik79]

Yep, I agree with pretty much most people's opinions, too many girls, too short, too little content, WTF while I laughed at it, WTF has never spoken to her but she lets us piss on her.
Although I would add, disappointing no Eve content, and it is ironic the focus is on NEa, she has more balls than the MC does,
how much fucking longer with this, wishy-washy attitude as to if he wants to dick her, just fucking man up, or just move on.

 

[Kenfield]

this update has less than 6 minutes of play time if u got trans content off. lame.

 

[BTLD]

I think he acts that way with the teacher because she has a kink for that kind of stuff. It didn't bother me that much but it would be cool if in the future we got the option to treat her better.

yes , she has a kink...but unfortunatelly there was no time to develop the trust in order to act that way,
2nd of all that kind of behaviour should have stopped the minute they started leaving
3rd of all he was quite happy for how he behaved
4th of all they continued to make fun of teacher even after she wasn't present ..so ...what was the benefit of that?
5th of all the expression we saw on the teacher was not one of fullfilment ..."I'm so happy to be treated like this...yes humiliate me more please" nothing like that...in fact the last expression we see on the teacher is not one of ..extasy or release ...it's one of sadness....
so..no that scene was utter shit...shittiest scene I've seen in this game....
MC went from totally likable character who protected the weak , stand up to the bullies ...to...a cunt...

 

[Canto Forte]

Some gurls you just cannot get unless you dominate right out the park.
She gives hints and MC takes the leap of faith ...
MC feels that way, it was written as that, locked classroom, she comes on to him,

it wasn't playfull since they were boasting after they left the classroom
also the expression of the teacher,....it was clear she was not ...comfortable with what he has done...
it was a shit scene only to cater to dom/sub players I guess
And even if it was made for that reason it was done retarded ...because it had no time to develop the relationship dom/sub
it was pure shit.....
He acted like that to impress Suki?the fuck?
that scene...I just can';t express how out of place and retarded was.

I think he acts that way with the teacher because she has a kink for that kind of stuff. It didn't bother me that much but it would be cool if in the future we got the option to treat her better.

Unless he gets into that act, no play time 4 him .. gurls need time to get hot and heavy,
that kind of fore play got her in the mood to have her fantasy fulfilled.
Talking about the scene with teach and MC in a locked class room .. is that it?

 

[BTLD]

Some gurls you just cannot get unless you dominate right out the park.
She gives hints and MC takes the leap of faith ...
MC feels that way, it was written as that, locked classroom, she comes on to him,



Unless he gets into that act, no play time 4 him .. gurls need time to get hot and heavy,
that kind of fore play got her in the mood to have her fantasy fulfilled.

look..I can understand the first scene...
but at the end she talks with MC and tells her that she is happy and even before opening her mouth and saying she is happy and whatnot you can see the expressions ...so it's good

The 2nd scene which involved bitchass Suki....makes absolutely no fucking sense...
and it's clear that teacher is not comfortable in that position...

 

[Canto Forte]

Oooo ... I see .. in that case ...

yes , she has a kink...but unfortunatelly there was no time to develop the trust in order to act that way,
2nd of all that kind of behaviour should have stopped the minute they started leaving
3rd of all he was quite happy for how he behaved
4th of all they continued to make fun of teacher even after she wasn't present ..so ...what was the benefit of that?
5th of all the expression we saw on the teacher was not one of fullfilment ..."I'm so happy to be treated like this...yes humiliate me more please" nothing like that...in fact the last expression we see on the teacher is not one of ..extasy or release ...it's one of sadness....
so..no that scene was utter shit...shittiest scene I've seen in this game....
MC went from totally likable character who protected the weak , stand up to the bullies ...to...a cunt...

look..I can understand the first scene...
but at the end she talks with MC and tells her that she is happy and even before opening her mouth and saying she is happy and whatnot you can see the expressions ...so it's good

The 2nd scene which involved bitchass Suki....makes absolutely no fucking sense...
and it's clear that teacher is not comfortable in that position...

Me and teach are going into some other nekkid classroom, lock up and spend the night,
erhm .. rekindling our kinky situational relationship ... I cannot afford to lose this bombshell.

 

[PyoT]

Typically people would probably just take the "toilet and detention" scene as porn-logic, but in this game you get long lectures about how people are wrong about trans people and how to be more mindful about how to treat them and how your action can be hurtful even when you don't mean them to be and so on ...

... and then you get a completely toxic and inappropriate display on how BDSM is supposed (not) to work. It just doesn't fit, especially in such close proximity (and, yes, the game also got other questionable bits, but questionable as they are, they do err on the side of consent and mutual appreciation).

That scene needed the protagonist to take the teacher aside and quickly check with her on whether she's okay with this. Or a build up scene where they talk about what they want to do. Something. Then it's all good; play out some humiliation fantasy.

Now, it's work in progress. For all we know next scene with the teacher is her revealing that it was planned all along; or the teacher actually being pissed off and the protagonist learning from his mistake. Or maybe the scene just slipped in for progress reasons and there'll be retrospective build up. Or nothing of that and ultimately it'll just be a few scenes that sorta stick out and the rest is still fine. Who knows.

I do however think it's fair to have some mixed feelings about the scene (including the toilet part, kink or no kink) as it is.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Can we all at least agree that the mom is awesome?

 

[Pantisocrat]

Or maybe the scene just slipped in for progress reasons and there'll be retrospective build up.

IIRC it's this.

 

[BTLD]

Can we all at least agree that the mom is awesome?

the mom is not awesome..she's almost unique!
love that character

 

[tigerdiamond]

To get on my pedant bicycle for a moment, there is an Incest Patch, while it may remove the censorship that's not necessarily a given from the name since we don't know what's been censored from the description (as far as I could see).

To steal your pedant bike, once you're on this site for more than 5 min you should understand that if a game is "censored" in anyway without having the censored tag and has a patch, then the patch will solve the problem.

 

[tigerdiamond]

it is nice the way he made Nea
but on the other hand ..game crashed and burned with the 2nd Teacher scene , the one with Suki...that was...just out of character and downright... idiotic...

I loved that scene, so to each their own

 

[Tavi13]

Sooooo am I on a FBI watchlist now?

If you were not already on one, what have you even done with your life????

 

[Ghostface Reborn]

Ah, it's always fun seeing (allegedly) straight dudes enlightening everyone about what gay people like. One would have thought that some kind of hands-on experience is needed for that much insight.

Maybe everyone should stick to talking about their individual likes instead of playing armchair sex-ed and talking on behalf of entire groups (that they aren't even a part of).

okay... fine. i'll allow a trans girl to settle this:

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